Unit 2 Out of this world（建议信）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）

Unit 2 Out of this world单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） Providing solutions for living beyond the Earth（建议信） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 建议信 2023年新高考I&II卷 建议信是日常生活中最常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议或忠告的书信。建议信要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等作为连接词依次陈述建议。 The usual writing structure is: Paragraph 1: Express the purpose of writing: to make suggestions; Paragraph 2: Specific suggestions and reasons; Paragraph 3: Point out the advantages of adopting the suggestion, express the wish. 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头段 说明写信的目的 (1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。 (2)I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。 (3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。 主体段 介绍详情、说明原因、表达建议 (1)I think the most suitable...for you is...我认为对你来说最适合的……是…… (2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议…… (3)You’d better.../It’s best to...你最好……/最好是…… (4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view，it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 (5)For one thing...；for another...一方面……，另一方面…… (6)If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… (7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。 结尾段 表达希望 (1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。 (2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。 (3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard. 看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。 【建议信书写必备句型】 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起…… During the afternoon, we’lltogether. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。 Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我建议…… 1．I’d like to suggest that… 2．May I suggest that…? 3．In my opinion… 4．I would like to make a recommendation that… 5．I am writing to advise… 6．If I were you, I would… 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 【建议信书写必备句型】 (1)I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。 (2)You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。 (3)I would like to suggest that... 我建议…… (4)Why not.../ Why don't you...？为何不……？ (5)I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。 (6)It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。 (7)I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。 (8)Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。 (9)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。 (10)Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。 【推荐信书写模板】 Dear ______ (称谓) You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference. Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三) I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议). Your sincerely, Li Hua Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua （2023年新高考I&II卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （2024·浙江绍兴·一模）假如你是李华，你校一年一度的 “Beauty of English” 主题英语节将于下月开展。现就其历年传统活动“英语配音大赛” (English Dubbing Contest) 和“英语文学沙龙” (English Literature Salon) 征集学生意见，请你给该活动负责人 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： (1) 保留的活动及理由； (2) 建议新的创意活动。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, This letter is in response to your request for advice concerning our school’s upcoming festival — Beauty of English. I strongly support retaining the English Dubbing Contest as it improves our English pronunciation, meanwhile making classic English movies accessible to a wider audience. For new activities, how about an “English Poster Design Show”? Students could express the essence of English literature, idioms, or famous quotes through visually compelling artistic posters. Not only would it foster their creativity and artistic expression, but it would also encourage them to delve deeper into the charm of English. English Debate Challenge is also not a bad idea. These additions would make the festival more vibrant and engaging. Looking forward to your consideration! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校一年一度的 “Beauty of English” 主题英语节将于下月开展。现就其历年传统活动“英语配音大赛” (English Dubbing Contest) 和“英语文学沙龙” (English Literature Salon) 征集学生意见，要求考生给该活动负责人 Chris写一封邮件提出自己的意见。 【详解】1.词汇积累 支持：support → be in favor of 提高：improve → enhance 与此同时：meanwhile → at the same time 培养：foster → cultivate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This letter is in response to your request for advice concerning our school’s upcoming festival — Beauty of English. 拓展句：This letter is in response to your request, which gives you some advice concerning our school’s upcoming festival — Beauty of English. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly support retaining the English Dubbing Contest as it improves our English pronunciation, meanwhile making classic English movies accessible to a wider audience. （运用了as引导状语从句以及现在分词作状语的结构） 【高分句型2】Not only would it foster their creativity and artistic expression, but it would also encourage them to delve deeper into the charm of English. （运用了not only位于句首引出的部分倒装的结构） (2024·山东·一模) 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）表示理解； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Frank, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Frank, As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. First of all, it’s crucial to decide on priorities. This way, you can make your schedule well- organized. You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. Don’t forget to engage in extracurricular activities to refresh yourself and relieve your pressure. All in all, academic pressure is a common challenge, but with proper organization, support and self- care, you can deal with it effectively and stay on track. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落情况给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表示理解和提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：pressure → stress 首先：first of all → to begin with 重要的：crucial → vital 处理：deal with → cope with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. 