专题3 应用文写作对对碰(3) 感谢信VS道歉信(课件PPT)-【创新方案】2025年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试

对对碰(三)　感谢信 道歉信 应用文 写作 目录 一、“感谢信”写作增分指导 二、“道歉信”写作增分指导 2 “感谢信”写作增分指导 一、 [写作题目] 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示感谢； 2．回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3．临别祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Dear Alex， I'm sorry to hear that you will return to your country very soon (宾语从句交代写信背景) and I'm writing to extend my sincere gratitude for (经典句式点明写信目的) your warm-hearted help with my English learning. I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing (宾语从句回顾受到的帮助). Besides, you selflessly shared your learning experience with me. Actually, without your help, I would not have made rapid progress in English and would not have won the recent English Speech Contest (虚拟语气表达诚恳谢意). All in all, words fail to express my thankfulness to you (无灵主语再表谢意)．(besides, all in all等的运用使得主体部分层次清晰) I do hope (强调句式表意真挚强烈) that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever! Yours， Li Hua [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：表达感谢之情并说明原因 1．I am writing this letter to thank you for ... 2．I am writing to express my sincere thanks for ... 3．I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help in this letter. 4．On behalf of ..., I'd like to extend my sincere gratitude for ... 5．I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during ... Ⅱ.主体部分：对对方给予的帮助以及达到的作用和效果进行有层次的描述和赞扬 1．It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to ... 2．Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honour you showed me during my visit to ... 3．It was your kind/unreserved/selfless help that enabled me to do ... 4．Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ... 5．What impressed us most was ... Ⅲ.结尾部分：再次阐述谢意并表达回报的愿望 1．Thanks again for your generous help. 2．My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 3．Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. 4．I feel deeply grateful to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help. 5．Nothing could ever return the favour you gave me. I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ... [建写作模型·展规范形体] Dear ， I am writing to convey my gratitude for (感谢的原因)． Guided by you, I had a chance to (对方给予的帮助一). Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that (帮助的效果). What's more, (对方给予的帮助二)． Thanks again for your generous help. (再次感谢) I'm expecting __________ (发出回报式邀请)． Yours， Li Hua “道歉信”写作增分指导 二、 [写作题目] 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．表达歉意并说明原因； 2．提出建议并给出理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Dear Jim， I am writing to apologize for (经典开头句) not hanging around with you this weekend as planned. Actually, how I'm expecting that！(表明态度) To my pity (引出具体原因), I am informed to visit the nursing house since this weekend is the Double Ninth Day, a traditional day celebrated for the senior in China. Aimed at showing our care and respect for the old, this activity launched by our school is of great significance. I hope that you can forgive me for my not keeping a promise. Can we make it another time when it's convenient to both of us？(疑问句委婉提出补救措施) How about going out together next weekend (典型句式给出具体建议), when I'd treat you to a big meal? Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused by me.(再次致歉) Yours， Li Hua   [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：简明表达道歉的原因 1．I am writing this letter to express my regret ... 2．I would like to give you my apology for ... 3．I feel terribly sorry that I forgot/failed/can't make it to ... Ⅱ.主体部分：表达歉意，阐明处境，提出解决办法 1．The reason for my delay/absence was that ... 2．I had no way out because ... 3．I wonder if you will be available on ... 4．Something unexpected happened and ...   Ⅲ.结尾部分：再次表达歉意并表达希望 1．Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 2．Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. 3．I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. [建写作模型·展规范形体] Dear ， I am terribly sorry to tell you that (道歉的内容)． The reason is that (说明原因). I (进一步作出解释). Shall we fix another time? I'll be available any time after ______ (提出补救措施). How about (具体时间、地点)? Hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation.(再次致歉或请求谅解) Yours sincerely， Li Hua 求“同”存“异”·写法一比清 把握通性 1.写作要素：感谢信与道歉信写作要素相似。感谢信一般包括表达感谢、说明对方给予你的帮助及效果、再次表示感谢或发出回报式的邀请等三部分。道歉信一般包括表达歉意、说明事情原委请求对方谅解并提出解决方案和再次道歉等三部分。 2.语言风格：感谢信与道歉信都应该用得体的语言、恰当委婉的语气，礼貌真诚地表达情感。 续表 注意个性 1.情感表达：在感谢信中可适当运用虚拟语气来凸显作者强烈的感激之情。 在道歉信中，适当运用感叹句这一特殊句式更能表现出作者最诚挚的歉意。 2.主体内容：感谢信主体段应该聚焦对方给予的帮助以及帮助达到的作用和效果。道歉信应该说明自己具体的过失或疏忽，提出解决方案时要考虑到对方的情况。 本课结束 $$