2025年中考写作话题复习-自我与他人(课件+教师版+学生版)

中考写作话题复习 主题5 自我与他人 一、题型解读 1. 具体内容：通常要求学生介绍自己或描述其他人，例如你最想感谢的人、你最钦佩的人、你最喜欢的歌手等，内容包括个人基本信息、外貌特征、兴趣爱好、性格特点、工作贡献、总体评价等。 2.教材链接： 七上U1 My name is Gina. 七上U8 When is your birthday? 八上U3 I am more outgoing than my sister. 七下U9 What does he look like? 八下U6 An old man tried to move the mountains. 九U8 It must belong to Carla. [例] 2021湖南湘潭卷 榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。 要点提示： What does he/she look like? What is he/she like? Why do you admire him/her? 参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream 要求：1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题指导：人称___________ 时态______________ 要点____________________________________ 二、素材积累 【基本信息类】 16岁的______________ 出生于_____________ 以……身份而工作(担任) _____________ 【外貌类】 迷人的___________ 中等身高/身材________________ 看起来像__________ 【性格类】 自信的_________ 慷慨的_________ 善解人意的____________ 幽默的_________ 热心的_________平易近人的 _________ 乐于助人________________与…相处融洽 ________________ 对……有耐心________________对…友好________________ 对某人严格_________________受孩子欢迎___________________ 【能力类】 擅长于… ____________________对…感兴趣 ________________ 在…方面有天赋___________________能够做某事________________ 下定决心做某事________________在…帮助下________________ 因为/作为…而有名______________高度赞扬________________ 【影响类】 鼓励某人做某事________________ 为…树立好榜样________________ 从…中学习________________ 取得进步________________ 被视作________________ 对…心存感激 _______________ 【谚语类】 父爱如山。_______________________________________________ 患难见真情。_______________________________________________ 远亲不如近邻。_______________________________________________ 三、谋篇布局 四、扩句升级（基础版-升级版） 要点①姓名、年龄、身份等 基础版：The man I admire most is Zhong Nanshan. He is a famous doctor. He is over 80 years old. (改写提示-be regarded as; one of + 最高级) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点②外貌 基础版：He is a little tall and thin. (改写提示-be of medium height; wear glasses) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点③性格 基础版：He is easygoing and warm-hearted. (改写提示-so ... that…; spend time in doing) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点④能力 基础版：He is famous. (改写提示-be widely known for/as) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点⑤经历 基础版：He helped us a lot. (改写提示-when; spare no effort) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点⑥精神 基础版：He told us never stop learning and we should try our best to work. (改写提示-宾语从句; It is adj. for sb. to do) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点⑦我学到的道理 基础版：I learn from him because he always faces difficulties bravely. (改写提示-benefit from; realize the importance of) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 要点⑧对我的影响 基础版：He influences me a lot and sets a good example. (改写提示-have an influence on; be touched by) 升级版：_____________________________________________________________________ 五、连句成篇 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六、同类迁移 （2021·广西桂林·中考真题） 2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。 Facts about his life 生平事迹 1930    be born, in Beijing; 1964    start a special study about rice; 1974    develop a new kind of rice; 1980    begin to, help people grow more rice, not only...but also..., China, many other areas around the world; 2021    die, in Changsha; … Contributions 成就贡献 solve, the problem of food, for millions of people, call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)… One of the best ways to remember him纪念他最好的方式之一 should, save food, never waste any food… The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 1 Beginning 总起介绍 ①姓名、年龄、职业等 ②外貌 Para 2 Body 为什么你钦佩他/她？ ④能力 ⑤经历 Para 3 Ending 总体评价 ⑦我学到的道理 ③性格 ⑥精神 ⑧对我的影响 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 中考写作话题复习 主题5 自我与他人 一、题型解读 1.具体内容：通常要求学生介绍自己或描述其他人，例如你最想感谢的人、你最钦佩的人、你最喜欢的歌手等，内容包括个人基本信息、外貌特征、兴趣爱好、性格特点、工作贡献、总体评价等。 2.教材链接： 七上U1 My name is Gina. 七上U8 When is your birthday? 