Unit4 单元话题作文专练-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点提优训练（人教版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点提优训练（人教版） Unit4 单元话题作文专练 写作主题 学会写一篇谈论家庭相处和人际交往的文章。 美文鉴赏学习 Not only adults but also teenagers have problems in their life. Here is a survey (调查) showing the main problems of teenagers. They feel stressed because they have too much homework to do both at school and at home. And some parents usually send them to different classes at weekends in spite of (尽管) the double reduction policy (双减政策). They don’t have their own time to do what they are interested in. Some students even have problems getting on with their classmates. Now more and more teenagers are getting short-sighted (近视). They often read in bed or keep reading for a long time without having a rest. Some of them are crazy about playing computer games. Some spend too much time watching TV. Another serious problem among teenagers is that many of them are becoming fat. They eat too much junk food， and they take little exercise. I think teenagers should think of ways to deal with the problems. They should make a plan for study and hobbies and find time to relax as much as possible. 重点句型解析 ★They feel stressed because they have too much homework to do both at school and at home. 他们感到压力很大，因为他们在学校和家里有太多的作业要做。 because引导原因状语从句，表示“因为”。 because of 是介词短语，后接名词或短语，表示“由于”。 写作训练 现代青少年和父母沟通也会出现许多的问题，我们该如何和父母相处呢？假设你是Jack，请给杂志社的编辑写一封关于如何与父母相处的信。内容包括： 1.谈谈青少年和父母相处出现的问题； 2.简要阐述出现这些问题的原因(至少三点)； 3.提出解决问题的建议(至少两点)。 参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam， These days，most of teenagers feel it hard to get on with their parents.They often argue with their parents.Sometimes they even don’t talk to their parents for a long time.(出现的问题，1分)Why？  First， parents care more about their grades.Children have little time to do things they like.(原因一，1分)Second， they often compare their kids with others.They always want their kids to be the best.Children have much pressure from their parents.(原因二，1分) Third， some parents are too busy with their work so that they seldom talk with their children and know little about them.(原因三，1分)  In my opinion， as children， we should often communicate with our parents.Communication is the best way to solve the problem.If we have problems， we should ask our parents for help.(建议一，1分)What’s more， we should try our best to study hard so that our parents feel happy.(建议二，1分)  I hope all children could find a proper way to get on well with their parents. Yours truly， Jack 提优训练 1．假如你是初二的学生刘宇，你酷爱篮球，打算长大后成为专业（professional）篮球运动员。但你的父母认为花大量时间在篮球上，就不能上好的大学。请你给父母写一封信，表达你对他们的爱和理解，同时提出你的想法和解决办法。 要求：1、提出你的想法并给出至少3个解决的办法； 2、字数：不少于80词； 3、文章中不得出现真实人名、校名。 Dear Mom and Dad, I’d like to tell you how I feel these days. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．人的一生中总会遇到难题，总会有不同的烦恼。有人害怕、选择逃避；也有人积极应对、想办法解决问题。为此，某班开展了“如何对待生活中的问题和烦恼？”的调查活动。请根据下面的图表信息和要点提示，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 要点提示： 1. 描述调查结果，简要分析可能的原因。 2. 描述你曾遇到的一个困难（烦恼）和处理方式。 3. 生词： deal with（处理）；according to the survey（根据调查） It is normal to have problems and worries in life. People deal with their problems in different ways. According to the survey ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在生活中，每个人都难免会做错一些事，这些事总会让人感到遗憾或后悔。每当回想起这样的事情，你的内心会有什么样的感受和触动呢？你是否曾用适当的方式向你的家人、老师、同学和朋友表达过歉意呢？请以“I Should Say Sorry to…”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你亲身经历的一件小事，以表达你的真实情感。 I Should Say Sorry to ________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“如何与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。 要点提示： 1. 与父母和谐相处很重要； 2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议； (1)理解与尊重父母； (2)多与父母交流。 (3)与父母和谐相处的感受。 要求： 1. 短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯； 2. 词数80左右。 How to Get on Well with Our Parents? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克 (Frank) 来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。 写作要点： 1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的； 2. 打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习； 3. 理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处； 4. 向父母道歉，与他们沟通； 5. 不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。 写作要求： 1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥； 2．词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 6．最近，你的美国笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件，提出你的一些建议。   写作要点： 1.遇到问题多倾诉,多与他人分享情绪； 2.尊重他人,与人为善； 3.诚实守信……   写作要求： 1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。   参考词汇：share, solve, respect, friendly, be friendly to   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在生活中,我们总会有一些烦恼。请根据以下提示用英语写一封信,向Dr. Helper说说你在家里遇到的烦心事,内容可适当发挥。提示:①哥哥播放CD总是声音很大；②哥哥总是拿你的学习用具且不归还。 Dear Dr. Helper, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Looking for Help 8．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。 要点：1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；2．打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习；3．理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；4．向父母道歉，与他们沟通；5．不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。 要求：1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥；2．