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2025中考作文复习专题
作文要求:你的朋友想提高他的英文,向你寻求帮助,请给他一些学好英语的建议。
Dear Peter,
…… I know it isn't easy to learn English, but I have some ideas. At first, be interested in what you do. Second, you should often ask questions. At last, take notes in class and review them after class. ……
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目录
CONTENTS
词
1
句
2
篇
3
实战演练
4
一、 积累高阶词汇
Part 1 词
普通词 替换词
good
beautiful
happy
sad
1. 形容词替换
perfect,excellent,enjoyable,pleasant,fantastic,positive,promising,warm-hearted,generous,amazing,wonderful,outstanding,valuable…
pretty,attractive,fascinating,eye-catching
pleased,satisfied,joyful
discouraged,upset,painful
grow
have
give
go
2. 副词替换
3. 动词替换
一、 积累高阶词汇
very
raise,improve,increase,develop
greatly,pretty,quite,totally,highly,extremely
keep,enjoy,own
provide,offer,donate
climb,jump,move,rush,head,hurry
4. 名词替换
普通词汇 高阶词汇
advantage
way
difficulty
disadvantage
chance
一、 积累高阶词汇
benefit,strength,strong point
method,means
challenge
shortcoming,weakness,weak point
opportunity
释义 单词 短语
使用 use
尝试 try
保持 keep
喜欢 like
导致 cause
记得 remember
帮助 help
认为 think
对...有帮助 helpful
有些 many
立即 immediately
二、优先使用短语
make good use of, put sth. into good use, take advantage of
do/try one's best, make an/every effort to do
stick to, insist on
be fond of, be interested in, be crazy about, fall in love with
lead to,result in
keep sth. in mind
offer a helping hand to sb.
hold the view that
be of great help/ value, be beneficial to
quite a few/ a number of
without delay, at once, right now
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三、 巧用衔接词
because/because of/since/as/for/thanks to/due to
so/therefore/as a result
and/also/as well/as well as/or/not only. . . but also
besides/in addition/moreover/what's more…
but/however/instead /in spite of/unlike
at first/first of all/to begin with/to start with…
for example/like/such as/take. . . as an example
in fact/actually/as a matter of fact
when/while/after/before/until/as soon as/later…
all in all/in a word/in short/ generally speaking/to sum up
Part 2 句
一、增加句式多样性
It takes/ took sb. some time to do sth. 某人花时间做某事
It is adj. for sb. to do sth. 做某事对某人来说是...的
make/think/feel it adj. to do sth. 让/认为/感觉做某事是...的
It seerns/ appears...that... 看起来/似乎...
It is said/believed/reported/thought that... 据说/相信/报道/认为
It is obvious that... 显而易见的是...
The reason why...is that. ⋯的原因是...
There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问的是...
平级、比较级、最高级
感叹句
二、巧用状从、定从等
(1)状从
We should communicate more with our parents. We can know each other better.
(2)定从
Yuan Longping is a great scientist. He was considered as “The Father of Hybrid Rice”.
We should communicate more with our parents so that we can know each other better.
Yuan Longping is a great scientist who/ that was considered as “The Father of Hybrid Rice”.
(3)“同位语 + 定语从句”组合
My favorite teacher is Miss Li. She is a beautiful woman. She is good at encouraging us to face difficulties bravely.
My hometown is Changsha. It is a charming city. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food.
My favorite teacher is Miss Li, a beautiful woman, who is good at encouraging us to face difficulties bravely.
My hometown is Changsha, a charming city where you can enjoy all kinds of delicious food.
三、妙用谚语
Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
You are never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。
Rome was not built in a day. 罗马不是一天建成的。
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者,事竟成。
A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辦。
添加原因、结果
Tom is regarded as a creative boy because he can always come up with different ideas.
添加目的
To achieve my dream of being a writer, I will study harder and spare no effort to improve my writing skills.
添加对比
We are supposed to put our heart in study instead of losing ourselves in online games.
添加例子
Through school activities, we can learn many things such as being responsible and cooperating with others.
Part 3 篇
作文要求:你的朋友想提高他的英文,向你寻求帮助,请给他一些学好英语的建议。
……I know it isn't easy to learn English, but I have some ideas. At first, be interested in what you do. Second, you should often ask questions. At last, take notes in class and review them after class.……
Part 4 实战演练
参考例文(修改升级版)
I know it isn't easy to learn English, but I have some ideas that may benefit you a lot. At first, you’d better be interested in what you do. For example, if you like movies you can learn English by watching English movies. (添加例子) Second, you are supposed to ask questions often. The reason why I come up with this idea is that knowledge comes from questioning.(添加原因)At last, it is also a good idea to take notes in class to make sure you have really understood what teachers taught,(添加目的)and then review them after class.
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