八上U3 I am more outgoing than my sister. 七下U9 What does he look like? 八下U6 An old man tried to move the mountains. 九U8 It must belong to Carla. [例] 2021湖南湘潭卷 榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。 要点提示： What does he/she look like? What is he/she like? Why do you admire him/her? 参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream 要求： 1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题指导：人称 _第三人称____ 时态__ _一般现在时______ 要点____外貌；性格；钦佩的原因______ 二、素材积累 【基本信息类】 16岁的 16-year-old 出生于 be born in 以……身份而工作(担任) work as 【外貌类】 迷人的 charming 中等身高/身材 be of medium build 看起来像look like 【性格类】 自信的confident 慷慨的generous 善解人意的understanding 幽默的humorous 热心的warm-hearted平易近人的 easygoing 乐于助人be always ready to help others与…相处融洽 get on/along well with 对……有耐心be patient with 对…友好be friendly to 对某人严格be strict with受孩子欢迎be popular with 【能力类】 擅长于… be good at对…感兴趣 be interested in 在…方面有天赋be talented in 能够做某事be able to do 下定决心做某事make up one’s mind to do在…帮助下with the help of 因为/作为…而有名be famous for/as高度赞扬speak highly of 【影响类】 鼓励某人做某事encourage sb. to do 为…树立好榜样set a good example for 从…中学习learn from 取得进步make progress 被视作be seen/regarded/considered/treated as 对…心存感激 be thankful to 【谚语类】 父爱如山。Father’s love is as high as a mountain. 患难见真情。A friend in need is a friend in deed. 远亲不如近邻。A good neighbor is better than a brother far away. 三、谋篇布局 四、扩句升级（基础版-升级版） 要点①姓名、年龄、身份等 基础版：The man I admire most is Zhong Nanshan. He is a famous doctor. He is over 80 years old. (改写提示-be regarded as; one of + 最高级) 升级版：The man I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, who is regarded as one of the most famous doctors in China. He is in his eighties. 要点②外貌 基础版：He is a little tall and thin. (改写提示-be of medium height; wear glasses) 升级版：He is of medium build and always wears a pair of glasses. 要点③性格 基础版：He is easygoing and warm-hearted. (改写提示-so ... that…; spend time in doing) 升级版：He is so easygoing and warm-hearted that he spends much time giving classes on the Internet to help patients. 要点④能力 基础版：He is famous. (改写提示-be widely known for/as) 升级版：He is widely for the excellent ability to deal with the illness. 要点⑤经历 基础版：He helped us a lot. (改写提示-when; spare no effort) 升级版：When COVID-19 broke out, he spared no effort to help us fight against it. 要点⑥精神 基础版：He told us never stop learning and we should try our best to work. (改写提示-宾语从句; It is adj. for sb. to do) 升级版：He believes that it’s necessary for us to keep learning and work hard. 要点⑦我学到的道理 基础版：I learn from him because he always faces difficulties bravely. (改写提示-benefit from; realize the importance of) 升级版：I benefit a lot from him and realize the importance of facing difficulties bravely. 要点⑧对我的影响 基础版：He influences me a lot and sets a good example. (改写提示-have an influence on; be touched by) 升级版：He has a great influence on me and I am deeply touched by his warmth. 五、连句成篇 1.三档范例 There are many great people in the world, but I admire Zhong Nanshan most. He is a great doctor. He is more than 80 years old now. He is of medium build and he has white hair. He is patient with others. When the epidemic broke out he helped us a lot. As a medical scientist he works very hard. He often reads books about medical science and he gives a lot of classes on the Internet. He said that we should never stop learning and we should try our best to work. Also, he cares about patients a lot. Though he is very busy, he has never been impatient to others. As a student, I should study hard like him and try to care people around me more so that the world can be better. 2.