主题一 语境9 生命的意义与价值（复习讲案）（教师用书word）-【步步高】2024年高考英语大一轮复习讲义（话题版 辽鲁琼京津闽渝鄂粤冀湘苏浙黑吉皖甘赣贵桂晋云豫新）

Ⅰ.记重点单词 1．target n．目标 2．update vt.更新 3．extent n．程度 4．sacrifice n．& v．牺牲 5．ruin vt.& n．糟蹋；毁坏 6．range n．一系列；范围 v．变化 7．faraway adj.遥远的 8．might n．力量；威力 9．supply n．& v．供应，供给 10．style n．方式，作风 11．frank adj.坦率的，坦诚的 12．self-pity n．自怜；自哀 13．scholarship n．奖学金 14．colleague n．同事；同僚 15．passive adj.被动的；消极的 16．previous adj.以前的，先前的 17．entirely adv.完全地；彻底地 18．insurance n．保险；保险业 19．union n．协会；联合会；工会 20．enormous adj.巨大的，庞大的 21．element n．基本部分；要素 22．workout n．锻炼；练习；试验　　 23．absolutely adv.绝对地；当然 24．thus adv.因此，因而，从而 25．intensity n．强度；强烈 26．outstanding adj.杰出的，优秀的 27．definitely adv.确切地，肯定地 28．leadership n．领导；领导地位 29．principle n．道德原则；法则；原则 30．entry n．进入；入口；条目；登记；参赛作品 31．flash vi.& vt.闪现，闪过 n．闪光灯 32．charity n．慈善机构，慈善团体 33．optimistic adj.乐观的，乐观主义的 34．discipline n．纪律；自制力 vt.惩罚；训练 35．label n．便签，标记 vt.贴标签于 36．contact n．联系，联络 vt.联系(某人) 37．leisure n．空闲，闲暇，业余时间 38．chain n．一连串(人或事)；链子；链条 39．chat(chatted；chatted) vi.& n．闲谈，聊天 40．remove vt.移动，迁移；开除；调动 n．间距，距离 41．position n．位置；职位；姿态 v．安置；使处于 42．necessity n．必需品→necessary adj.必要的；必需的；必然的→necessarily adv.必定地；必然地 43．guilty adj.内疚的，羞愧的→guilt n．犯罪，过失；内疚 44．reduce vt.减少；降低；缩小→reduction n．减少；下降；缩小 45．appoint vt.任命；委派→appointment n．任命；约定；职位 46．publish vt.发表(作品)；出版→publisher n．出版者，出版商；发行人 47．replace vt.接替；取代；更换→replacement n．更换；复位；代替者 48．tension n．紧张关系；紧张；焦虑→tense adj.紧张的；拉紧的 49．respond v．回答；回复；做出反应；回应→response n．响应；反应；回答 50．expectation n．期待；预料，预期→expect vt.期望；指望；认为；预料 vi.期待；预期 51．influential adj.有影响力的→influence n．影响；势力；有影响的人或事 vt.影响 52．defensive adj.戒备的，自卫的→defend vt.为……辩护；防护 vi.保卫；防守→defenc(s)e n．防御；防卫；答辩；防卫设备 53．countless adj.无数的，数不尽的→count v．数数；计算总数；把……算入，包括；认为，看作→counter n．柜台；对立面；计数器 54．fashion n．时尚→fashionable adj.流行的；时髦的；上流社会的→fashionably adv.赶时髦地；按照流行地 55．retire vi.& vt.(使)退休；退职；退出→retirement n．退休，退役→retiree n．(美)退休人员 56．stressful adj.充满压力的，紧张的→stress n．压力；忧虑；紧张 v．强调；使紧张→stressed adj.焦虑的，紧张的 57．aim n．目的，意图 vi.力求达到；目的是；瞄准→aimless adj.没有目标的；无目的的→aimlessly adv.漫无目的地，无目标地 58．inspire vt.鼓励，激励→inspired adj.受到鼓舞的；能力卓越的；借助于灵感创作的→inspiring adj.鼓舞人心的；灌输的；启发灵感的→inspiration n．灵感；鼓舞；妙计 59．tough adj.困难的，难办的→toughly adv.固执地；强硬地→toughness n．韧性；强硬 60．attractive adj.有吸引力的；好看的，美观的→attraction n．吸引，吸引力；吸引人的事物→attract vt.吸引；引起 vi.吸引；有吸引力 1.entrust vt.委托；交付 2．social media社交媒体 3．nourish a dream怀有梦想 4．strive vi.努力；奋斗 5．distraction n．使人分心的事物 6．encyclopedia n．百科全书 7．fulfillment n．履行；实行；满足(感) 8．setback n．挫折；退步；逆流 9．boil down to sth 归结为；要点是 10．oblige vt.迫使；施恩惠于；责成 vi.帮忙；施恩惠 Ⅱ.背核心短语 1．carry sb through sth 帮助某人渡过难关 2．moral dilemma道德困境 3．in tears流着泪；含着泪 4．in despair处于绝望中 5．in memory of为了纪念 6．trip over被……绊倒 7．from time to time有时；偶尔；间或 8．in person亲自 9．all in all总而言之，总的来说 10．apply oneself to sth 努力；专心致志于某事 11．apart from...除……之外 12．in other words换句话说 13．suffer from(身体或精神上)遭受……(痛苦) 14．succeed in doing sth 成功地做某事 15．be responsible for对……负责 16．at the moment此刻，目前，眼下 17．retire from从……退休 18．make a commitment to...对……作出承诺 Ⅲ.悟经典句式 1．would rather do...than do...宁愿做……而不愿做…… He would rather sacrifice his life than see damage done to state property. 他宁可牺牲自己的生命，也不愿看到国家财产遭受损失。 2．