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Unit 2
Out of this world
Period 4
Integrated skills
细读文本
写作指导
写作实践
达标检测
细读 文本
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Look at the comic strip about aliens and try to do the exercises.
1.When and where did the story happen?
Activity 1 细节把握
答案 It happened in the evening in a park.
2.How many people are there in the comic strip?
答案 Two.A boy and an alien.
Look at the comic strip and fill in the table.
Activity 2 文章架构
Setting
Characters
One spring evening in the park next to Paul’s house
Paul,a boy,and Alf,a grey alien
Plot
Paul hears a noise in the park next to his house and goes to investigate.When he arrives,he sees a silver object land in the park that looks like a spaceship.Suddenly,the door opens and a strange-looking being exits the object.The being is a grey colour and Paul realizes it is an alien.The alien tells Paul that he will take him to a new place.Paul is not afraid because the alien is friendly,so he enters the spaceship.Paul and the alien fly into outer space in the silver spaceship to travel to another planet in the universe.
When describing the story,you can use these sentences:
1.Sometimes I dream about meeting an alien.However,one day,...
2.I got on the UFO with the alien and it took me to the dark space...
Activity 3 增分靓句
We can use the following outline when describing the story.
Activity 4 写作模板
Story Mountain
3.Climax(Is there a conflict? What’s it? How does it affect characters?)
2.Build up:_________________
__________________________.
4. Resolution:_________________
_______?
1.Opening:__________________
___________________.
5. Ending:__________________
_____?
The boy goes to the outer space with the alien
A boy sees an alien
coming out of a UFO
How is the conflict
solved
How does the story
end
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写作 指导
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本单元的写作任务是写一篇有关外星人的故事,属于故事类文章。在写作时,需要注意按照时间顺序进行写作,且设置合理的情节。
篇章结构
第一段:介绍故事发生的背景。
第二段:介绍故事中的主要人物以及故事情节。
第三段:介绍故事的结局。
注意事项
1.这是一篇小故事,写作时注意故事的写作特点。
2.以一般过去时为主。
3.以第三人称为主。
[常用表达]
1. When he/she heard.../On hearing.../As soon as he/she heard.../When the news reached...
2.When he/she saw this.../At the sight of.../Seeing this...
3.He/She was doing...when.../He/She was about to do...when.../He/She had just done...when...
4.He/She was surprised to find...
5.Long long ago,there lived a man who was called...
6....happens to...
7.It is quite likely/possible/probable that...
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写作 实践
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请根据教材P23 Part B 的漫画内容写一篇有关外星人的小故事。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步 审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是写有关外星人的小故事,写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇小故事。写作时注意故事的写作特点。
2.主体时态:以一般过去时为主。
3.主体人称:以第三人称为主。
[谋篇]
第一段:介绍故事发生的背景。
第二段:介绍故事中的主要人物以及故事情节。
第三段:介绍故事的结局。
第二步 遣词造句
[核心词汇](含本单元词汇)
1.一条荒芜的街道 _______________
2.一种奇怪的声音 ______________
3.令人害怕的 ______
4.僵住的 _______
5.手拉手 _____________
6.飘动,漂流;浮 _____
7.在友好的氛围中 ______________________
a deserted street
a strange noise
scary
frozen
hand in hand
float
in a friendly atmosphere
[连词成句]
1.一天晚上,保罗正在一条荒芜的街道上走着。
One night,Paul was walking .
2.就在那时,他听到从漆黑的天空中传来一种奇怪的声音。
At that time he .
3.他非常害怕,只能僵在那里,什么也做不了。
He was very frightened and he could do nothing .
on a deserted street
heard a strange noise from the dark sky
but stand there,frozen
4.虽然保罗浑身发抖,但他还是好奇地接受了外星人的邀请。
Although Paul was trembling,_____________________________________.
5.在友好的氛围中,他们谈论了许多关于太空的话题。
They talked a lot about space .
he accepted the alien’s invitation curiously
in a friendly atmosphere
第三步 句式升级
1.用be doing...when...连接句1和句2。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
2.用so...that...结构改写句3。
_______________________________________________________________
3.用倒装句改写句4。
_______________________________________________________________
One night,Paul was walking on a deserted street when he heard a strange noise from the dark sky.
He was so frightened that he could do nothing but stand there,frozen.
Trembling as Paul was,he accepted the alien’s invitation curiously.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
[范文赏读]
One night,Paul was walking on a deserted street when he heard a strange noise from the dark sky.He looked up to see what was going on,a UFO!
With green skin and green eyes,a short alien that looked strange and scary just came out.He was so frightened that he could do nothing but stand there,frozen.“Don’t be frightened,my Earth friend.Now,I’m taking you to a new place.” Trembling as Paul was,he accepted the alien’s invitation curiously.They got on the UFO hand in hand.They were flying in the sky,with other planets floating around them.How fun!They talked a lot about space in a friendly atmosphere.
Half an hour later,they came back to the Earth and then the UFO flew away.What an unforgettable experience!
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达标检测
假定你是李华,上周五的一个夜晚,你在回家的路上偶遇了外星人,你的好朋友Tom对此事很感兴趣,请你给Tom写一封信介绍一下这件事。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m writing to tell you something about my encounter with an alien.
Last Friday,I was walking home at about 11 pm when I found a huge round object flying in the sky.After a few seconds,it landed on the ground in front of me.To my great astonishment,an alien walked out of it.The alien had one big eye,four arms and four legs.Just at that moment,the alien noticed me and disappeared with its UFO.
_______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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Even today,I can’t believe what happened that day.
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