Unit 6 Period 8 Writing—Writing safety guidelines （课件）-【步步高】2023-2024学年高一英语必修第三册（外研版2019）

Period 8 Writing—Writing safety guidelines Unit 6 Disaster and hope 细读文本 写作指导 写作实践 细读 文本 3 1.What is the purpose of the safety guidelines? A.To increase readers’ chances of surviving a natural disaster. B.To tell readers basic information about hurricanes. C.To remind readers to avoid hurricanes. D.To warn readers that glass structures are dangerous. Activity 1　Read for some details. √ 2.Which of the following should NOT be done before a hurricane? A.Protect your property. B.Make sure you prepare sufficient supplies. C.Open windows. D.Find proper shelter to protect yourself. Activity 1　Read for some details. √ 3.Which is NOT mentioned in the guidelines? A.Don’t go out during a hurricane. B.Don’t stay close to windows. C.Don’t go near any glass structures. D.Don’t go to coastal cities. Activity 1　Read for some details. √ 1.Being prepared can when a disaster strikes. 2.Safety guidelines tell us . Activity 2　Read for the structures. increase our chances of survival what to do in face of a disaster 7 3.According to the safety guidelines，we can learn when we write a guideline，we can use the following outline.(写作模板) ...Safety Guidelines Introduction：...is one of the most dangerous natural disasters.It may come suddenly and...It’s important to learn some safety guidelines and get prepared for...Here are some tips on... Things to do before...：Listen to weather forecast...Remember to prepare... Things to do during...：Keep away from...Try to move to a place... Things not to do during...：Do not...Never lose hope! 1.Please find out the sentences that tell things to do before a hurricane. Activity 3　Read for some good sentences. 答案　(1)Protect your property：close windows and tape them up，and bring indoors anything that could blow away. (2)Make sure you have sufficient food，water，medicine and batteries for electrical appliances. (3)If you cannot get home in time，find other shelter as soon as you can. 2.Please find out the sentences that tell things to do during a hurricane. 答案　(1)Stay in the shelter. (2)tay away from windows. (3)Listen to weather warnings. 3.Please find out the sentences that tell things not to do during a hurricane. 答案　(1)Do not go outside. (2)Do not go near any glass structures. (3)Do not assume the storm has passed even if the wind stops.Dangerous winds may return. 返 回 写作 指导 12 本单元的写作任务是写一篇安全指南，安全指南类的文章属于说明文。这类文章通常会要求学生根据所给的信息，给读者提出若干条实用的建议。写这类文章时，通常要包括如下方面： 一、语言特点 多用祈使句，安全指南主要是对读者提出的要求和注意事项。多用简单句，使读者一目了然。必须做到明确清楚，不能含糊其词。 二、时态 谓语动词多用一般现在时。 三、写正文时应注意的问题 1.围绕一个主题来展开，突出写作的重点； 2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。 [常用表达] 1.earthquake地震 2.shelter避难所 3.claim夺去(生命) 4.destroy摧毁；破坏 5.natural disaster自然灾害 6.keep calm保持冷静 7.sufficient food and water充足的食物和水 15 8.keep...in mind记住…… 9.keep away from远离…… 10.turn off the power supply关闭电源 11.join in basic medical training参加基础医疗知识培训 16 [增分靓句] 1.Natural disasters frequently take place on Earth. 地球上经常发生自然灾害。 2.Therefore，it is important to learn some tips to protect you from possible injuries. 因此，学习一些保护你免受伤害的技巧十分重要。 3.Knowing what to do during...helps greatly reduce the damage. 在……发生时了解应该做什么能够很大程度上减少损失。 17 4.Here，I’d like to offer you some advice/tips on how to... 现在，我想就如何……给你一些建议/提示。 5.Here is my advice on how to... 这是我关于如何……的建议。 6.It is recommended that... 推荐…… 7.The first thing to do is keep away from... 首先要做的是远离…… 18 8.We ought to/We should/We’d better... 我们应该/最好…… 9.Make sure to keep calm and do not...when facing the disaster. 面对灾难，要保持冷静，不要…… 10.As long as we can keep the tips in mind，we can increase the chances of surviving the disaster. 只要我们能记住这些窍门，我们就能增加从灾难中幸存下来的机会。 返 回 19 写作 实践 20 夏天即将来临，暴雨增多，积水增加，洪水泛滥。新华学校为了增加学生的安全自救常识，打算准备一份防洪安全指南。请你以Flood Safety Guidelines为题目拟定指南内容。 第一步　审题谋篇 [审题] 写作要求是写一篇防洪安全指南。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：说明文 2.主体时态：一般现在时 3.主体人称：第二人称 [谋篇] 第一段：简述洪水的危害及学习安全指南的重要性，并由此引出建议； 第二段：防洪前要做的事情； 第三段：防洪中要做的事情； 第四段：防洪中不能做的事情。 第二步　遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1.自然灾害 2.卷走 3.安全指南 4.为……做好准备 5.听天气预报 6.防护和急救箱 _______________ ___________ _______________ ________________ __________________________ _______________________ natural disaster sweep away safety guidelines get prepared for listen to the weather forecast safeguard and first aid kit 7.避开 8.紧握 9.远离 10.私人物品 ____________ _______ _______________ __________________ keep clear of hold to keep away from personal belongings [连词成句] 1.洪水是最危险的自然灾害之一。 ______________________________________________________________ 2.它可能突然来到，卷走一切。 ______________________________________________________________ 3.学习一些安全指南为洪灾做准备是非常重要的，尤其是那些生活在河边的人。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. It may come suddenly and sweep away everything. Learning some safety guidelines and getting prepared for a flood are very important，especially for those living near a river. 4.首先要做的事情是听天气预报。 ______________________________________________________________ 5.试着搬到足够高的地方以远离洪水(floodwater)，比如高楼的顶层、房顶等。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 6.躲开电源是很重要的。 ______________________________________________________________ The first thing to do is listen to the weather forecast. Try to move to a place high enough to keep clear of floodwater，such as the top floor of a building，the roof，etc. It is important to keep away from electricity. 7.不要喝洪水。 ______________________________________________________________ 8.洪水不干净。 ______________________________________________________________ Don’t drink floodwater. Floodwater is not clean. 第三步　句式升级 1.把句1和句2合并为并列句。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 2.将句3升级为it作形式主语。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 3.用连词连接句7和句8。 ______________________________________________________________ Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters，and it may come suddenly and sweep away everything. It is very important to learn some safety guidelines and get prepared for a flood，especially for those living near a river. Don’t drink floodwater as it is not clean. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 Flood Safety Guidelines Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters，and it may come suddenly and sweep away everything.It is important to learn some safety guidelines and get prepared for a flood，especially for those living near a river.Here are some tips on flood safety. Things to do before a flood： •The first thing to do is listen to the weather forecast. •Move to a safe place immediately if there is an order. •Prepare enough food and clean water. •Remember to prepare a safeguard and first aid kit. Things to do during a flood： •Try to move to a place high enough to keep clear of floodwater，such as the top floor of a building. •Hold to a tree or a wood block if you are in water. •It is important to keep away from electricity. Things not to do during a flood： •Do not drink floodwater as it is not clean. •Do not take too many personal belongings with you. •Never give up hope. 返 回 $$