the first...to do sth During a fire，the first thing to do is get out of the house as fast as you can. 发生火灾时，首先要做的就是尽快离开房子。 3．find＋宾语＋宾补 Just a few days after the signs went up，he found people sitting there and engaging in active and joyful conversations. 就在标语被张贴几天后，他发现人们坐在那里，进行着积极愉快的交谈。 4．that引导的同位语从句 There is a possibility that you will achieve your goal as long as you put your heart into it. 只要你全神贯注于你的目标，你就有可能实现它。 文中加黑词汇为本话题中的重点词汇 1．Compared(compare) to the universe，lives of human beings are really short.So how can you live each day to the fullest with your 2.limited(limit) life？I have some suggestions for you,3.which will definitely benefit you.First of all，we should keep a positive attitude，get rid 4.of bad habits，set up a 5.practical(practice) target in life and make great efforts to achieve it.Secondly，we should obey the moral principles and disciplines.I also strongly suggest that you contact 6.your(you) friends regularly.We should also take part in a wide range of outdoor 7.activities(activity) and do regular workouts.Last but not least，it’s necessary for you to 8.constantly(constant) update your knowledge 9.to keep(keep) up with the times.In a word，as long as you can follow the suggestions，you will surely live 10.a beautiful and meaningful life. appoint vt.任命；委派；安排(日期、时间)(appointment n．约会；约定，预约；委任 appointed adj.约定的) •appoint sb as/to be...任命某人为…… appoint sb to do sth 委派某人做某事 •make/have an appointment (with sb)(与某人)约会/预约 (1)I have an appointment(appoint) with Dr Smith，but I need to change it. (2)The director appointed him to look(look) into those complaints and then they could find solutions. (3)我不得不向你道歉，因为我不能在约定时间陪你去书店了。(应用文写作之道歉信) I have to apologize to you for not being able to accompany you to the bookshop at the appointed time. (4)After he was appointed as/to be headmaster of the school，he spared no effort to improve its teaching quality. →Appointed as/to be headmaster of the school，he spared no effort to improve its teaching quality.(用非谓语动词改写) replace v．替换；代替；把……放回原处 •replace...with/by...用……替换…… •in place of代替 take the place of代替 take one’s place代替；就座 (1)We all know that cycling is a great exercise and our cities will be better places if we replace cars with/by bicycles.(2022·全国乙改编) (2)David Smith has officially announced the supermodel，Karen would take the place of Michelle as the store’s new fashion ambassador. (3)埃勒斯最终成功地把这只动物哄到了他身边。兴奋取代了紧张和恐惧。 ①Ehlers eventually succeeded in coaxing the animal to him.Nervousness and fear were replaced by/with joy.(be replaced by/with) ②Ehlers eventually succeeded in coaxing the animal to him.Joy took the place of nervousness and fear.(take the place of) ③Ehlers eventually succeeded in coaxing the animal to him.Joy replaced nervousness and fear.(replace) stress n．压力；强调；紧张；重要性；重读 vt.强调；使紧张；加压力于；重读(stressed adj.焦虑不安的；紧张的 stressful adj.充满压力的；紧张的) •under stress在压力之下；承受压力 lay/place/put stress on/upon...强调…… •stress the importance of 强调……的重要性 • stressed out疲惫不堪；焦虑不安 (1)Every time I am under stress，I will turn to my parents for help without hesitation. (2)If you feel stressed(stress) by responsibilities at work，you should take a step back and identify those of greater and less importance. (3)The new job is quite stressful(stress) at times，which in turn makes me feel anxious. (4)我的父母总是强调拥有乐观的生活态度和一家人团结在一起的重要性。 