2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从求职受挫到价值觉醒：父亲的独特教导 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从求职受挫到价值觉醒：父亲的独特教导 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Dear Jenny, I am really sorry to tell you that you didn’t get the position this time. The interviewers had a discussion about you. You have a very good experience, but you are not qualified for this position. The journalist we want is to communicate with people from walks of life, so you should be more sociable and more energetic. So, sorry.” Actually, such was not quite new to Jenny and this was the third time that she had been rejected for a job position after her graduation from university as a top student. Overwhelmed (淹没) with sadness, she lifted her hands to cover her face. Her heart was broken with self-doubt whether she was never good enough to fit in with the highly competitive adult world. It seemed that the excellence she displayed at school was nothing but illusion. “Maybe I should quit applying for that demanding job,” Jenny whispered to herself. 4 4 续写原文 Sensing something wrong, Jenny’s father, James, said to his daughter, “Congratulations on your graduation, and time to enjoy your youth. In celebration of your new life, I’d like to give you something special. Here is a car that I acquired many years ago. But before I give it to you, take it to the used car lot downtown and tell them you want to sell it and see how much they offer you.” Unwilling as Jenny was, she went to the used car lot and they offered her only one thousand dollars because the car looked very worn out. With that offer, she returned back to her father and out of her expectation, this time her father told her to take this car to a pawnshop (当铺). Confused, Jenny went to the pawnshop where they should have offered her ten thousand dollars as her father’s car looked a little bit old to them. “Maybe it is a perfect deal!” thought Jenny. But then, the father advised his daughter to keep trying and go to a car club and show them the car. The daughter took the car to the club, and then, breathtakingly, something magic happened. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1: People there willingly offered one hundred thousand dollars for the same car. Paragraph 2: Wearing a satisfied smile, James said, “They identified it as an expensive car.” 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 珍妮是一名大学优等生，然而毕业后求职却屡屡碰壁，这已经是她第三次被拒绝。这次面试官告知她虽然有不错的经验，但因不够善于社交和缺乏活力，不符合记者岗位的要求。珍妮倍感悲伤，陷入自我怀疑，甚至想放弃申请这种高要求的工作。珍妮的父亲詹姆斯察觉到女儿的异样，为庆祝她毕业，决定送她一份特别的礼物 —— 一辆多年前购置的车。不过，在正式把车送给她之前，父亲让她先把车开到市中心的二手车行，看看能卖多少钱。珍妮虽不情愿，但还是照做了，二手车行因车看起来破旧，只出价一千美元。出乎珍妮意料的是，父亲又让她把车送到当铺，当铺出价一万美元。之后，父亲又建议她把车开到汽车俱乐部，神奇的事情发生了。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Paragraph 1: People there willingly offered one hundred thousand dollars for the same car. 汽车俱乐部里的人们毫不犹豫地为这辆同样的车出价十万美元。珍妮刚把车开进汽车俱乐部的大门，就引起了一阵不小的骚动。原本在俱乐部里聊天、交流的人们纷纷停下手中的事情，目光被这辆车吸引了过来。他们快步走到车旁，脸上露出惊喜和兴奋的神情。几个资深的汽车爱好者蹲下身子，仔细地查看车的底盘，还有人打开引擎盖，研究起发动机的构造。其中一位戴着眼镜的先生，拿着专业的工具，对车的各个部件进行了详细的检测。经过一番热烈的讨论和评估，他们一致认定，这是一辆非常罕见的古董车，具有极高的收藏价值。一位穿着讲究的男士走上前来，微笑着对珍妮说：“小姑娘，我们愿意出十万美元买下这辆车，你看怎么样？” 珍妮简直不敢相信自己的耳朵，她瞪大了眼睛，结结巴巴地说：“十…… 十万美元？真的吗？” 得到肯定的答复后，珍妮激动得手都在颤抖，她立刻拿出手机，拨通了父亲的电话。“爸爸，你绝对想不到，他们竟然愿意出十万美元买这辆车！” 珍妮在电话里兴奋地喊道。父亲在电话那头笑着说：“我就知道会是这样，你先回来吧。” 珍妮带着满心的喜悦和疑惑，开着车回到了家。 10 10 续写思路分析 Paragraph 2: Wearing a satisfied smile, James said, “They identified it as an expensive car.” 詹姆斯脸上带着满意的笑容，说：“他们认出这是一辆名贵的车。” 他拉着珍妮的手，让她坐在沙发上，语重心长地说：“孩子，你看，同样的一辆车，在不同的地方，遇到不同的人，得到的评价和价值截然不同。在二手车行，那些人只看到了车破旧的外表，就轻易地给它定了一个很低的价格；在当铺，虽然他们看出车有一些价值，但也没有真正挖掘出它的潜力；而在汽车俱乐部，那些懂行的人，凭借他们的专业知识和眼光，发现了车的真正价值。你也是一样，你在学校里那么优秀，有着丰富的知识和潜力。前几次面试失败，并不是因为你不够好，而是那些面试官没有真正发现你的闪光点。你就像这辆车，需要找到真正欣赏你、懂得你的价值的人。所以，不要因为几次的挫折就放弃，要相信自己，继续努力去寻找适合你的机会。” 珍妮听着父亲的话，眼中的迷茫渐渐消散，取而代之的是坚定的光芒。她重重地点了点头，说：“爸爸，我明白了，我不会再轻易放弃了。” 从那以后，珍妮重新振作起来，带着自信和勇气，继续踏上了求职的道路。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 People there willingly offered one hundred thousand dollars for the same car. As soon as Jenny drove the car into the car club, it caused quite a stir. People who were chatting and communicating in the club stopped what they were doing immediately, and their eyes were attracted by the car. They walked quickly to the car, with surprise and excitement on their faces. Several senior car enthusiasts squatted down and carefully checked the chassis of the car, and someone opened the hood to study the structure of the engine. A man wearing glasses took professional tools and conducted a detailed inspection of various parts of the car. After a heated discussion and evaluation, they unanimously determined that this was a very rare antique car with extremely high collection value. A well - dressed man came forward and said to Jenny with a smile, "Little girl, we are willing to offer one hundred thousand dollars to buy this car. What do you think?" Jenny could hardly believe her ears. She widened her eyes and stammered, "One... one hundred thousand dollars? Really?" After getting an affirmative answer, Jenny was so excited that her hands were