Unit 2 Period 8 Writing—Writing a biography （课件）-【步步高】2023-2024学年高一英语必修第三册（外研版2019）

Period 8 Writing—Writing a biography Unit 2 Making a difference 细读文本 写作指导 写作实践 细读 文本 3 Read Tu Youyou’s CV and answer the following questions. 1.Which is NOT the reason why Tu Youyou is known as a great scientist? A.She has achieved great success in medical field. B.She has won the Nobel Prize. C.She has been a leader of a team. D.She has gained great achievements. Activity 1　Read for some details. √ 2.The passage is about . 3.This passage describes Tu Youyou on the basis of as a clue. Tu Youyou’s achievements and awards time Ⅰ.Read Tu Youyou’s CV and fill in the blanks to learn the structure of a biography. Introduction：1. ，managing to 2. from a Chinese herb. Major events： • (1951－1955) She was learning in 3. . • (1955－present) She worked in 4._________________________________ __________. Activity 2　Read for the structures. Tu Youyou extract qinghaosu Beijing Medical College China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences 6 • (1969) She was the leader of a research team aiming to 5._____________ _____________________. • (1972) Her team managed to extract qinghaosu from 6. . • (1986) Her team obtained a 7. for qinghaosu. • (2015) She won 8. . • (2019) She was nominated for “9.________________________________ ___________”. Your opinion on her contributions： She is admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to 10._________________. discover a treatment for malaria a Chinese herb New Drug Certificate the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine The Greatest Person of the 20th Century medical research 7 Ⅱ.According to the biography，we can learn when we write a biography，we can use the following outline.(写作模板) Introduction：Name of the person/the biggest achievement. Main body：Major events.(in time order) Conclusion：Your opinion on his/her contributions. 1.Please find out the sentences that they use to describe Tu’s achievements. Activity 3　Read for some good sentences. 答案　(1)Worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria (2)Managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is very effective in fighting malaria 2.Please find out the sentences that they use to describe Tu’s awards. 答案　(1)Obtained a New Drug Certificate for qinghaosu，issued by the Ministry of Health of China (2)Won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering a novel therapy against malaria (3)Nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century” 返 回 写作 指导 11 本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物传记，属于记叙文。传记是记载人物生平事迹的一种文体，大多按照时间、空间或逻辑顺序。传记写作多采用倒叙法，先对人物进行简单介绍，然后介绍其出生、成长过程、主要事件和成就、思想、品德和情操等，最后进行评论，表达作者的看法。传记一般不虚构，纪实性是传记的基本要求。 一、格式 此类文章以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物写一件或几件事，一般按时间顺序来写。写人物传记时要重点描述其出生年月、主要事迹以及人们的评价等。文章一般可按照“总——分——总”的结构来写作。 二、时态 因描写的事情都是过去发生的事，所以通常用一般过去时。介绍他人的经历和事迹应用第三人称。 三、写正文时应注意的问题 1.围绕一个主题来展开； 2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”； 3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。 [常用表达] 1.be born in出生在 2.encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 3.set a good example to sb给某人树立了一个好榜样 4.graduate from毕业于 5.kind-hearted好心的 6.have a deep effect on对……有深刻的影响 7.be regarded/acknowledged as...被认为是…… 8.obtain doctor’s degree获得博士学位 15 9.be devoted to sth/doing sth献身于…… 10.further study进修； 深造 11.think highly of高度评价 16 [增分靓句] 1.He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 2.He/She was born in 1911. 他/她出生于1911年。 3.He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University. 他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 17 4.He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是如此一个博学/意志坚强的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 5.He/She devoted all his/her life to work. 他/她毕生都致力于工作。 6.He/She made great contributions to our country. 他/她为我们国家做出了巨大贡献。 7.He/She was highly thought of by many people. 他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 返 回 18 写作 实践 19 请根据教材P30的信息，写一篇英语作文对中国首位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的科学家屠呦呦作简单介绍。 第一步　审题谋篇 [审题] 写作要求是介绍人物——屠呦呦。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇人物传记。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是人物传记，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 [谋篇] 第一段：开门见山，简要介绍人物以及主要成就； 第二段：具体介绍人物经历过的主要事件； 第三段：进行评论和总结。 第二步　遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1.第一次 2.终身兼首席研究员 3.疟疾的治疗方法 4.提取 5.贡献 6.被授予 _______________ ___________________________ ______________________ _______ ____________ ________________ for the first time a tenured and chief researcher a treatment for malaria extract contribution be presented with 7.被提名为 8.证明了中草药的功效 9.把时间和精力贡献于…… _________________ ___________________________________ _______________________________ be nominated for prove the effectiveness of Chinese herbs devote one’s time and energy to... [连词成句] 1.2015年，中国科学家首次获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 2.她在1930年12月30日出生于浙江省宁波市。 ______________________________________________________________ 3.1951年至1955年，屠呦呦就读于北京医学院。 ______________________________________________________________ In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. She was born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930. Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. 4.1955年起，她在中国中医科学院任终身兼首席研究员。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 5.1969年，她担任一个研究小组的组长，该小组旨在发现疟疾的治疗方法。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 6.到1972年，她成功地从一种中草药中提取出了能有效对抗疟疾的青蒿素。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher. In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team that aimed to discover a treatment for malaria. By 1972，she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria. 7.由于她的巨大贡献，她在85岁时获得了诺贝尔奖。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 8.2019年，她还被提名为“20世纪最伟大的人”。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 9.她不仅拯救了许多疟疾患者，而且还证明了中草药的有效性。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Because of her great contribution，she was presented with the Nobel Prize at the age of 85. In 2019，she was also nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th century”. She not only has saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs. 10.她之所以受人钦佩，还因为她把大部分时间和精力都用于医学研究。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ She is also admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. 第三步　句式升级 1.将句2、3合并成一句。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 2.用分词作定语改写句5。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________3.将句9改成倒装句。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria. Not only has she saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria.By 1972， she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria.Because of her great contribution，she was presented with the Nobel Prize at the age of 85.In 2019，she was also nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th century”. Not only has she saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs.Furthermore，she is admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. 返 回 $$