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 9． 假如你是David，你的笔友Mark来邮件谈到自己的烦恼：性格比较内向，不善于与人交往，与同学的关系也不太融洽，所以在学习和生活中的压力很大。请你给他回一封邮件，提一些建议。词数：70词左右。邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mark， Thanks for your email.I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 10．每个人都不可能没有烦恼，当你有烦恼时，试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你的生活中的很多方面。所以生活中应当多相信自己，笑对人生，多与父母、朋友沟通。 请你展开想象，写一篇文章。 要求： 1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 2、提示词：feel happy, mirror, the best, talk with, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express feelings 3、不少于80个单词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点提优训练（人教版） Unit4 单元话题作文专练 写作主题 学会写一篇谈论家庭相处和人际交往的文章。 美文鉴赏学习 Not only adults but also teenagers have problems in their life. Here is a survey (调查) showing the main problems of teenagers. They feel stressed because they have too much homework to do both at school and at home. And some parents usually send them to different classes at weekends in spite of (尽管) the double reduction policy (双减政策). They don’t have their own time to do what they are interested in. Some students even have problems getting on with their classmates. Now more and more teenagers are getting short-sighted (近视). They often read in bed or keep reading for a long time without having a rest. Some of them are crazy about playing computer games. Some spend too much time watching TV. Another serious problem among teenagers is that many of them are becoming fat. They eat too much junk food， and they take little exercise. I think teenagers should think of ways to deal with the problems. They should make a plan for study and hobbies and find time to relax as much as possible. 重点句型解析 ★They feel stressed because they have too much homework to do both at school and at home. 他们感到压力很大，因为他们在学校和家里有太多的作业要做。 because引导原因状语从句，表示“因为”。 because of 是介词短语，后接名词或短语，表示“由于”。 写作训练 现代青少年和父母沟通也会出现许多的问题，我们该如何和父母相处呢？假设你是Jack，请给杂志社的编辑写一封关于如何与父母相处的信。内容包括： 1.谈谈青少年和父母相处出现的问题； 2.简要阐述出现这些问题的原因(至少三点)； 3.提出解决问题的建议(至少两点)。 参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam， These days，most of teenagers feel it hard to get on with their parents.They often argue with their parents.Sometimes they even don’t talk to their parents for a long time.(出现的问题，1分)Why？  First， parents care more about their grades.Children have little time to do things they like.(原因一，1分)Second， they often compare their kids with others.They always want their kids to be the best.Children have much pressure from their parents.(原因二，1分) Third， some parents are too busy with their work so that they seldom talk with their children and know little about them.(原因三，1分)  In my opinion， as children， we should often communicate with our parents.Communication is the best way to solve the problem.If we have problems， we should ask our parents for help.(建议一，1分)What’s more， we should try our best to study hard so that our parents feel happy.(建议二，1分)  I hope all children could find a proper way to get on well with their parents. Yours truly， Jack 提优训练 1．假如你是初二的学生刘宇，你酷爱篮球，打算长大后成为专业（professional）篮球运动员。但你的父母认为花大量时间在篮球上，就不能上好的大学。请你给父母写一封信，表达你对他们的爱和理解，同时提出你的想法和解决办法。 要求：1、提出你的想法并给出至少3个解决的办法； 2、字数：不少于80词； 3、文章中不得出现真实人名、校名。 Dear Mom and Dad, I’d like to tell you how I feel these days. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．人的一生中总会遇到难题，总会有不同的烦恼。有人害怕、选择逃避；也有人积极应对、想办法解决问题。为此，某班开展了“如何对待生活中的问题和烦恼？”的调查活动。请根据下面的图表信息和要点提示，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 要点提示： 1. 描述调查结果，简要分析可能的原因。 2. 描述你曾遇到的一个困难（烦恼）和处理方式。 3. 生词： deal with（处理）；according to the survey（根据调查） It is normal to have problems and worries in life. People deal with their problems in different ways. According to the survey ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在生活中，每个人都难免会做错一些事，这些事总会让人感到遗憾或后悔。每当回想起这样的事情，你的内心会有什么样的感受和触动呢？你是否曾用适当的方式向你的家人、老师、同学和朋友表达过歉意呢？请以“I Should Say Sorry to…”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你亲身经历的一件小事，以表达你的真实情感。 I Should Say Sorry to ________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“如何与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。 要点提示： 1. 与父母和谐相处很重要； 2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议； (1)理解与尊重父母； (2)多与父母交流。 (3)与父母和谐相处的感受。 要求： 1. 短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯； 2. 词数80左右。 How to Get on Well with Our Parents? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克 (Frank) 来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。 写作要点： 1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的； 2. 打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习； 3. 理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处； 4. 向父母道歉，与他们沟通； 5. 不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。 写作要求： 1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥； 2．词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 6．最近，你的美国笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件，提出你的一些建议。   写作要点： 1.遇到问题多倾诉,多与他人分享情绪； 2.尊重他人,与人为善； 3.诚实守信……   写作要求： 1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。   参考词汇：share, solve, respect, friendly, be friendly to   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在生活中,我们总会有一些烦恼。请根据以下提示用英语写一封信,向Dr. Helper说说你在家里遇到的烦心事,内容可适当发挥。