My parents always stress the importance of having optimistic attitudes to life and being together as one family.(stress v．) aim n．目的；目标 vi.& vt.瞄准；力求达到；力争做到；目的是(aimless adj.无目的的 aimlessly adv.无目标地) •take aim at瞄准…… with the aim of有……的目的；以……为目标 •aim at瞄准；目的在于 aim sth at sb/sth 用某物朝向/瞄准某人或某物 aim to do.../at doing...旨在做……；力求达到……(主语往往是人) be aimed at目的是；旨在(主语往往是物) (1)Aiming to enrich(enrich) the elder’s leisure life after their retirement，they will hold a series of activities. (2)The activity is aimed at enriching our school life and improving the relationship between students. (3)他创办这个工厂的目的是发展民族工业，为社会做贡献。 He set up the factory with the aim of developing national industry and making contributions to society.(aim n．) contact vt.联络；联系 n．联系；接触 •contact sb at...通过(邮箱、电话等)与某人联系 •in contact with 接触；与……有联系 get into/make contact with和……取得联系 stay/keep in contact with与……保持联系 be out of/lose contact with与……失去联系 (1)Although the case is from the same locality as the previous case，they have no direct contact with each other. (2)If you want to know more details about the activity，please contact Li Hua at 123456543@163.com. (3)Taking on this challenge will bring you in contact with someone who shares your interests. (4)因此，无论我们在哪里，彼此之间保持联系绝对是重要的。 Thus，no matter where we are，keeping/staying in contact with each other is definitely important. supply n．& vt.供给，提供，补给 •in short supply供应不足 a supply of大量……的供应 •supply sth to sb/supply sb with sth 给某人提供某物 (1)Don’t forget that camels need a large supply of plants grown in the desert to eat. (2)The government has supplied plenty of shelters to the people in the earthquake-hit area. (3)The fresh vegetables are in short supply on the mountaintop，which has a negative influence on their life. (4)这次采摘活动为我们提供了一个能更进一步理解农民艰辛的机会。(2020·全国Ⅱ，书面表达) This picking activity supplied a chance to us/us with a chance to further understand the hardship of the farmers. defence(＝defense) n．防御；防御工事；保卫(defend vt.防御；保护，保卫；辩解 defensive adj.防御性的；自我保护的) •in defence of保卫……；为……辩护 •defend sb/sth from/against sb/(doing) sth 保护某人(物)免受伤害；保卫某人(物) (1)Tony sprang to the defence(defend) of the 21-year-old，saying he was not to blame. (2)我和妻子用胡椒喷雾保护自己不受北极熊的攻击。(2020·浙江7月，读后续写) My wife and I used pepper spray to defend ourselves from/against being attacked by the polar bear.(defend) (3)我们对那些为保卫祖国而牺牲的士兵表示极大的敬意，我们会永远怀念他们。 We show great respect for the soldiers who died in defence of our country and we will cherish the memory of them forever.(defence) in despair 处于绝望中 in a hurry匆忙地 in anxiety焦虑地 in a bad mood心情不好 in trouble处于困难中 in panic 惊慌地 in surprise/astonishment 惊讶地 in a dilemma处于两难境地 in high spirits兴高采烈；情绪高涨 (1)Although her heart was fluttering in anxiety(anxious)，Kate was in a hurry to go to school，because she had an important exam. (2)人们兴高采烈地在海滩上玩耍。当局发布海啸警报后，游客们在恐慌和绝望中逃离。 People were playing in high spirits on the beach.After the authority issued a tsunami warning，tourists fled in panic and in despair. (3)作为社区的一员，我们应该向有困难的邻居伸出援手。 