专题06 书面表达专练-2024-2025学年冀教版2024英语七上寒假复习专项训练（与教材同步）

专题06书面表达专练-2024-2025学年冀教版2024英语七上寒假复习专项训练（与教材同步） Unit 1 New school , new beginning! 假设你是李明，请给你的朋友（Tom）写一封信，介绍你们学校的“开放日”活动，并邀请他来参加。 提示： ①When is there an open house? ② What are the activities on the Open Day? ③ Why do you want him to come in here? 要求： ① 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数。 ② 词数80左右。 高分范文： Visit Our School Dear Tom, I'm writing to tell you about our school's Open Day. It will be on Saturday, October 15th. There are many fun activities planned for the day. In the morning, there will be a special class where you can join us and experience a real Chinese lesson. After that, we will have a sports event on the playground. You can watch us play basketball or join in if you like. There will also be a talent show in the afternoon where students perform songs and dances. I think it's a great chance for you to see how we study and have fun at school. I really hope you can come and visit us! Yours, Li Ming 名师点评： ① 开篇用“I'm writing to...”直接引出主题，明确介绍开放日的目的，为下文铺垫。 ② 使用时间状语（on Saturday, October 15th）和活动安排（morning, afternoon）清晰地组织内容，逻辑清晰。 ③ 使用“where”和“when”引导的从句（如“where students perform songs and dances”）丰富句子结构，使内容更具吸引力。 ④ 结尾表达对朋友来访的期待，结构完整，富有感染力，让读者感受到热情的邀请。 Unit 2 Learning English is fun! 英语是我们学校的重要学科之一，它能帮助我们更好地了解世界并与不同国家的人交流。请以“The Way to Learn English Well”为话题，根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 提示： ①Why do we learn English? ②What should we do to learn English well in class? ③What should we do to learn English well after class? 高分范文： The Way to Learn English Well English is an important subject at school. It helps us communicate with people from around the world. But how can we learn English well? Firstly, we should listen carefully to the teacher and repeat what they say. Secondly, we must practice speaking with our classmates. Thirdly, after class, we can watch English movies and read English stories. I think learning English is fun and easy if we keep practicing every day. 名师点评： ① 开篇点题，直接阐述英语的重要性并引出下文探讨如何学好英语。 ② 分点阐述学习方法，使用“Firstly”“Secondly”“Thirdly”使文章条理清晰。通过“listen carefully”“practice speaking”等具体建议，增强了实用性和可操作性。 ③ 结尾用“if”引导的条件状语从句总结全文，表明只要坚持练习，英语学习就会变得轻松有趣，升华主题。 Unit 3 All about me 假设你叫汤姆（Tom），是一个来自英国的男孩，你希望在中国交一些朋友。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己。 提示： ①What do you look like? ②What are your favourite food and hobbies? ③What do you like doing in your free time? 要求： 80词左右。 不出现真实校名和人名。 高分范文： About Me Hello! My name is Tom. I'm from the UK. I'm a boy. I'm 1.65 metres tall with short brown hair and big eyes. My nose is small, but my smile is very wide. My favourite food is pizza because it's delicious. I love playing football and drawing pictures. In my free time, I like to read comic books and watch interesting movies. Do you want to be my friend? 名师点评： ① 开篇点题，直接介绍自己的名字和国籍，引出下文。 ② 使用简单句介绍外貌特征，如身高、头发颜色和眼睛大小，语言简洁明了。 ③ 通过“because”引导的原因状语从句（pizza is delicious）和“love”“like”等动词，清晰表达个人喜好。 ④ 结尾用问句“Do you want to be my friend?”表达交友愿望，增强互动性，使文章更具感染力。 Unit 4 My family 家是一个温暖的港湾，是我们心灵的归宿，家也是我们情感的寄托。请根据以下信息，写一篇题为“I Love My Family”的简短文章，介绍你的家庭。 提示： ①What family members do you have? ②What hobbies does every family member have? ③What is your favorite family activity? 要求： ①80词左右； ①不出现真实姓名和校名。 高分范文： I Love My Family My family is like a beautiful garden full of love and happiness. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my little sister, and me. My father loves playing basketball, and he often teaches me how to play. My mother enjoys cooking delicious food for us. My sister loves drawing pictures and coloring. On weekends, we often go on picnics together. I love my family very much because they make my life so wonderful. 名师点评： 文章亮点突出。写作思路清晰，开篇用比喻“My family is like a beautiful garden”引出主题，充满温馨和爱。