提示:①哥哥播放CD总是声音很大；②哥哥总是拿你的学习用具且不归还。 Dear Dr. Helper, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Looking for Help 8．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。 要点：1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；2．打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习；3．理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；4．向父母道歉，与他们沟通；5．不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。 要求：1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥；2．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 9． 假如你是David，你的笔友Mark来邮件谈到自己的烦恼：性格比较内向，不善于与人交往，与同学的关系也不太融洽，所以在学习和生活中的压力很大。请你给他回一封邮件，提一些建议。词数：70词左右。邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mark， Thanks for your email.I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 10．每个人都不可能没有烦恼，当你有烦恼时，试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你的生活中的很多方面。所以生活中应当多相信自己，笑对人生，多与父母、朋友沟通。 请你展开想象，写一篇文章。 要求： 1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 2、提示词：feel happy, mirror, the best, talk with, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express feelings 3、不少于80个单词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文： Dear Mom and Dad, I’d like to tell you how I feel these days. I love basketball very much and dream to be a professional basketball player. But you think if I spend much time on the basketball, I will not go to a good university. So you stop me playing it in my free time. I understand your concerns about my studies, and I want to assure you that I can balance both. Here are my solutions: First, I will manage my time more efficiently by making a schedule to ensure I have enough time for both studies and basketball. Second, I promise to study harder in my subjects and ask teachers for help when needed. Third, I will ensure all my homework and assignments can be finished in time. Thank you for your understanding and support. Your belief in my abilities means the world to me. I promise I won’t let you down. Yours, Liu Yu 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示的要点完成写作，可适当发挥，注意上下文连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的爱好和理想，并表达自己对父母做法的理解，引出下文自己的解决方法； 第二步，列出具体的解决办法； 第三步，书写结语，做出保证。 [亮点词汇] ①dream to be梦想成为 ②in my free time在我的空闲时间 ③both...and...两者都 ④ask sb for help向某人求助 ⑤let sb down让某人失望 [高分句型] ①But you think if I spend much time on the basketball, I will not go to a good university. （if引导的条件状语从句） ②I understand your concerns about my studies, and I want to assure you that I can balance both.（宾语从句） 2．例文： It is normal to have problems and worries in life. People deal with their problems in different ways. According to the survey of a class, 35% of the students choose to talk to their friends; 15% of the students keep problems to themselves; 50% of the students ask their parents or teachers for help. About half of the students turn to their teachers and parents for help because they believe that adults are more experienced than them and more helpful in solving problems. I had my own problem, too. When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t get along well with my mother. We fought a lot and I didn’t feel happy all the time. So I decided to talk to my English teacher. With her help, I get on well with my mother and we often share things with each other. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据材料提示和图表来写作，注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的要求，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分析题目，明确题目要求； 第二步，描述图表中提供的调查结果，简要分析可能的原因； 第三步，描述自己曾遇到过的一个困难或烦恼以及对此的处理方式。 [亮点词汇] ①turn to…for help向……求助 ②more experienced更有经验 ③get along well with与……相处融洽 ④share…with each other互相分享…… [高分句型] ①…they believe that adults are more experienced than them and more helpful in solving problems.（that引导宾语从句） ②When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t get along well with my mother.（when引导时间状语从句） 3．例文： I Should Say Sorry to My Mother Everyone has different kinds of experiences in life. Some make us enjoyable, some make us moved, some make us regretful…I always feel sorry for a thing in my heart. One Sunday afternoon, my mother asked me to help her with the housework. I refused her. I told her I was busy studying for a math test and I needed money to buy a book. She gave me 20 yuan at once. Then I left home, but I didn’t buy the book. I spent all the money playing computer games in an Internet bar. When I got back home, my mother had cooked delicious food for me. I couldn’t say anything, with tears in my eyes. When I think of it, I’m always so sorry, my heart is full of regret. I should say sorry to my mother. I should sincerely say, “Sorry, Mom!” 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：先补充完整题目，确定主题，结合自身经历的一件小事来表达自己的真实感受。注意行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用“每个人在生活中都有不同的经历”来引出要介绍的“感到抱歉的一件事”； 第二步，详细介绍这件事的经过； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愧疚之感。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb to do要求某人做某事 ②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 ③be busy doing sth忙于做某事 ④be full of充满 [高分句型] ①Some make us enjoyable, some make us moved, some make us regretful...