As a member of the community，we should give a helping hand to our neighbors who are in trouble. (4)我的室友还在犹豫是出国深造还是在国内找份工作。 My roommate is still in a dilemma of whether to go abroad for further study or get a job at home. would rather do...than do...　He would rather sacrifice his life than see damage done to state property.他宁可牺牲自己的生命，也不愿看到国家财产遭受损失。 •would rather do sth than do sth 宁愿做某事(而)不愿做某事 同义短语还有： would do sth rather than do sth prefer to do sth rather than do sth prefer doing sth to doing sth •would rather＋从句：表示对现在或将来的虚拟用一般过去时；表示对过去的虚拟用过去完成时。 (1)The lady would rather she had bought(buy) the green sneakers that matched her trousers perfectly. (2)The businessman is so busy today that he would rather the meeting were held(hold) tomorrow. (3)锻炼可以帮助我们燃烧脂肪，所以我们宁愿参加更多的户外活动，而不是长时间坐在电视机或电脑前。 ①Workout can help us burn off fat，so we would rather take part in more outdoor activities than sit in front of TV sets or computers for a long time.(would rather do sth than do sth) ②Workout can help us burn off fat，so we prefer to take part in more outdoor activities rather than sit in front of TV sets or computers for a long time.(prefer to do sth rather than do sth) Ⅰ.一词多义/熟词生义练——清除阅读障碍 1．remove A.去除，使消失　B.开除，免除　C.脱去衣物　D.移开，拿开 (1)He removed his hand from her shoulder and said goodbye to her. D (2)I removed all my clothes the second I got home because they were drenched(湿透的)． C (3)Three members were removed from the club for persistent bad behaviour. B (4)The agreement removes the last serious obstacle to the signing of the treaty. A 2．position (1)If volunteer positions do not meet these needs，people may not wish to participate. C (2)Adjusting to an upright position was quite a challenge，especially when the bones had to support an extra-large skull. A (3)I paused to catch my breath and then positioned myself to take the best photo of this panorama. D (4)I didn’t come from a family with wealth or position，but I did manage to get a master’s degree in fine arts. B 3．快速阅读下列句子并猜测句中加黑词汇的意思 (1)With such busy lives，it can be hard to try and find the time to work out.锻炼 (2)Though he tried with all his might to push the rock，it remained unmoved.力量，力气 (3)Here is the entry from my journal written after that phone conversation.条目，记录 (4)He was one of the first people to use high speed flash in bird photography.闪光灯 Ⅱ.核心知识强化练——巩固语言知识 1．He would rather give up the chance than compromise on his principles. 2．I always remember his words：Nothing in the world can take the place of persistence! 3．He has a large number of interests，ranging(range) from playing chess to swimming. 4．Aimed(aim) at improving the students’ ability of listening and speaking，this activity is very popular. 5．Knowing that my parents allowed me to spend money of my own，I was in great surprise.(2021·浙江) 6．The report found that youngsters felt their friendships could be at risk if they did not respond to social media posts quickly and around the clock. 7．The media supply lots of information to us every day，so they can keep us informed of the latest news. 8．