四/五档范例 There are lots of famous people that I admire in the world. They are like stars in the sky, but the brightest one in my heart is Zhong Nanshan. He is one of the famous medical scientists nowadays. He is hard-working and made great contributions when the epidemic broke out. Although he is more than 80 years old now, he is always ready to fight against the epidemic. He said that "It's never too old to learn." He always stayed up late to read different books. He not only works day and night but also spends his free time giving a lot of classes on the Internet so that people can learn more about medical science. Also, he cares about patients a lot. Though he is very busy, he has never been impatient and always encourages patients to be brave. He has written a lot of articles about how to avoid COVID-19 so that more people can be healthy. In a word, he has a great influence on us. So young people like us should never stop learning and we should try our best to work hard. There is no doubt that we should care about others more, and then we can have a better world. 六、同类迁移 （2021·广西桂林·中考真题） 2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。 Facts about his life 生平事迹 1930    be born, in Beijing; 1964    start a special study about rice; 1974    develop a new kind of rice; 1980    begin to, help people grow more rice, not only...but also..., China, many other areas around the world; 2021    die, in Changsha; … Contributions 成就贡献 solve, the problem of food, for millions of people, call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)… One of the best ways to remember him纪念他最好的方式之一 should, save food, never waste any food… 【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. Do you want to know something more about him? Now I introduce him to you .He was born in 1930. He started a special study about rice. He often worked on it day and night. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha. Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”. We all love him. I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on. Para 1 Beginning 总起介绍 ①姓名、年龄、职业等 ②外貌 Para 2 Body 为什么你钦佩他/她？ ④能力 ⑤经历 Para 3 Ending 总体评价 ⑦我学到的道理 ③性格 ⑥精神 ⑧对我的影响 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Description & Introduction 中考写作话题复习 主题5 自我与他人 xxx CONTENTS 1 2 3 4 5 6 Description & Introduction 题型解读 素材积累 谋篇布局 扩句升级 连句成篇 同类迁移 CONTENTS 1 题型解读 具体内容/教材链接 题型解读 具体内容 通常要求学生介绍自己或描述其他人，例如你最想感谢的人、你最钦佩的人、你最喜欢的歌手等，内容包括个人基本信息、外貌特征、兴趣爱好、性格特点、工作贡献、总体评价等。 教材链接 七上U1 My name is Gina. 七上U8 When is your birthday? 八上U3 I am more outgoing than my sister. 七下U9 What does he look like? 八下U6 An old man tried to move the mountains. 九U8 It must belong to Carla. [例] 2021湖南湘潭卷 榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。 要点提示： What does he/she look like? What is he/she like? Why do you admire him/her? 参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream [审题指导] 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 要点：外貌；性格；钦佩的原因 要求： 1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ CONTENTS 2 素材积累 【基本信息类】 16岁的 16-year-old 出生于 be born in 以……身份而工作(担任) work as 【外貌类】 迷人的­­­­­­ charming 中等身高/身材 be of medium build 看起来像look like 【性格类】 自信的­­­­­­confident 慷慨的­­­­­­generous 善解人意的understanding 幽默的­­­­­­humorous 热心的­­­­­­warm-hearted平易近人的 easygoing 乐于助人be always ready to help others与…相处融洽 get on/along well with 对……有耐心be patient with 对…友好be friendly to 对某人严格be strict with受孩子欢迎be popular with 【能力类】 擅长于… be good at 对…感兴趣 be interested in 在…方面有天赋be talented in 能够做某事be able to do 下定决心做某事make up one’s mind to do 在…帮助下with the help of 因为/作为…而有名be famous for/as 高度赞扬speak highly of 【影响类】 鼓励某人做某事encourage sb. to do 为…树立好榜样set a good example for 从…中学习learn from 取得进步make progress 被视作be seen/regarded/considered/treated as 对…心存感激 be thankful to 【谚语类】 父爱如山。Father’s love is as high as a mountain. 患难见真情。A friend in need is a friend in deed. 远亲不如近邻。