（排比句） ②When I think of it, I’m always so sorry, my heart is full of regret.（When引导的时间状语从句） 4．例文： How to Get on Well with Our Parents? It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along well with our parents? Here is some of my advice. We should understand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better be in a polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we’d better help them do some things. I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other. Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents. 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。谈谈如何和自己的父母相处，根据所给提示信息，写一篇短文，要求紧扣要点，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文要求围绕如何与父母和睦相处为题写一篇文章参加征文大赛，所以人称以第一人称为主。时态以一般现在时为主。写作时可以分三个方面来写：文章开头先点明主题；然后介绍与父母和谐相处的具体建议；接着介绍自己与父母和谐相处的感受；最后总结全文，前后呼应。 5．例文： Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you. I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time. Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study. You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework. Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求写信给弗兰克，表明对打游戏的看法，提出和父母和睦相处的建议。写作时需承接开头围绕写作提示，亮明自己的看法。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、二人称和一般现在时为主来叙述，写作时要写出长时间打游戏的危害及对于改善亲子关系的建议，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 6．例文： Dear Tony,   I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I’m glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.   Firstly, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends, and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problems. Secondly, when you get along with your friends, you should respect them. Thirdly, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other. Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.   I hope everything will go well with you soon.   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，因此他写邮件向你寻求帮助，要求你根据要点提示给他写一封回信，给他一些建议；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一、第二人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 7．例文： I have a problem and I need your help. I have a brother. He is taller than me. Most of the time, we get on very well. We go to school and play sports together. But sometimes I'm angry with him. He often plays his CDs too loud when I'm doing my homework or reading. Also, he often takes my school things and doesn't return them to me. So sometimes I can't find my pen. eraser or ruler in class. I'm very upset. I don't know what to do. Can you help me? 【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文。题目要求向Dr. Helper写信，内容是说一下自己在家里遇到的烦心事。 2.写作指导：首先开头表明自己遇到了问题需要帮助，中间写明自己在家遇到问题的具体细节，最后询问对方是否能帮助自己。人称主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要采用一般现在时。准确运用时态，细节清楚明了，条理要清晰。 8．例文： Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you.I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time.Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study. You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework. Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求给你的笔友写一封英文回信，要求根据所给要点解决你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)遇到的一些问题。 2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细介绍了处理问题的一些建议；结构清晰；逻辑性强。 3、高分亮点： 短语：worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with。 句型：I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time；When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them。 【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 9．例文： Dear Mark, Thanks for your email. I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school. But I think there is no need to worry about it. You are very clever. I hope my advice can help. I think you should talk more with your friends about your problems. Try to be more outgoing and friendly to everyone. You can also tell your parents or your teachers that you need some help. Finally you should take part in some interesting activities after class to communicate often with your classmates. Hope you'll get along well with your classmates and make great progress in your study. Yours, David 【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，给你的笔友Mark回信，给他提一些建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am sorry to……，You are……，But I think there is no need to……，You can……，Finally you should……, Hope you'll……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系. 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头对Mark遇到的麻烦感到难过，接下来给他提了一些建议，最后希望他能和同学相处得好，并且学习进步。此处thanks for, worry about, talk with sb about sth, be friendly to, take part in, get along with, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 10．例文:      Nobody can be happy all the time. When you become unhappy, you should try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects. Here are some ways to make you feel better. 1. Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “I’m the best in the world. I can do anything.” 2. Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need. 【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时首先介绍每个人都有不好的情绪，然后介绍不好的情绪带来的影响，最后提出能让你感觉好点的方法，可适当发挥。 2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍情绪以及让你感觉好点的方法时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$