So，if it is a sunny day，most of people prefer to do(do) some outdoor activities and enjoy the warm sunshine rather than stay at home. 9．Qian Xuesen，an outstanding scientist who made great contributions to our country’s defensive/defence(defend) system will be honored forever. 10．This is a lifestyle that is damaging us，making us unhealthy，stressed(stress) out，and unhappy. Ⅲ.写作增分练——提升语用能力 (应用文写作之报道) 1．3月5号，为了纪念雷锋，我们学校组织了一系列的志愿活动。(in memory of) On March 5th，our school organized a wide range of voluntary activities in memory of Lei Feng. 2．经过一番激烈的讨论后，我们都同意这一想法——我们要去一所附近的养老院为老年人做些事情。(that引导的同位语从句) After a heated discussion，we all agreed with the idea that we went to a nearby nursing home to do something for the elderly. 3．我们组是第一个到达目的地的。我们一到那里，就开始扫地、擦窗户、洗衣服。(the first...to do...) Our group was the first to arrive at the destination.As soon as we got there，we began to sweep the floor，clean the windows and do some washing. 4．午饭后，我们为他们表演精彩节目，我发现所有的老年人都沉浸在幸福中。(find＋宾语＋宾补) After lunch，we gave wonderful performances to them and I found all the elderly immersed in happiness. 5．通过这个有意义的活动，我意识到没有什么可以替代爱和关爱，我们要帮助那些需要帮助的人。(replace) Through the meaningful activity，I realized that nothing could replace love and care and we should help those in need. (2022·新高考全国Ⅱ) Like many young people，Jessica wants to travel the globe.Unlike most of them，this 25-year-old is doing it 1 .She and her husband have spent the last two years traveling the world，stopping everywhere from Paris to Singapore.It might sound like one long，expensive 2 ，but the couple has an unusual way to make their travel 3 . They’re part of a new form of the 4 economy：an online group of house sitters.Throughout their no-cost stays in 5 homes，they feed pets and water plants in the homeowner’s 6 . It’s not all sightseeing.The two travelers carefully 7 their trips，scheduling their days around the pets that are sometimes difficult to 8 .But house sitting also offers a level of 9 they can’t find in a hotel.“It’s like 10 at a friend’s house，” Jessica says. The couple has a high 11 rate in getting accepted as house sitters and they always go beyond the homeowner’s 12 .For Jessica，that means 13 plenty of pictures of happy pets，keeping the house 14 and leaving a nice small gift before heading to the next house.“You want to make the homeowner feel that they made the right 15 ，” she says. 1．A.indoors B．online C．single-handed D．full-time 答案　D 解析　根据后文“She and her husband...from Paris to Singapore.”可知，这位25岁的年轻人全职从事这项工作。 2．A.game B．service C．vacation D．procedure 答案　C 解析　结合上文可知，杰西卡在环球旅行，所以是假期。 3．A.safe B．busy C．helpful D．affordable 答案　D 解析　根据上文“It might sound like one long，expensive”可知，这听起来是个昂贵的假期，但这对夫妇有一种不同寻常的方式让他们的旅行变得可负担得起。 4．A.local B．private C．sharing D．agricultural 答案　C 解析　根据后文“economy：an online group of house sitters”以及“their no-cost stays”可知是共享经济。 5．A.strangers’ B．parents’ C．co-workers’ D．neighbors’ 答案　A 解析　根据上文可知，他们在环球旅行，所以是住在陌生人的家里。 6．A.favor B．defense C．honor D．absence 答案　D 解析　根据上文“they feed pets and water plants in the homeowner’s”可推知，此处指在房主不在的时候他们喂宠物、给植物浇水。 7．A.plan B．explain C．