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话题十支体活动练中■
话题十文体活动
(2024兰州)
@话题探究
分析甘肃近6年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“文体活动”这一话题,共考查了1次:2024年
兰州卷要求考生以“Marathon in My Eyes'”为题,发表自己对此项赛事的看法。分析全国近3年中考
真题可知,此话题通常还有以下命题角度:1.描述一次自己参加学校运动会的经历及收获:2.如何
组织一场校园文化活动节:3.介绍中国特色的文体活动(如舞龙舞狮、武术等)。
旬真题剖析
[2024兰州]马拉松于5月26日在金城兰州圆满落幕,来自国内
第一步审题
外的四万名选手共跑“百里黄河风情线”,感受“交响丝路·如意甘1.定主题:
肃”的独特魅力。此次赛事的成功举办,不仅提升了兰州的知名度和2.定人称:描述政府、跑者
美誉度,更激发了市民的自豪感和归属感。
及志愿者在活动中的做
请你以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题写一篇英文短文,在班级英语
法为
:描述自己
沙龙活动中分享对此项赛事的看法。
对此项赛事的看法为
Marathon in My Eyes
→3.定文体:
government
nunners
volunteers
4.定时态:描述政府、跑者
organized the event well,
were welcome.
worked hard,
tried their best.
showed the true meaning of,
及志愿者在活动中的一
tasted delicious foods,
encouraged more people,
些做法为
:描述
自己对此项赛事的看法
要求:1.短文应包括以上思维导图中所有提示内容:
为
2.提出个人看法及观点。
5.定要点:根据题干信息可知
注意:1.词数80左右:
需从
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯:
共三个方面展
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息:
开叙述
4.文章标题和开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Marathon in My Eyes
This year,2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held.I feel
proud of my hometown.I'd like to share my ideas with you.
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■练宫中密■计肃美语话题写作选阶册
第二步
列提纲
开头:引出主题
This ycar,2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held.I feel proud of my
hometown.T'd like to sharc my ideas with you.(已给出)
正文:政府、跑
①To begin with,the government.(政府参与的情况)
Marathon in
者、志愿者各白
②In the second place,the runners.(跪者参与的情况)
My Eycs
参与情祝
③Last but not1 least,the volunteers also..(志愿者参与的情况)
结尾:表达白己
In my opinion,the event was.(明确表达对活动的看法)
的看法
It is not only..,but also.(结尾升华)
第三步
填细节,巧升格,成篇章
连句成篇
句子升格
Marathon in My Eyes
①用动词不定式作目的状语升格:
This year,2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held.I
feel proud of my hometown.I'd like to share my ideas with you.
To begin with,the government organized the event well.
DIt provided excellent services.The purpose was to make sure
that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable
②用短语not only..but also升格:
experience.In the second place,the runners were welcome.
2They tried their best to finish the marathon.Their spirit
encouraged more people.After the event,they tasted some
delicious foods.3Finally,the volunteers were also important in
the event.They worked hard to support the runners.What they
③用短语last but not least和play
did showed the true meaning of selflessness.
an important role升格:
In my opinion,the event was a great success.We should
hold it every year.It is not only good for our health,but also a
wonderful way to bring people closer together.
第四步:誊写
Marathon in My Eyes
This year,2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held.I feel proud of my hometown.I'd like to
share my ideas with you.
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话题十支体活动练中唐
倒提分佳句
回开头亮句(开篇表意,引出话题)》
佳句仿写
【文化活动】
1.众所周知,做早操是学校体
1.Have you ever joined any cultural activities?
育活动的一个重要部分。
2.Cultural activities make our lives more colorful.
(用as is known to all仿写)
3.Last Friday,a club festival was held in our school.
【体育活动】
1.Sports play an important role in my life.
2.Doing sports makes me healthy and strong.
3.There are many different sports to choose from.
2.随着互联网的发展,我们
4.As is known to all,doing sports is good for our body and mind.(as
可以在网上观看各种各样
is known to all众所周知)
的文化表演。(用with the
5.With the development of sunshine sports,our school has many changes
development of仿写)
in sports activities.(with the development of随着…的发展)
园中间好句(具体描述文体活动)
【文化活动】
1.In the after-school activity,we are going to have a painting
competition.Everyone can express their creativity freely.
3.我妹妹喜欢在她的房间里
2.Some volunteers are responsible for guiding at the cultural festival.
随着音乐跳舞。(用be
3.Last but not least,one of the most relaxing activities is enjoying
fond of仿写)
traditional music performed by famous musicians.
4.Such is the influence of the volunteers in cultural activities that more
and more people are willing to join them.
5.The government encourages people to take part in cultural activities.
4.她把篮球当作自己的主要
【体育活动】
体育运动,每天刻苦训练。
1.In my spare time,I enjoy jogging under the blue sky and white
(用take up sth.as one's
clouds to relax myself.
.仿写)
2.I'm fond of playing basketball with my classmates after school or on
weekends..(be fond of喜欢)
3.When I was a little boy,I took up swimming as my hobby.(take up
sth.as one's..把某事当作某人的…)
5.我有信心这次艺术节会比
4.Remember to wear comfortable clothes and sports shoes.They can
以往的更加精彩难忘。
help us keep safe while doing exercise.
(用I am confident that.
5.The government provides professional training for athletes to improve
仿写)
their skills.
6.Volunteers cheer for the athletes loudly to encourage them during the
sports competition.
国出彩尾句(总结文体活动的意义)
【文化活动】
6.做早操的目的是充满活力
1.I am confident that this festival will be a resounding success and a
地开始新的一天。(用the
memorable experience for all.(I am confident that..我深信…)
purpose of仿写)
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练宫中密■甘肃美语话题写作选阶册
2.The purpose of this event is not only to learn about Chinese culture
but also to experience it firsthand..(the purpose of..…的目的)
【体育活动】
1.By playing basketball,I become stronger and healthier,even more
outgoing.
7.我阅读大量书籍以便更多
2.Not only do they help build strong bodies,but also develop the
地了解不同的文化。(用
teamwork and a positive mind.
s0asto仿写)
3.I hope that every school can make a plan to develop students'interest
in sports so as to improve students'physical quality.(so as to以便,
为了)
偷写作自测
为讲好中国故事,传播中国声音,推动中国文化更好地走向世界,我校拟定下周举办“中华文化
节”活动(Chinese Culture Festival)。假设你是李华,请根据以下图文提示,给外教Bob写一封邮件,
向他简要介绍这次活动,并邀请他参加。
Reasons:
tell Chinese stories,
spread Chinese voices
Others:
Place:
Chinese Culture Festival
on the playground
Activities:
enjoy Chinese food,
read Chinese poems
要求:1.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点:
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息:
4.词数:80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
How are you doing?I'm writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Festival in our school.Now let me
tell you something about it.
I'm looking forward to getting your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
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