内容正文:
应用文写作万能模板询问信
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命题立意
问题
应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思;有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。
命题依据
题型分析
从《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017年版2020年修订)中看书面表达要求:
1.审题不清
2.时态混乱
5.结构失衡
6.语法错误
3.拼写错误
7.汉式思维
4.句型单一
8.书写不整洁
学情分析
高阶模板
Dear Silvia,
I am ... . Sorry to disturb you, I am writing to consult you about further information regarding ... .
First and foremost, could you tell me .... ? Aside from it, I intend to know.... Thirdly, I would also like to inquire .... .Furthermore, is there anything else I should pay special attention to?Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant details on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Sorry to disturb you, I am writing to consult you about further information regarding the volunteer recruitment information posted by your community online.
First and foremost, I hope to seize this opportunity to gain a deeper insight into them and acquire more hands-on experience? Aside from it, I intend to establish new friendships through voluntary work and broaden my international perspective. Thirdly, I would also like to inquire the detailed information as well as the relevant schedules of the volunteering service so as to balance my academic commitments and the volunteer work.Furthermore, is there anything else I should pay special attention to?Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant details on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(宁波十校2024届高三3月联考)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区在网上发布的志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣,于是给该社区写信。
内容包括:1.说明报名原因;
2.询问相关情况;
3.表达你的期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
模板套用
通用模板
Dear _____________,
I'm______________(自我介绍). I'm writing to inquire(总述咨询的内容).
To start with, I'd like to______________(具体内容1).If convenient, could you please offer me some detailed information about______________(具体内容2)?What's more, I would be obliged if you______________(具体内容 3).
I'm expecting to receive your early reply. Thank you in advance for your assistance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Tim,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to inquire further details about your school's Summer Science Camp.
To start with, I'd like to know if there is a student dormitory available, otherwise I will have to book a hotel ahead of time.If convenient, could you please offer me some detailed information about the specific schedule of the summer camp so that I can make preparations in advance? What's more, I would be obliged if you be kind enough to tell me about the costs associated with the summer camp activities as well as the accommodation fees.
I'm expecting to receive your early reply. Thank you in advance for your assistance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2024届广东省七校联合体高三第一次联考卷)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校暑假组织的“科技夏令营”。你想参加,现就此事写一封信向他咨询夏令营的相关事宜,
要点包括:1.具体日程安排;
2.住宿和费用等。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
模板套用
第一部分:表明背景和目的
Winter vacation is coming soon and I'm planning to go to the UK. I'm writing to ask for some detailed information about the country.
Hearing that there will be a one-month English course in your school during the summer, I'm eager to know some information about it.
The basketball match is to be held next week in your school. Could you provide me with some basic information about it?
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I'm writing to inquire about the courses your center provide for the candidates for College Entrance Examination.
Spring is coming! It brings us hope as well as a lot of infectious diseases. I would be grateful if you could give me some suggestions on how to protect us from the diseases.
第二部分:详细阐明所需咨询的具体信息
Firstly, according to your website, there is a minimum duration of four weeks; however, the maximum duration of the programme is not mentioned. I would appreciate it if you could tell me whether it is possible to have extended stays, since I would like to work in one of your hospitals for a period of over six months.(内容)
As for the money you charge, I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed. (内容)
I'm told that it's summer now in Australia, and I wonder how hot it is and what I should wear. (内容)
I would like to know if some kind of insurance is included in the fee that you charge for your services. We have our own home insurer, but we are not sure if we should talk to them before doing an exchange.(内容)
Besides, I'm at a loss what speech rate I should keep and how long it will take me to finish my show. (内容)
第三部分:表达想获取信息的强烈愿望和感谢
Attached is my email address. I look forward to hearing from you.
I look forward to receiving the requested information.
I would appreciate it if you could answer my questions as soon as possible.
Thank you for your kindness, and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreaciated!
I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
评价修改
Self-assessment Peer-assessment self-correction
备考策略-学生篇
重视复盘
针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训
重视阅读
精读与泛读相结合
读书破万卷,下笔如有神
重视细节
规范拼写,坚持练字;
正确运用时态,标点等
重视运用
有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中
重视积累
积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等
备考策略
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重视评改
品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平
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愉
Thank you for your listening !
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