2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：暖心警察：为男孩圆警察主题生日派对梦 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 暖心警察：为男孩圆警察主题生日派对梦 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on. After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party-he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons. Allen's mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room? He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it. 4 4 续写原文 Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That's when he decided to save the day--he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. "We like to be involved in our community. It's not just about enforcing(执行)the law. We like to be there in the good times as well, "he explained to Rachel. On the day of Allen's party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn't know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and Officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：There, a party was waiting for him. Paragraph 2: After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 小时候，生日派对对孩子们来说是意义非凡的时刻，孩子们喜欢派对上的一切，包括气球、游戏、蛋糕和礼物等。艾伦・米勒在阅读了警察破案的精彩故事后，觉得警察非常了不起，希望自己将来也能成为一名警察。因此，在他七岁生日派对的主题选择上，他毫不犹豫地选了警察主题，并且他最想要的生日礼物是一辆模型警车。他兴奋地邀请了朋友们，满心期待着派对的到来。然而，由于各种原因，朋友们都无法参加派对。艾伦的妈妈瑞秋陷入了两难，不知是否该取消派对，以免让艾伦面对空荡荡的派对房间而感到尴尬。但艾伦一直期待着这次派对，每天都在谈论，取消派对肯定会让他伤心。警官弗兰克・史密斯原本就和瑞秋计划好要参加派对，得知派对可能因参加人数少而取消后，决定拯救这个派对。他认为警察的职责不仅是执法，还应该为社区服务，保护居民免受糟糕的经历。于是，他召集了当地所有警察一起参与。生日当天，史密斯警官开着警车接上了瑞秋和艾伦，艾伦并不知道他们要去哪里，但十分兴奋。他们在市政厅停下，史密斯警官将他们带进会议室，一群警察正在那里等着为艾伦庆祝生日。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Paragraph 1：There, a party was waiting for him. 在那里，一场派对正等着他。当艾伦踏入会议室的那一刻，他被眼前的景象惊呆了。整个房间被装饰得五彩斑斓，气球在空中飘荡，墙上挂满了警察主题的海报和照片。桌子上摆满了各种美味的食物和一个巨大的警察主题蛋糕，蛋糕上插着七根蜡烛，在灯光下闪烁着温暖的光芒。警察们穿着整齐的制服，面带微笑，一起为艾伦唱起了生日歌。艾伦的眼睛瞪得大大的，脸上洋溢着惊喜和幸福的笑容。他简直不敢相信自己的眼睛，原本以为会冷冷清清的生日派对，竟然变成了一场如此盛大而温馨的聚会。警察们纷纷围过来，和艾伦握手，祝他生日快乐。其中一位警察还带着艾伦参观了他们带来的真正的警用装备，向他介绍这些装备的用途，艾伦听得津津有味，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 10 10 续写思路分析 Paragraph 2: After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. 在他们享用了蛋糕之后，史密斯警官拿出了一个礼物袋。他微笑着走向艾伦，将礼物袋递到他的手中，说道：“艾伦，这是我们全体警察叔叔送给你的生日礼物，希望你会喜欢。” 艾伦迫不及待地接过礼物袋，小心翼翼地打开。当他看到里面是一辆精致的模型警车时，他激动得跳了起来。那辆警车模型和他梦想中的一模一样，车身锃亮，警灯还能闪烁。艾伦紧紧地抱着模型警车，眼中闪烁着激动的泪花，他哽咽着说：“谢谢你们，警察叔叔们，这是我收到过的最好的生日礼物！” 随后，警察们还和艾伦一起玩起了各种有趣的游戏，比如模拟警察抓小偷的游戏。艾伦在游戏中扮演小警察，他学得有模有样，玩得不亦乐乎。派对结束时，艾伦虽然有些疲惫，但他的脸上依然洋溢着幸福的笑容。这一天，将成为他童年中最难忘的回忆。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 There, a party was waiting for him. When Allen stepped into the meeting room, he was stunned by what he saw. The whole room was decorated in a colorful way. Balloons were floating in the air, and police - themed posters and photos were hung on the walls. On the table, there were all kinds of delicious food and a huge police - themed cake. Seven candles were inserted on the cake, shining warmly in the light. The policemen, wearing neat uniforms and with smiles on their faces, sang the birthday song for Allen together. Allen's eyes widened, and his face was filled with surprise and happiness. He couldn't believe his eyes. The birthday party that he thought would be deserted had turned into such a grand and warm gathering. The policemen came over one by one, shook hands with Allen and wished him a happy birthday. One of the policemen even took Allen to visit the real police equipment they brought and introduced the uses of these equipment to him. Allen listened attentively, with excitement shining in his eyes. 13 13 范文呈现 After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. He walked towards Allen with a smile and handed the gift bag to him, saying, "Allen, this is a birthday gift from all of us police officers. I hope you will like it." Allen couldn't wait to take the gift bag and opened it carefully. When he saw a delicate model police car inside, he jumped up with excitement. The model police car was exactly the same as what he had dreamed of. The body of the car was shiny, and the police lights could flash. Allen held the model police car tightly, with tears of excitement in his eyes. He choked and said, "Thank you, police officers. This is the best birthday gift I've ever received!" Then, the policemen played various interesting games with Allen, such as a simulated police - catching - thieves game. Allen played the role of a little police officer in the game. He acted very well and had a great time. When the party ended, although Allen was a little tired, there was still a happy smile on his face. This day would become the most unforgettable memory in his childhood. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 There, a party of dreams awaited him. As soon as Allen set foot in the meeting room, he was completely taken aback by the sight before him. The entire room was transformed into a wonderland, with colorful balloons floating gracefully in the air and police - themed posters and photos adorning the walls. On the table, an array of delicious treats was laid out, and at the center stood a massive police - themed cake, its seven candles flickering warmly in the soft glow of the lights. The policemen, dressed in their immaculate uniforms, wore broad smiles on their faces as they joined together to sing the birthday song for Allen. Allen's eyes grew wide with astonishment, and his face lit up with pure joy and disbelief. What he had feared would be a lonely and disappointing birthday party had miraculously turned into a grand and heartwarming celebration. The policemen approached one by one, extending their hands to shake Allen's and offering their warmest birthday wishes. One of the officers then took the initiative to show Allen the real police equipment they had brought along, patiently explaining the functions of each item. Allen listened intently, his eyes sparkling with excitement and fascination. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 After they had savored the delicious cake, Officer Smith stepped forward, holding a gift bag. With a warm smile, he walked towards Allen and presented the bag to him, saying, "Allen, this is a special birthday gift from all of us. We hope you'll love it." Unable to contain his excitement, Allen eagerly took the bag and carefully unwrapped it. The moment he laid eyes on the exquisite model police car inside, he leaped up with joy. The model was an exact replica of what he had always dreamed of, its shiny body and flashing lights making it look incredibly realistic. Allen clutched the model tightly, his eyes brimming with tears of happiness. Choking back his emotions, he managed to say, "Thank you so much, police officers! This is the best birthday gift I've ever gotten!" Following that, the policemen engaged in a series of fun - filled games with Allen, like the simulated police - catching - thieves game. Allen took on the role of a young police officer, performing his part with great enthusiasm and skill. He had an absolute blast. As the party drew to a close, although Allen was a bit worn out, his face remained radiant with a contented smile. This day would undoubtedly be etched in his memory as one of the most unforgettable moments of his childhood. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$