2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：陪伴狗狗：解决布默朗分离焦虑的爱心之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 意外锁车困境：紧急救援狗狗贝利的暖心之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Near daybreak the previous day, my friend Jess and I set out on a journey southwest from our snow-covered home in Ottawa, bound for Arizona, a warm place to escape the freezing winter. After loading our equipment and my dog Bailey into my old car, we drove along the freeway with the radio playing lively tunes. Bailey, comfortably sitting on the back seat, added to the joy of the moment. Life couldn't have felt more perfect. As the miles accumulated behind us, by noon the following day, we pulled off at a rest area with spring-like temperatures. It was an ideal setting for a picnic-style break outside the car. After a refreshing walk, we ate salads and cheese with the sun shining brightly on us. However, the road called us, so unwillingly we headed for the car. Once the food was stored in the trunk, I opened the back door, throwing my keys onto the front seat, and settled Bailey on the back seat before shutting the door with force. However, as I reached for the driver's door handle, a sudden realization struck me. 4 4 续写原文 “Oh, Jess, the door is locked.” “What do you mean 'locked'? How did that happen?” Jess questioned with concern. A wave of fear washed over me as I pieced together the situation. The remote likely triggered (触发) the lock when I threw it onto the driver's seat. Inside the car were our purses, keys, and most importantly, Bailey. The rising temperatures now posed a serious threat to her-being trapped inside a hot box without water. Assessing the problem with a clearer mind, I instantly reached out to a local auto repair service for assistance. Unfortunately, they couldn't guarantee their arrival time due to staffing shortages, leaving me anxious about Bailey's well-being. The danger of heatstroke (中暑) weighed heavily on my mind, fueling my urgency to find a solution. Breaking the window, which had been my last choice, seemed to be the only one. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1: Just then a large truck approached. Paragraph 2: Finally Bailey was saved and my car remained whole. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 前一天拂晓，“我” 和朋友杰斯从渥太华出发，前往亚利桑那州躲避寒冬。我们带着装备和狗狗贝利，驾车行驶在高速公路上，心情愉悦。到了第二天中午，我们在一个温暖如春的休息区停车休息，享受了野餐和散步后准备继续上路。“我” 把食物放进后备箱，打开后门让贝利坐在后座，关门时用力过猛，等伸手去拉驾驶座车门把手时，才惊觉车门被锁了。原来 “我” 把钥匙扔到前排座位时，遥控钥匙触发了锁车功能。我们的钱包、钥匙以及最重要的贝利都被困在了车里，随着气温升高，贝利面临中暑的危险。“我” 立刻联系当地汽车维修服务，但由于人手短缺，对方无法保证到达时间。在焦急万分的情况下，打破车窗似乎成了唯一的办法。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Paragraph 1: Just then a large truck approached. 就在这时，一辆大卡车缓缓驶来。卡车停稳后，一位身材魁梧的大叔从车上下来。他看到我们焦急的模样，便主动走过来询问情况。“我” 急忙把贝利被困车内、钥匙也一同被锁的事情告诉了他。大叔听后，皱了皱眉头，说道：“这情况确实挺紧急的，狗狗在里面时间长了可不行。” 他围着车转了一圈，仔细观察着，然后从卡车里拿出了一些工具。大叔尝试用工具打开车门，他的动作十分熟练，眼神专注。然而，试了几次后，都没有成功。“我” 的心里越来越着急，不停地在原地踱步。大叔安慰道：“别着急，再试试其他办法，肯定能行的。” 这时，又有几位路过的司机停下来，了解情况后，纷纷出谋划策。有人提议用铁丝勾开门锁，有人说可以找专业的开锁师傅。大家七嘴八舌地讨论着，虽然办法都不太可行，但每个人都在积极地想办法，这让 “我” 和杰斯感受到了温暖和希望。 10 10 续写思路分析 Paragraph 2: Finally Bailey was saved and my car remained whole. 终于，贝利得救了，而且我的车也完好无损。就在大家都有些束手无策的时候，一位年轻的小伙子说他曾经在汽车维修厂工作过，或许能有办法。他仔细研究了车的构造后，从自己的车上拿来了一个特殊的工具。他小心翼翼地操作着工具，经过一番努力，只听 “咔哒” 一声，车门竟然打开了。“我” 激动地冲过去，打开车门，把贝利抱了出来。贝利不停地舔着 “我” 的脸，似乎在表达它的喜悦和感激。“我” 和杰斯向在场的每一个人表示了衷心的感谢，大家纷纷表示这只是举手之劳。那位大叔拍了拍 “我” 的肩膀说：“以后出门可得多注意，别再犯这样的错误了。”“我” 连连点头。经历了这次意外，“我” 深刻体会到了陌生人之间的温暖和善良。我们收拾好东西，再次踏上了旅程，贝利在车里欢快地叫着，似乎也在为自己的获救而欢呼。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Just then a large truck approached. After the truck came to a stop, a burly uncle got out of it. He noticed our anxious looks and walked over to ask what was wrong. I quickly told him about Bailey being trapped in the car and the keys being locked inside. The uncle frowned after hearing this and said, "This situation is really urgent. The dog can't stay in there for too long." He walked around the car, observing it carefully, and then took out some tools from the truck. The uncle tried to use the tools to open the car door. His movements were very skilled, and his eyes were focused. However, after trying several times, he didn't succeed. I became more and more anxious, pacing back and forth restlessly. The uncle comforted me, "Don't worry. Let's try other methods. We're sure to make it." At this time, several other passing drivers stopped. After learning about the situation, they all offered suggestions. Some suggested using a wire to hook the door lock, and some said we could find a professional locksmith. Everyone was discussing enthusiastically. Although the methods didn't seem very feasible, everyone was actively trying to find a solution, which made Jess and me feel warm and hopeful. 