拓展句：It is also advisable that you should join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】 As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. (运用了who引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】 Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. (运用了that引导的定语从句) （2024·广东·一模）假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Hee发来邮件告诉你，他很高兴在他们大学主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获演讲比赛一等奖，想更深入地了解中国文化，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Hee回复一封电子邮件。 内容包括： （1）祝贺Hee获奖； （2）提供建议（至少4点）； （3）邀请Hee来中国学习交流。 注意：（1）词数不少于100词； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Hee, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Hee,      I was thrilled to receive your email, sharing the exciting news of your victory in the “Chinese Bridge” World High School Students’ Chinese Speech Contest hosted by your university. Congratulations on winning the first prize!            To further deepen your understanding of Chinese culture, I have a few suggestions that might be helpful. Firstly, reading Chinese literature can greatly enrich your cultural knowledge. Secondly, watch Chinese films and TV dramas, allowing you to experience the nuances of Chinese language and culture in a relaxed and enjoyable way. Thirdly, participate in cultural events and festivals. Lastly, consider learning Chinese calligraphy and martial arts. These practices not only refine one’s skills but also instill a sense of discipline and appreciation for the beauty of Chinese art and philosophy. Furthermore, I sincerely invite you to visit China for an in-depth learning and cultural exchange program.                          Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Hee回复一封电子邮件，祝贺他在“汉语桥”世界中学生中文演讲比赛中获得一等奖，并针对他进一步了解中国文化的需求给出建议，最后邀请他来中国进行学习和文化交流。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 兴奋的：thrilled → excited 建议：suggestion→ proposal 参加：participate in→ join in 改善：refine→ improve 句式拓展： 简单句变为复合句： 原句： I was thrilled to receive your email, sharing the exciting news of your victory in the “Chinese Bridge” World High School Students’ Chinese Speech Contest hosted by your university. 拓展句：I was thrilled to receive your email, which shared the exciting news of your victory in the “Chinese Bridge” World High School Students’ Chinese Speech Contest hosted by your university. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】To further deepen your understanding of Chinese culture, I have a few suggestions that might be helpful.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Secondly, watch Chinese films and TV dramas, allowing you to experience the nuances of Chinese language and culture in a relaxed and enjoyable way.（运用了现在分词作状语） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Out of this world单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） Providing solutions for living beyond the Earth（建议信） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 建议信 2023年新高考I&II卷 建议信是日常生活中最常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议或忠告的书信。建议信要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等作为连接词依次陈述建议。 The usual writing structure is: Paragraph 1: Express the purpose of writing: to make suggestions; Paragraph 2: Specific suggestions and reasons; Paragraph 3: Point out the advantages of adopting the suggestion, express the wish. 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头段 说明写信的目的 (1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。 (2)I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。 (3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。 主体段 介绍详情、说明原因、表达建议 (1)I think the most suitable...for you is...我认为对你来说最适合的……是…… (2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议…… (3)You’d better.../It’s best to...你最好……/最好是…… (4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view，it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 (5)For one thing...；for another...一方面……，另一方面…… (6)If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… (7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。 结尾段 表达希望 (1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。 (2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。 (3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard. 看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。 【建议信书写必备句型】 第一部分：说明写信的目的 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起…… During the afternoon, we’lltogether. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。 Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分：提出建议 我建议…… 1．I’d like to suggest that… 2．May I suggest that…? 3．In my opinion… 4．I would like to make a recommendation that… 5．I am writing to advise… 6．If I were you, I would… 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 【建议信书写必备句型】 (1)I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。 (2)You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。 (3)I would like to suggest that... 我建议…… (4)Why not.../ Why don't you...？为何不……？ (5)I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。 (6)It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。 (7)I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。 (8)Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。 (9)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。 (10)Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。 【推荐信书写模板】 【模板①】 Dear ______ (称谓) You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference. Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三) I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议). Your sincerely, Li Hua 【模板②】 Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【模板③】 Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua （2023年新高考I&II卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】                                                      Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） （2024·浙江绍兴·一模）假如你是李华，你校一年一度的 “Beauty of English” 主题英语节将于下月开展。