compare D．complete 答案　A 解析　根据后文“their trips，scheduling their days”可知此处指计划旅行。 8．A.buy B．transport C．choose D．please 答案　D 解析　根据上文“the pets that are sometimes difficult to”可知，某些宠物有时很难照管、取悦。 9．A.support B．comfort C．control D．attention 答案　B 解析　结合后文提到像住在朋友家一样，可见照看房子也能提供一种在酒店里找不到的舒适感。 10．A.cooking B．staying C．waiting D．studying 答案　B 解析　根据后文“at a friend’s house”可知，此处表示像待在朋友家一样，应用stay。 11．A.success B．survival C．growth D．unemployment 答案　A 解析　根据后文“rate in getting accepted as house sitters”可知，此处指他们被接受为看管房屋的人的成功率很高。 12．A.budget B．abilities C．expectations D．understanding 答案　C 解析　上文提到这对夫妇被接受为看管房屋的人的成功率很高，是因为他们总是超出房主的预期。 13．A.admiring B．donating C．sending D．borrowing 答案　C 解析　根据后文“plenty of pictures of happy pets”可知，此处指给房主发送宠物的照片。 14．A.clean B．open C．simple D．empty 答案　A 解析　根据上文可知，他们的职责就是照看房子，所以要保持房子的清洁。 15．A.guess B．decision C．response D．impression 答案　B 解析　是房主选择了他们当看管房屋的人，所以他们想让房主感觉做了正确的决定。 细研真题 Ⅰ.宏观把握——抓住主旨大意，理清文章脉络 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要叙述了杰西卡和丈夫通过当看管房屋的人来环球旅行的事情。 文章的脉络如下： ↓ ↓ ↓ Ⅱ.微观排障——长难句分析 The two travelers carefully plan their trips，scheduling their days around the pets that are sometimes difficult to please. 分析　该句为主从复合句。that引导的是定语从句；现在分词短语作状语，与主语之间是一种主动关系。 译文　这两位旅行者仔细地计划他们的旅行，把他们的日子安排在宠物身边，这些宠物有时很难取悦。 Ⅲ.主题词汇积累　语篇中黑体词汇为主题词汇 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My first year living in Los Angeles，I was a birthday-party clown(小丑)．I struggled a lot with my identity because，though I viewed myself as a filmmaker，everyone in my life viewed me as this ridiculous day job.To make matters more confusing，being a clown is itself an identity-masking job.You wear make-up to cover your features.Sometimes I’d have to wear a mask and completely cover my face. For certain parties，I’d have to go as a specific character.The way that would work is someone from the company would drop off costumes for me the night before a party at an appointed spot.It was like a shameful deal. One night，they handed me my trash bag and said，“Tomorrow you’re going to be Batman.” Now，keep in mind that at the time I had a giant moustache.I know：a clown with a moustache—that’s a huge red flag for parents.But I hadn’t wanted to change my physical appearance for that job，because that would have been me subconsciously(下意识地) admitting I was more of a clown than an artist.So for the party，I chose not to shave. The next day，I went to the party.It was at a huge public park，and I had to leave my car parked far enough away so that the kids couldn’t see me getting off my car.So I was all the way on the edge of the park，and the only way for me to get to the party was to walk to it.Normally at these parties，all you have going for you is the element of surprise.You pop in through the front door：“Surprise！Batman’s here！” All the kids go crazy.Without the element of surprise，these visits are meaningless.So I thought，“Should I try to make an entrance(入场) for them？” Reflecting what to do next，I heard a scream，“Look，a Batman with a moustache！” Suddenly，the entire party broke out into laughter. