应用文写作邮件分享--桂林之行：邂逅山水间的诗意与远方 讲义-广东省茂名市信宜市2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

应用文写作 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Chris发邮件和你分享了她最近的旅行经历，并询问你印象深刻的旅游经历。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 旅途见闻； 2. 旅途感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, Yours, Li Hua 写作提纲 · 第一段：开头先表达收到邮件的喜悦，对 Chris 分享旅行经历表示感谢，然后自然地引出自己要分享的旅行经历，如提及 Guilin。 · 第二段：详细描述在桂林的旅途见闻，包括桂林独特的山水风光，如漓江的清澈、两岸山峰的奇特形状；还可以描述当地的风土人情，比如在当地村庄的体验，品尝特色美食等。 · 第三段：阐述这次旅行的感想，强调这次旅行给自己带来的收获，如对大自然的敬畏、对不同文化的理解，以及对生活的新感悟等，最后表达对未来一起旅行的期待。 语言积累 1. be delighted to 很高兴 2. be captivated by 被…… 迷住 3. be renowned for 因…… 而闻名 4. breathtaking scenery 令人惊叹的风景 5. unique karst mountains 独特的喀斯特山脉 6. rise abruptly 突兀地升起 7. local customs and traditions 当地风俗习惯 8. have a profound impact on 对…… 有深远影响 9. broaden one's horizons 开阔某人的视野 10. look forward to 期待 佳句积累 As the bamboo raft glided gently along the Li River, the emerald - green mountains on either side seemed like silent guardians, standing sentinel over this piece of paradise, their reflections dancing gracefully on the mirror - like water.（竹筏在漓江上缓缓滑行，两岸翠绿的山峦宛如沉默的守护者，守护着这片人间天堂，它们的倒影在如镜的水面上翩翩起舞。） The Reed Flute Cave, a natural wonderland hidden beneath the earth, was like a magical kingdom filled with stalactites and stalagmites that had been sculpted by nature over countless years, each one telling a story of the passage of time.（芦笛岩，这个隐藏在地下的自然仙境，宛如一个魔法王国，布满了历经无数岁月被大自然雕琢而成的钟乳石和石笋，每一根都诉说着时光流转的故事。 ） Wandering through the ancient alleys of the local villages, I was greeted by the warm smiles of the villagers, and their simple yet sincere way of life was like a gentle breeze, blowing away the hustle and bustle of the city and bringing me a sense of peace and contentment.（漫步在当地村庄的古老小巷，村民们温暖的笑容迎接了我，他们简单而真挚的生活方式就像一阵微风，吹散了城市的喧嚣，带给我一种宁静和满足感。） The moment I witnessed the spectacular sunset over the Li River, the sky ablaze with colors, it was as if nature had unfurled a magnificent canvas, painting a masterpiece that would be etched in my memory forever.（当我看到漓江上空那壮观的日落，天空被色彩点燃的那一刻，仿佛大自然展开了一幅壮丽的画卷，绘就了一幅将永远铭刻在我记忆中的杰作。 ） This journey to Guilin wasn't just a physical exploration; it was a spiritual odyssey, allowing me to delve deep into the heart of nature and culture, and emerge with a newfound appreciation for the beauty and diversity of our world.（这次桂林之旅不仅仅是一次身体的探索，更是一次心灵的旅程，让我深入到自然和文化的核心，带着对世界之美和多样性的全新认识归来。 ） 写作示范一 Dear Chris, I was thrilled to get your email and thoroughly enjoyed hearing about your adventures. Now, I can't wait to share my memorable journey to Guilin with you. As soon as I set foot in Guilin, I was struck by the stunning beauty of the Li River. The clear water reflected the emerald - green mountains on both sides, creating a picture - perfect view. I took a bamboo raft ride along the river, feeling the gentle breeze on my face and being surrounded by nature's masterpiece. Besides, I visited local villages, where I experienced the warm - hearted hospitality of the locals and tasted delicious local snacks like rice noodles. This trip to Guilin was more than just a sightseeing tour. It deepened my appreciation for nature and different cultures. I sincerely hope we can explore such beautiful places together someday. Yours, Li Hua 写作示范二 Dear Chris, Receiving your email was a real treat, and I'm so glad you shared your travel stories with me. Now, let me tell you about my remarkable trip to Guilin. Guilin's landscape is truly out of this world. The karst mountains, with their unique shapes, seem to touch the sky. I also visited the Reed Flute Cave, filled with fascinating stalactites and stalagmites. The lights inside the cave made them look like a magical wonderland. What's more, I joined a local folk dance performance, which was a great way to learn about the local culture. This journey to Guilin broadened my horizons and made me realize how diverse and amazing our world is. I'm looking forward to our future travels together. Best regards, Li Hua 写作示范三 Dear Chris, I was overjoyed to open your email and learn about your exciting travels. Now, I'd like to share my own wonderful experience in Guilin with you. In Guilin, I spent a day hiking in the mountains. The paths were lined with colorful wildflowers, and the air was fresh and clean. I also took a cruise on the Li River, where I witnessed the most spectacular sunset. The sky was painted with hues of orange and pink, reflecting on the river. Moreover, I tried my hand at making traditional handicrafts in a local workshop, which was both fun and educational. This trip to Guilin had a profound impact on me. It made me cherish nature more and understand the importance of cultural exploration. I can't wait to hear from you again and plan our next adventure. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 参考答案 Dear Chris, How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you something about my fantastic trip to Mount Huang. Mount Huang is a very famous place in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Last summer, I went there with my parents. As soon as we went up the mountain, we were surprised by the strange pines and special rocks. I couldn’t help taking many photos. When I stood on the top of the mountain, I saw the sea of clouds moving. It was amazing. I have visited Mount Huang only once, but I will never forget its beauty. I’m proud of my country for having such beautiful scenery. I hope one day you can pay a visit there. It’s well worth visiting. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$