读后续写 圣诞奇迹：找回失踪的猫咪 讲义-浙江省杭州市第二中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期末英语试题

读后续写 圣诞奇迹：找回失踪的猫咪 讲义 浙江省杭州市第二中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期末英语试题 原题 It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Daisy. Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all. She was a beautiful lady, her fur a soft blend of brown, gold, and black stripes (条纹). Most importantly, she was a smart cat. I used to take her everywhere I could in a carrier (猫笼), and she was so clever that she learned to walk into it on her own, something I never thought a cat would do. At home, Daisy would enjoy a good nap curled up inside my parents’ fireplace. We loved her so much that she was in the family’s Christmas picture every year. So, we wouldn’t like her missing this year’s. Dad always supported me, but he was so skeptical. He spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst despite the fact that he spent all six months looking for the cat. “She’s either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her,” he said. I rolled my eyes! He could do with a little more faith! Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see Daisy again. She’d been a stray (走失的宠物) when I found her — a tough little girl that had survived all on her own. If any cat could do the impossible, it was my Daisy. This Christmas, I was determined to pick up my search. I grabbed Daisy’s cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then asked my dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping she’d been found. My eyes scanned cats of all shapes and sizes at the shelter. Much to my disappointment, none of them was my Daisy. We drove through the town without rest, checking every shelter and asking everyone we could find, but each response was the same: no one had seen her. Finally, we pulled over in front of the last shelter in town. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I stepped into the house and heard a familiar meow. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   I knew I had to prove to the staff that she was my cat. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   故事分析 开端 圣诞节前夕，“我” 决心寻找失踪六个月的猫咪黛西，它对“我”和家人意义重大，每年都出现在家庭圣诞照片中。 发展 “我” 和爸爸四处寻找，查看了多个收容所并询问了很多人，但都没有黛西的消息。 高潮（待续写） 在最后一个收容所，“我” 听到熟悉的猫叫，可能找到了黛西，但需要向工作人员证明它是“我”的猫，这是矛盾冲突的关键节点。 结局（待续写） 成功证明黛西是“我”的猫，“我” 找回猫咪，收获喜悦，或许还能从中获得关于坚持和希望的感悟。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 黛西很聪明，能自己走进猫笼：在续写中可利用这一点，让黛西在“我”面前走进猫笼，向工作人员证明它是“我”的猫。 爸爸的怀疑态度：在找到黛西后，爸爸可能会转变态度，为故事增添情感变化。 “我” 坚定的信念：是推动“我” 不断寻找的动力，在续写中体现信念支撑“我” 不放弃，最终迎来好结果。 续写要点（两段） 第一段 着重描写“我” 听到猫叫后的激动心情，看到疑似黛西的猫时的惊喜与不确定。描述猫咪的状态，如比记忆中瘦等。还可写爸爸和收容所工作人员的反应，以及“我” 初步与猫咪互动，更加确定它就是黛西。 第二段 描写“我” 为证明猫咪是自己的所采取的行动，比如展示黛西会走进猫笼的技能。接着写工作人员认可后，“我” 的喜悦之情，以及和爸爸带着黛西回家的情景，最后升华主题，表达这次经历带来的收获。 情感线 起初，“我” 怀着坚定信念寻找黛西，过程中不断失望但仍不放弃。听到熟悉猫叫时，“我” 从失落转为激动、惊喜，又因不确定而忐忑。确定是黛西后，“我” 充满喜悦。在证明它是自己的猫的过程中，“我” 紧张又期待。最后成功找回，“我” 收获满满的幸福和对生活的感悟。 故事线 “我” 走进最后一个收容所，听到熟悉猫叫。 看到一只很像黛西的猫，与之互动确认。 向工作人员证明这只猫是“我”的，展示黛西进猫笼的技能。 得到工作人员认可，带着黛西和爸爸回家。 从这次经历中获得成长和感悟。 主旨升华句 This experience taught me that as long as we hold on to hope and never give up, miracles are always around the corner.（这次经历让我明白，只要我们心怀希望、永不放弃，奇迹总会在不远处。） Through the search for Daisy, I realized that faith can overcome difficulties and lead us to unexpected happiness.（在寻找黛西的过程中，我意识到信念能够战胜困难，引领我们走向意想不到的幸福。） It wasn't just finding a cat; it was a journey of self - discovery, showing me the power of perseverance and the beauty of believing in something greater than ourselves.（这不仅仅是找回一只猫，更是一次自我发现的旅程，让我看到坚持的力量以及相信美好事物的魅力。） This Christmas, Daisy's return became the most precious gift, reminding me that the best things in life often come when we least expect them, as long as we keep looking.（这个圣诞节，黛西的归来是最珍贵的礼物，提醒着我，生活中最美好的事物往往在我们最意想不到的时候出现，只要我们持续追寻。） The story of finding Daisy shows that even in the face of long - lasting loss, hope can bloom and bring back the warmth and love we cherish.（寻找黛西的故事表明，即使面对长久的失去，希望也能绽放，带回我们珍视的温暖与爱。） 写作示范一 I stepped into the house and heard a familiar meow. My heart skipped a beat, and I rushed towards the sound. There, in the corner, was a cat that looked exactly like Daisy. She was a bit thinner, her fur not as shiny as before, but those big green eyes were unmistakable. I knelt down and reached out my hand. “Daisy?” I called softly. The cat tilted her head, then slowly walked towards me and rubbed against my hand. I was overjoyed, tears welling up in my eyes. Dad came over, looking equally surprised. The shelter staff watched with curious eyes, a bit skeptical. I knew I had to prove to the staff that she was my cat. I quickly fetched the cat carrier from the car. Remembering how Daisy used to enter it on her own, I opened the door and said, “Come on, Daisy.” To my relief, she immediately recognized it and walked right in. The staff smiled and nodded. We thanked them and left with Daisy. On the way home, I held the carrier tightly, feeling like I had found a long - lost treasure. This Christmas, I truly got the best gift ever. 写作示范二 I stepped into the house and heard a familiar meow. A wave of excitement washed over me, and I couldn't believe my ears. I scanned the room and spotted a cat that resembled Daisy. She seemed weak, but when she saw me, there was a glimmer of recognition in her eyes. I picked her up gently, and she nuzzled into my arms. Dad joined me, and we both looked at the cat, filled with a mix of hope and disbelief. The shelter staff were hesitant, asking for proof. I knew I had to prove to the staff that she was my cat. I remembered that Daisy loved a special treat I always gave her. Luckily, I had some in my pocket. I took it out and showed it to the cat. Her eyes lit up, and she meowed eagerly. As she ate it happily, the staff were convinced. We were allowed to take her home. Driving back, I was filled with gratitude. This experience made me believe that hope and love can always lead to beautiful surprises. 参考答案 I stepped into the house and heard a familiar meow. My heart leaped with excitement, and I followed the sound with bated breath. There, in a small cage, was a cat that looked just like Daisy. She was thinner, her fur a bit scruffy, but I knew it was her. I opened the cage door, and she cautiously walked out. As soon as she saw me, she let out a soft meow and rubbed against my leg. I picked her up, tears streaming down my face. Dad came in and was equally shocked and happy. The shelter staff, however, looked at us doubtfully. I knew I had to prove to the staff that she was my cat. I took out my phone and showed them pictures of Daisy from before she went missing. I also told them about how she could do tricks, like shaking paws. To demonstrate, I said, “Daisy, shake.” And to everyone's surprise, she lifted her little paw. The staff were satisfied. We thanked them profusely and left. That Christmas, Daisy was back in our lives, and I learned that hope can make the impossible possible. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$