A good neighbor is better than a brother far away. CONTENTS 3 谋篇布局 ①姓名、年龄、职业等 ②外貌 ③性格 Para 1 Beginning 总起介绍 Para 2 Body 为什么你钦佩TA Para 3 Ending 总体评价 ④能力 ⑤经历 ⑥精神 ⑦我学到的道理 ⑧对我的影响 谋篇布局 CONTENTS 4 扩句升级 （基础版-升级版） 扩句升级 要点①姓名、年龄、身份等 基础版：The man I admire most is Zhong Nanshan. He is a famous doctor. He is over 80 years old. (改写提示-be regarded as; one of + 最高级) 升级版：The man I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, who is regarded as one of the most famous doctors in China. He is in his eighties. 扩句升级 要点②外貌 基础版：He is a little tall and thin. (改写提示-be of medium height; wear glasses) 升级版：He is of medium build and always wears a pair of glasses. 扩句升级 要点③性格 基础版：He is easygoing and warm-hearted. (改写提示-so ... that…; spend time in doing) 升级版：He is so easygoing and warm-hearted that he spends much time giving classes on the Internet to help patients. 扩句升级 要点④能力 基础版：He is famous. (改写提示-be widely known for/as) 升级版：He is widely known for the excellent ability to deal with the illness. 扩句升级 要点⑤经历 基础版：He helped us a lot. (改写提示-when; spare no effort) 升级版：When COVID-19 broke out, he spared no effort to help us fight against it. 扩句升级 要点⑥精神 基础版：He told us never stop learning and we should try our best to work. (改写提示-宾语从句; It is adj. for sb. to do) 升级版：He believes that it’s necessary for us to keep learning and work hard. 扩句升级 要点⑦我学到的道理 基础版：I learn from him because he always faces difficulties bravely. (改写提示-benefit from; realize the importance of) 升级版：I benefit a lot from him and realize the importance of facing difficulties bravely. 扩句升级 要点⑧对我的影响 基础版：He influences me a lot and sets a good example. (改写提示-have an influence on; be touched by) 升级版：He has a great influence on me and I am deeply touched by his warmth. CONTENTS 5 连句成篇 三档范例 There are many great people in the world, but I admire Zhong Nanshan most. He is a great doctor. He is more than 80 years old now. He is of medium build and he has white hair. He is patient with others. When the epidemic broke out he helped us a lot. As a medical scientist he works very hard. He often reads books about medical science and he gives a lot of classes on the Internet. He said that we should never stop learning and we should try our best to work. Also, he cares about patients a lot. Though he is very busy, he has never been impatient to others. As a student, I should study hard like him and try to care people around me more so that the world can be better. 四/五档范例 There are lots of famous people that I admire in the world. They are like stars in the sky, but the brightest one in my heart is Zhong Nanshan. He is one of the famous medical scientists nowadays. He is hard-working and made great contributions when the epidemic broke out. Although he is more than 80 years old now, he is always ready to fight against the epidemic. He said that "It's never too old to learn." He always stayed up late to read different books. He not only works day and night but also spends his free time giving a lot of classes on the Internet so that people can learn more about medical science. Also, he cares about patients a lot. Though he is very busy, he has never been impatient and always encourages patients to be brave. He has written a lot of articles about how to avoid COVID-19 so that more people can be healthy. In a word, he has a great influence on us. So young people like us should never stop learning and we should try our best to work hard. There is no doubt that we should care about others more, and then we can have a better world. CONTENTS 6 同类迁移 （2021·广西桂林·中考真题） 2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。 【参考范文】 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. Do you want to know something more about him? Now I introduce him to you .He was born in 1930. He started a special study about rice. He often worked on it day and night. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha. Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”. We all love him. I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on. $$