shaking. She immediately took out her phone and dialed her father's number. "Dad, you can't imagine. They are willing to offer one hundred thousand dollars for this car!" Jenny shouted excitedly on the phone. Her father smiled on the other end of the phone and said, "I knew it would be like this. You come back first." With full of joy and confusion, Jenny drove the car back home. 13 13 范文呈现 Wearing a satisfied smile, James said, "They identified it as an expensive car." He took Jenny's hand and let her sit on the sofa, then said earnestly, "My child, you see, the same car has completely different evaluations and values in different places and in front of different people. In the used car lot, those people only saw the shabby appearance of the car and easily set a very low price for it. In the pawnshop, although they saw that the car had some value, they didn't really tap into its potential. In the car club, those knowledgeable people, with their professional knowledge and vision, discovered the true value of the car. You are the same. You were so excellent in school, with rich knowledge and potential. The previous interview failures were not because you were not good enough, but because those interviewers didn't really discover your shining points. You are like this car. You need to find people who truly appreciate you and understand your value. So, don't give up easily because of a few setbacks. Believe in yourself and keep working hard to find the right opportunities for you." Listening to her father's words, the confusion in Jenny's eyes gradually dissipated, replaced by a determined light. She nodded heavily and said, "Dad, I understand. I won't give up easily anymore." From then on, Jenny cheered up again and continued to embark on the job - hunting journey with confidence and courage. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 People there willingly offered one hundred thousand dollars for the same car. The moment Jenny drove the car into the car club, it set off a considerable commotion. People who had been chatting and mingling in the club instantly halted their activities, their eyes irresistibly drawn to the vehicle. They rushed towards the car, their faces beaming with surprise and excitement. Several seasoned car enthusiasts squatted down, meticulously examining the car's chassis, while another individual popped the hood to delve into the engine's inner workings. A bespectacled gentleman, armed with professional tools, carried out a comprehensive inspection of every component of the car. After an animated discussion and thorough evaluation, they unanimously concluded that this was a highly rare antique car of exceptional collectible value. A well - attired man stepped forward, smiling at Jenny and saying, "Little girl, we're willing to offer you one hundred thousand dollars for this car. What do you say?" Jenny was dumbfounded. Her eyes widened in disbelief, and she stammered, "One... one hundred thousand dollars? Really?" Upon receiving an affirmative response, Jenny was so elated that her hands trembled uncontrollably. Without hesitation, she whipped out her phone and dialed her father's number. "Dad, you won't believe it! They're offering one hundred thousand dollars for the car!" Jenny exclaimed excitedly over the phone. Her father chuckled on the other end, saying, "I knew it would turn out this way. Come on back." Filled with a mixture of joy and curiosity, Jenny drove the car back home. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Wearing a satisfied smile, James said, "They identified it as an expensive car." Taking Jenny's hand gently, he guided her to sit on the sofa and then spoke earnestly, "My dear, you see, the same car can receive vastly different appraisals and values depending on the place and the people it encounters. In the used car lot, those individuals merely focused on the car's shabby exterior and hastily assigned it a meager price. In the pawnshop, though they recognized some value in the car, they failed to fully unearth its potential. However, in the car club, those with professional knowledge and discerning eyes, leveraging their expertise and acumen, uncovered the car's true worth. You're no different. You were outstanding in school, brimming with knowledge and potential. The previous interview rejections weren't due to your inadequacy; rather, it was because those interviewers were unable to spot your unique qualities. You're like this car, requiring someone who truly appreciates and understands your value. So, don't let a few setbacks discourage you. Have faith in yourself and keep striving to find the right opportunities. " As Jenny listened intently to her father's words, the confusion in her eyes gradually faded away, replaced by a resolute glint. She nodded firmly and said, "Dad, I get it. I won't give up so easily anymore." From that moment on, Jenny rallied her spirits and resumed her job - hunting journey with newfound confidence and courage. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$