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应用文写作 对对碰(四) 申请信推荐信
一、“申请信”写作增分指导
[写作题目]
(2023·天津高考改编)你作为交换生去英国学校,学校要办一个名为 Chinese Workshop的促进中英文化交流的活动。你需要写一封申请信,内容要点如下:
1.推荐活动为中国美食、手工艺品和书法,并且活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西。
2.请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动。
3.阐述参加内容及原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
To Whom It May Concern,
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]
To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to apply for (开门见山,提出申请)the Chinese Workshop activity that is being organized by the school as part of promoting cultural exchange between China and the UK (定语从句描述活动细节). I believe this activity would be a great opportunity for me to contribute and learn (宾语从句介绍申请原因).
I am currently an exchange student at your school,so I would like to participate in the workshop by showcasing Chinese cuisine, handicrafts, and calligraphy. Additionally (运用衔接词分层次介绍教授的技能), I would love to teach other students how to make traditional Chinese items. This activity holds great significance as it not only fosters cultural understanding but also allows me to share my own culture and learn from others (not only...but also介绍活动意义).
Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to your reply (表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]
Ⅰ.开头部分:介绍自己,简要说明信息来源,并提出申请
1.I'm writing to apply for the job/post/position as ...
2.I learned from sb./the website that your company wants to hire ...
3.I read the announcement of ... that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
Ⅱ.主体部分:突出自己的特点,具体说明胜任的理由以及对自己的影响或阐述参加的内容及想法
1.I think I'm qualified for the position./I am sure I can do my best in the job./I possess qualifications accordingly.
2.To start with, my advantage lies in the fact that ...
3.Not only am I interested in ..., but I also have a good knowledge of ...
Ⅲ.结尾部分:请求给予机会,期望尽快回复
1.I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity./I will appreciate it if I can be chosen for the job.
2.I do hope my enthusiasm and qualification will win me a favorable consideration from your side.
3.If given the opportunity, I'll be more than delighted to work for ...and be surely devoted to the job.
[建写作模型·展规范形体]
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm __________(简单的自我介绍). I'm writing to apply for the position as __________ (申请的具体职位).
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because ____________(说明为什么申请).I have a good command of ____________ (优势一). Besides, I am __________(优势二).If I can be chosen, I will __________(如果被选中能做什么).I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
I would be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、“推荐信”写作增分指导
[写作题目]
假定你是高三学生李华,收到外国朋友Bill的邮件,告诉你他准备开始学习汉语,现有两门汉语课程供他选择(一个是汉语听说,另一个是汉语读写),但他对课程选择有些茫然,想听取你的建议。请你给Bill回复一封邮件,推荐其中一门课程并给出推荐的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Bill,
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]
Dear Bill,
It's so great to learn from your last email that you want to learn Chinese language. Knowing that you have some doubts on (“分词+名词性从句”解释写信的缘由)which course to choose, Chinese Listening and Speaking or Reading and Writing, I am glad to give you a hand (引出正文).
From my perspective, I'd like to recommend Chinese Listening and Speaking (经典句式做出推荐). For one thing, only by listening and speaking can you keep practicing it and only by putting what you have learnt into use can you master Chinese as quickly as possible. (两个并列倒装句让理由更充分) For another, good listening and speaking ability will be of great help for you to adapt yourself in class so that you can understand teachers' words and instructions (目的状语从句说明缘由). (for one thing ... for another ...,分层次解释推荐理由)
I am confident that you will surely benefit a lot from my advice (宾语从句表达信心与期待). Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]
Ⅰ.开头部分:推荐事项
1.It is a great honour for me to recommend ... to you.
2.Knowing that you are interested in ..., I am writing to you to recommend ... to you.
3.I would like to present ...for your consideration in your search for ...
Ⅱ.主体部分:推荐理由
1.In addition to ..., he is good at ...
2.What I'd like to recommend to you is ..., one of the most ...
3.When we ..., we learn to be confident and are willing to help others.
4.Initially ... Additionally ... Plus .../For one thing ... For another/First of all ...What's more ...Last but not least/Finally ...
Ⅲ.结尾部分:表达期望、祝愿、谢意等
1.In a word, ... I would be grateful if you could consider my recommendation.
2.I hope you can ... I believe ... will be a good choice for you.
3.I am confident that you will surely benefit a lot from ...
[建写作模型·展规范形体]
Dear __________,
In response to your request for ____________ (推荐事由), I would like to recommend ________ (具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, ______________ (推荐理由一). Additionally/Aside from it, ____________________ (推荐理由二). Plus, ________________________ (推荐理由三). If you want more details, please ________________(联系方式).
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.(表达期望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
求“同”存“异”·写法一比清
把握
通性
1.主体要素:申请信和推荐信的主体部分都是说明申请或推荐的理由。
2.礼貌用语:申请信和推荐信都要适当运用礼貌用语,体现出真诚的态度。
3.主体时态:申请信与推荐信内容多以一般现在时态为主。
注意
个性
申请信与推荐信的人称运用有所不同,如推荐信中会用到第三人称。
[专题验收评价] 应用文写作·文体规范练(四)——申请信推荐信
写作任务(一) 申请信
(2024·合肥一模)假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你的家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initiative)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1.写信目的; 2.对活动的认识; 3.个人优势。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply as a volunteer for “the Belt and Road Initiative” Tea Culture Exchange Event to be organized by UNESCO in my hometown.
This event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange and understanding. It will serve as a platform for showcasing the rich and diverse tea cultures of different countries.
I have a good understanding of tea culture and its significance in the history and traditions of our region. Moreover, my excellent communication skills and ability to work well with others will make me a valuable member of the volunteer team.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
加练区
①have(有)→possess
②attractive(有吸引力的)→appealing
③be fit for(适合,胜任)→be_qualified_for/be_equal_to/be_up_to
④be good at(擅长;精通)→be_expert_in/have_a_good_command/knowledge_of
⑤try to do (努力做)→be_devoted_to_doing/be_committed_to_doing
写作任务(二) 推荐信
(2024·晋城二模)假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动,特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一种活动形式; 2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jack,
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to hear you will organize an activity with the theme of Environmental Protection. And I'm willing to offer my advice.
I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. Biking is familiar to a majority of people, so the race will definitely attract many participants, contributing to spreading the awareness of environmental protection. Moreover, it's such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice.
I hope my idea is helpful and that your activity will be a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
加练区
①suggest (推荐)→recommend
②famous(出名的)→wellknown/renowned/celebrated/noted
③popular (受欢迎的)→wellreceived/wellreviewed
④improve(提高)→enhance/boost
⑤develop an interest in (培养在……方面的爱好)→develop_a_taste_for
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