13 13 范文呈现 Finally Bailey was saved and my car remained whole. Just when everyone was at a loss, a young guy said he had worked in a car repair shop before and might have a way. He carefully studied the structure of the car and then brought a special tool from his own car. He operated the tool carefully. After a lot of effort, there was a "click" sound, and the car door was opened. I rushed over excitedly, opened the door, and carried Bailey out. Bailey kept licking my face, as if expressing its joy and gratitude. Jess and I sincerely thanked everyone present, and they all said it was just a small favor. The uncle patted me on the shoulder and said, "Be more careful when you go out in the future. Don't make such a mistake again." I nodded repeatedly. After this accident, I deeply felt the warmth and kindness of strangers. We packed up our things and set off on our journey again. Bailey barked happily in the car, as if cheering for its own rescue. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Just then a large truck approached. As the truck came to a halt, a burly uncle stepped out of it. Sensing our distress, he made his way over and inquired about the situation. I promptly shared with him the ordeal of Bailey being trapped inside the car along with the keys. Upon hearing this, the uncle furrowed his brow and remarked, "This is indeed a pressing matter. The dog can't be left in there for an extended period." He circled the car, scrutinizing it closely, and then retrieved some tools from the truck. The uncle set about attempting to open the car door with the tools. His movements were deft, and his gaze was fixed in concentration. Nevertheless, after several failed attempts, he was still unable to unlock the door. I grew increasingly anxious, pacing back and forth restlessly. The uncle sought to reassure me, saying, "Don't fret. Let's explore other avenues. We're bound to find a solution." At that moment, several passing drivers pulled over. Once they were apprised of the situation, they began to offer various suggestions. Some proposed using a wire to manipulate the door lock, while others recommended contacting a professional locksmith. Everyone engaged in an animated discussion. Although the proposed methods didn't seem particularly practical, the fact that everyone was actively involved in finding a solution filled Jess and me with a sense of warmth and hope. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Finally Bailey was saved and my car remained intact. Just when everyone seemed to be at their wits' end, a young man chimed in, stating that he had prior experience working at a car repair shop and might have a viable approach. He meticulously examined the car's structure and then fetched a specialized tool from his own vehicle. With great care, he set to work operating the tool. After a considerable amount of effort, there was a distinct "click," and the car door swung open. I dashed forward excitedly, flung open the door, and scooped Bailey into my arms. Bailey lapped at my face incessantly, as if conveying its joy and gratitude. Jess and I expressed our heartfelt thanks to everyone present, and they all dismissed it as a mere trifle. The uncle gave me a friendly pat on the shoulder and advised, "Be more cautious when you're on the road in the future. Avoid repeating such mistakes." I nodded in agreement. This unexpected incident made me keenly aware of the warmth and kindness that strangers can offer. We gathered our belongings and resumed our journey. Bailey barked merrily in the car, as if celebrating its own rescue. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$