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 I was so embarrassed and wanted to run back. I stared at the cake with a clown wearing a moustache in disbelief. 分步练写作 第一步　快读文本　获取信息 故事五要素信息： 人物 小丑、孩子们 时间 在洛杉矶的第一年的某个晚上及接下来的第二天 地点 在一个生日会上 事件 在工作中很纠结自己的身份定位 起因 每个人都把当小丑看成是一份可笑的日常工作，扮演小丑是一项伪装身份的工作，作者不得不通过化妆或戴上面具来掩盖自己的容貌。 故事发展线索：纠结于身份定位→得知需要扮成蝙蝠侠→决定不刮胡子→所有人大笑起来 情感发展线索：茫然(迷茫于身份)→纠结(不想改变自己的样貌)→坚定(决定不刮胡子)→尴尬(孩子们看到了有胡子的蝙蝠侠) 第二步　细读首句　合理推测 1．针对续写段首1：I was so embarrassed and wanted to run back.设问： (1)Would the clown run back? (2)What’s the clown’s feeling and what would he do? (3)What would the kids do? 续写的第一段首句讲的是作者感到非常尴尬，想要逃离。接着应该写他没有逃离，他的内心感受和想法以及孩子们之后的表现。 2．针对续写段首2：I stared at the cake with a clown wearing a moustache in disbelief.设问： (1)Why did the cake happen to be a clown wearing a moustache? (2)What’s the feeling of the clown? (3)Was he still confused about his identity? 续写的第二段首句讲的是作者难以置信地盯着蛋糕上留着小胡子的小丑。接着应该写蛋糕上的小丑为什么有胡子，作者对此的内心感受以及他最后对自己的职业感到自豪。 第三步　恰当用词　打造靓句 1．我像冻住的冰一样站在那里，从未想过自己会陷入这样的两难境地，感到无比的尴尬和恐慌。 Standing frozen as ice，never had I thought about being trapped in such a dilemma that I was flooded with overwhelming awkwardness and panic. 2．深吸一口气后，我开始奔跑，斗篷(cape)随风飘荡，我的尴尬消失在风中。 After taking a deep breath，I started running，with my cape billowing and my embarrassment vanishing away in the wind. 3．当笑声完全被响亮的欢呼声和掌声淹没时，我在一个令人惊叹的生日蛋糕前停下来。 When laughter was totally submerged by loud cheering and applause，I pulled myself up in front of an amazing birthday cake. 4．突然，一个让人难以置信但唯一合理的答案出现在我的脑海里：今天是我的生日！ All of a sudden，an unbelievable but the only reasonable answer occurred to me：today is my birthday! 5．没有什么比被接纳为一个迷人的艺术家更好的了。 Nothing could be better than being admitted and accepted as a charming artist. 第四步　衔接过渡　组句成篇 在确定了思路和内容之后，续写时，要注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。 参考范文 I was so embarrassed and wanted to run back.Standing frozen as ice，never had I thought about being trapped in such a dilemma that I was flooded with overwhelming awkwardness and panic.Though my mind struggled，my identity as a clown would not allow my body to escape on any occasion.An extraordinary and surprising entrance must be made to arouse kids’ attention in today’s party，I thought.After taking a deep breath，I started running，with my cape billowing and my embarrassment vanishing away in the wind.When laughter was totally submerged by loud cheering and applause，I pulled myself up in front of an amazing birthday cake. I stared at the cake with a clown wearing a moustache in disbelief.Surprised and puzzled，my eyes grew wide and my mind functioned quickly to attempt to figure out the possibilities.All of a sudden，an unbelievable but the only reasonable answer occurred to me：today is my birthday！My heart beating wildly and palms sweating，a voice came and confirmed my thought，“Happy birthday，Batman！You are an artist！” More and more voices rising around，they naturally and eventually fused into a one and plunged into my ear “Charming clown！Charming artist！”A warmth spread through my body，from my hair to toes.Nothing could be better than being admitted and accepted as a charming artist. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$