现就其历年传统活动“英语配音大赛” (English Dubbing Contest) 和“英语文学沙龙” (English Literature Salon) 征集学生意见，请你给该活动负责人 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： (1) 保留的活动及理由； (2) 建议新的创意活动。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, This letter is in response to your request for advice concerning our school’s upcoming festival — Beauty of English. I strongly support retaining the English Dubbing Contest as it improves our English pronunciation, meanwhile making classic English movies accessible to a wider audience. For new activities, how about an “English Poster Design Show”? Students could express the essence of English literature, idioms, or famous quotes through visually compelling artistic posters. Not only would it foster their creativity and artistic expression, but it would also encourage them to delve deeper into the charm of English. English Debate Challenge is also not a bad idea. These additions would make the festival more vibrant and engaging. Looking forward to your consideration! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校一年一度的 “Beauty of English” 主题英语节将于下月开展。现就其历年传统活动“英语配音大赛” (English Dubbing Contest) 和“英语文学沙龙” (English Literature Salon) 征集学生意见，要求考生给该活动负责人 Chris写一封邮件提出自己的意见。 【详解】1.词汇积累 支持：support → be in favor of 提高：improve → enhance 与此同时：meanwhile → at the same time 培养：foster → cultivate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This letter is in response to your request for advice concerning our school’s upcoming festival — Beauty of English. 拓展句：This letter is in response to your request, which gives you some advice concerning our school’s upcoming festival — Beauty of English. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly support retaining the English Dubbing Contest as it improves our English pronunciation, meanwhile making classic English movies accessible to a wider audience. （运用了as引导状语从句以及现在分词作状语的结构） 【高分句型2】Not only would it foster their creativity and artistic expression, but it would also encourage them to delve deeper into the charm of English. （运用了not only位于句首引出的部分倒装的结构） (2024·山东·一模) 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）表示理解； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Frank, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Frank, As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. First of all, it’s crucial to decide on priorities. This way, you can make your schedule well- organized. You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. Don’t forget to engage in extracurricular activities to refresh yourself and relieve your pressure. All in all, academic pressure is a common challenge, but with proper organization, support and self- care, you can deal with it effectively and stay on track. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落情况给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表示理解和提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：pressure → stress 首先：first of all → to begin with 重要的：crucial → vital 处理：deal with → cope with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. 拓展句：It is also advisable that you should join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】 As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. (运用了who引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】 Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. (运用了that引导的定语从句) （2024·广东·一模）假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Hee发来邮件告诉你，他很高兴在他们大学主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获演讲比赛一等奖，想更深入地了解中国文化，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Hee回复一封电子邮件。 内容包括： （1）祝贺Hee获奖； （2）提供建议（至少4点）； （3）邀请Hee来中国学习交流。 注意：（1）词数不少于100词； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Hee, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Hee,      I was thrilled to receive your email, sharing the exciting news of your victory in the “Chinese Bridge” World High School Students’ Chinese Speech Contest hosted by your university. Congratulations on winning the first prize!            To further deepen your understanding of Chinese culture, I have a few suggestions that might be helpful. Firstly, reading Chinese literature can greatly enrich your cultural knowledge. Secondly, watch Chinese films and TV dramas, allowing you to experience the nuances of Chinese language and culture in a relaxed and enjoyable way. Thirdly, participate in cultural events and festivals. Lastly, consider learning Chinese calligraphy and martial arts. These practices not only refine one’s skills but also instill a sense of discipline and appreciation for the beauty of Chinese art and philosophy. Furthermore, I sincerely invite you to visit China for an in-depth learning and cultural exchange program.                          Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Hee回复一封电子邮件，祝贺他在“汉语桥”世界中学生中文演讲比赛中获得一等奖，并针对他进一步了解中国文化的需求给出建议，最后邀请他来中国进行学习和文化交流。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 兴奋的：thrilled → excited 建议：suggestion→ proposal 参加：participate in→ join in 改善：refine→ improve 句式拓展： 简单句变为复合句： 原句： I was thrilled to receive your email, sharing the exciting news of your victory in the “Chinese Bridge” World High School Students’ Chinese Speech Contest hosted by your university. 拓展句：I was thrilled to receive your email, which shared the exciting news of your victory in the “Chinese Bridge” World High School Students’ Chinese Speech Contest hosted by your university. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】To further deepen your understanding of Chinese culture, I have a few suggestions that might be helpful.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Secondly, watch Chinese films and TV dramas, allowing you to experience the nuances of Chinese language and culture in a relaxed and enjoyable way.（运用了现在分词作状语） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$