专题3 应用文写作对对碰(6) 新闻报道VS通知(课件PPT)-【创新方案】2025年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试

对对碰(六)　新闻报道 通知 应用文 写作 目录 一、“新闻报道”写作增分指导 二、“书面通知”写作增分指导 三、“口头通知”写作增分指导 2 “新闻报道”写作增分指导 一、 [写作题目] (2023·浙江1月高考)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的 “认识我们身边的植物” 活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1．活动的过程；　2.收获与感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Getting to Know the Plants Around Us Last weekend, I participated in the “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organized by our Students' Union.(一句话给出报道的关键信息) The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the activity, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.(三个定语从句详细介绍活动过程) I also(增加上下文衔接的紧密性) gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.(定语从句描述对植物的认识) Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience. All the participants sang high praise for it.(总结活动的反响与意义) [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：简明扼要地介绍报道的核心内容 1．Last Sunday, some students took part in an activity organized by ... in ... 2．At ... on the morning of ..., our school organized an activity ... 3．Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary martial arts gymnastics competition, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. Ⅱ.主体部分：详细说明报道的过程和细节 1．As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and lasted for three hours. 2．What impressed us was ... 3．Upon our arrival, we ... 4．The activity kicked off with ... 5．What followed was a ...campaign where we ... Ⅲ.结尾部分：对报道的认识和评价(个人感受、总结或概括) 1．The activity benefits us a lot/enables us to .../All of us think highly of the activity. 2．The activity promoted/strengthened the friendship among us. 3．Apart from knowledge, we also learned how to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork. 4．The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide a chance for us to exercise, but it also makes us more cohesive. [建写作模型·展规范形体] (标题) (时间) saw/witnessed (活动) organized by our school in (地点), which promoted (活动目的)． The activity began with (细节1). What matters most is that _____ (细节2). Most of the students , which provides _______ (细节3)． Through the activity, not only can you ， but you can also _______ (总结). All the participants spoke well of it.(反响) “书面通知”写作增分指导 二、 [写作题目] 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1．短片内容：学校的发展； 2．放映时间、地点； 3．欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Notice ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Notice To make students have a full understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie, Growing Together, will be screened in the lecture hall at 2：00 pm on September 28th.(一句话介绍活动的目的、时间和地点) The short movie, which introduces the history of our school (非限制性定语从句介绍短片内容), is certain to be instructive and full of emotion. It's a good way for us to know when our school was created, what it has experienced and how it has achieved success (并列宾语从句扩充要点信息)．Moreover (引出次要点), you are welcome to have a discussion and write down your own comments after watching the short movie. Don't miss this precious opportunity to witness the glory of our school.(“祈使句＋不定式”呼吁大家参与) The Students' Union [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：介绍活动目的、时间和地点 1．In order to enrich our after-school life, we shall hold a party/give a concert/organize an activity at ...(time) on ...(date) in ...(place)． 2．With the aim of satisfying students' thirst for the knowledge, our school is going to hold ... 3．An exciting event ... is around the corner. 4．The meeting/lecture will be held in the library/stadium/auditorium at ...(time)． Ⅱ.主体部分：介绍活动内容 1．The lecture will last about ... and all the teachers and students are expected to attend. No asking for leave without special reasons. 2．Come here on time and bring a pen and a notebook with you. You are required to take notes during the lecture. 3．It's a good way for us to know when ..., what ... and how ... 4．The contents may range from ... to ... Meanwhile, participants must see to it that ... 5．Anyone who would like to take part should come to ... Ⅲ.结尾部分：号召参加活动 1．If you are interested in .../are free/would like to take part in ..., please come and sign up for it. 2．Take an active part in ... to experience ... 3．I'm looking forward to your active participation! 4．Don't miss this precious opportunity to witness ... [建写作模型·展规范形体] Notice In order to (目的), (活动) will be held ___(地点和时间)． The activity is (活动内容总述), which will be very interesting/meaningful/significant. At the beginning of the activity, ________ (具体事例1). In the course of the activity, (具体事例2). What's more, you're supposed to (注意事项)． (参与人员) are expected to be present on time.(号召参与) The Students' Union “口头通知”写作增分指导 三、 [写作题目] 你校学生会将为来访的英国朋友举办一个晚会活动，请你代表学生会写一份学校广播通知，欢迎大家参加。要点如下： 1．欢迎来访的英国朋友； 2．晚会活动的时间、地点； 3．晚会活动的内容。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Boys and girls， Attention, please! I have an announcement to make.(开门见山，直入主题) The Students' Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from England (不定式短语表明目的). The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7：30 pm. There will be (there be句型介绍活动安排) talking, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Please bring a small gift if you could. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes (并列祈使句提醒注意事项)． Don't forget (否定祈使句再次强调重要信息): 7：30 pm, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There's sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.(表示欢迎参加) That's all. Thank you. [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：提醒听众注意 1．Ladies and gentlemen! / Boys and girls！/Hello, everyone！/Good morning, everyone! 2．May I have/call your attention, please？/Please be quiet, everyone. 3．Attention, please, everybody! 4．I have an announcement to make./I have something to announce. Ⅱ.主体部分：具体详情 1．The Students' Union has decided that ... 2．We shall have a lecture on ... 3．A lecture will be given at 7：00 this evening in ... 4．It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ... 5．Make sure that you .../Be sure to ... Ⅲ.结尾部分：期望与号召 1．Everybody is expected to attend it. 2．I hope you can have a good time. 3．That's all.Thank you./Thank you for listening. 4．Don't miss the chance! 5．Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome. 6．Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. [建写作模型·展规范形体] Boys and girls， May I have your attention, please? I've got an important announcement to make. (活动) is around the corner. You can (详情1). In either way, we are supposed to (详情2). As for ， it would be better (注意事项)． Everybody is welcome to attend it. I sincerely hope you can enjoy the process of (表达期望)． That's all. Thank you. 求“同”存“异”·写法一比清 把握通性 新闻报道和通知都旨在告知活动具体信息，一般开门见山，直奔主题，内容简洁、明确。 注意个性 语言风格 新闻报道一般使用平实客观的语言，标题醒目，语言有现场感。 通知的写作要点包括时间、地点、涉及的人物、事件及注意事项，语言简洁明了。口头通知要注意情感互动。 写作特点 新闻报道以事实为依据，通常把核心的信息放在开头，简明 扼要。 书面通知常用被动语态对活动内容进行说明，口头通知常用祈使句强调注意事项。 主体时态 新闻报道通常用一般过去时或与现在有关的时态。 通知通常以一般将来时为主，可穿插使用一般现在时。 续表 本课结束 $$