主体部分通过列举家庭成员及其爱好（如父亲的篮球、母亲的烹饪、妹妹的绘画），生动展现了家庭的多样性。亮点句式“loves doing...”多次运用，丰富了内容。结尾抒情真挚，表达了对家庭的深厚感情，整体结构完整，富有感染力。 Unit 5 Animals friends 假设你的外国朋友杰克（Jack）来到中国，对中国的动物非常感兴趣，于是你带他去了动物园。请以“Animals are Our Friends”为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，描述你们在动物园里的见闻。 要点： ①What animals are there at the zoo? ②What are your favourite animals? ③Why do you like them? 要求： ①包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； ②词数：80左右。 高分范文： Animals are Our Friends It is a sunny Saturday morning. Jack and I decide to visit the zoo. The zoo is quite far from my home, so we take a bus there. When we arrive, we see many different animals. At the zoo, there are lions, elephants, giraffes, and pandas. Jack is very excited to see the pandas because they are only found in China. He thinks they are very cute and peaceful. I like the elephants best. They are strong and smart. I enjoy watching them play with water and eat bananas. We also visit the monkeys. They are very lively and funny. They jump around and make us laugh. Jack and I agree that animals are our friends. They make the world more interesting. We have a great time at the zoo and learn a lot about different animals. We hope to visit again soon. 名师点评： ① 开篇点题，明确时间和活动，引出下文。 ② 主体部分详细介绍了动物园里的动物种类以及作者和朋友最喜欢的动物，内容丰富。 ③ 使用“because”“so”“also”等连词，使文章逻辑清晰，表达流畅。 ④ 结尾总结全文，强调“Animals are our friends”的主题，升华文章中心思想，表达对动物的喜爱和保护意识。 Unit 6 Let's go 智慧图书馆是融合科技与文化的现代化阅读空间，提供便捷、高效、个性化的学习体验。假设你是Lucy，你最喜欢的地方是智慧图书馆（smart library）。请根据以下提示要点，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的地方。 提示： ①What's your favorite place? ②Why do you like it? ③What do you often do there? 要求： ①包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； ②词数：80左右。 高分范文： My Favorite Place is the Smart Library My favorite place is the smart library. I like it because it is quiet and full of interesting books. It is near my home, so I can go there easily. In the library, I often read stories and look at picture books. I also use the computers to learn new things. Sometimes, I join reading clubs with other kids. We talk about books and share our ideas. The smart library helps me learn more and makes me feel smart and happy. 名师点评： ① 开篇“My favorite place is the smart library”直接点题，明确主题，吸引读者。 ② 主体段落通过“read stories”“look at picture books”和“use computers”等活动细节，生动展现智慧图书馆的乐趣。 ③ 使用“also”和“sometimes”等词汇，使文章逻辑清晰，丰富了内容层次。 ④ 结尾“The smart library helps me learn more and makes me feel smart and happy”总结全文，情感表达到位，强调图书馆对个人成长的积极影响。 Unit 7 Days and months 春节是团圆、喜庆的节日，增进亲情，传承文化，充满欢乐祥和氛围。假设你最喜欢的节日是春节（Spring Festival），请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的节日。 提示： ① What is your favourite festival? ② What can you do during the festival? ③ Why do you like it? 要求： ① 短文要包括提示要点，可适当发挥。 ② 不要出现真实姓名和校名。 ③ 词数：60词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 开头： My Favourite Festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival._____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高分范文： My Favourite Festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, the weather is cold, but our hearts are warm. I can wear new clothes and visit my relatives. We have big family dinners and eat delicious food. I also get red packets with lucky money. I like the Spring Festival because it is a time for family and fun. It makes me very happy. 名师点评： ① 开篇“My favourite festival is the Spring Festival”直接点题，明确主题，吸引读者。 ② 通过“wear new clothes”“visit relatives”“have big family dinners”等活动细节，生动展现春节的乐趣。 ③ 使用“also”和“because”等词汇，展示作者连接句子的技巧，使文章逻辑清晰。 ④ 结尾“It makes me very happy”总结全文，情感表达到位，强调春节对个人的意义。 Unit 8 Knowing the world 石家庄，河北省会，地处华北平原，历史悠久，文化灿烂，交通便利，美食丰富。假设你来自石家庄，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍石家庄的短文，作为视频文案。 提示： ①Location（位置）：…… ②Capital City & Language（省会城市及语言）：…… ③Famous Places & Festivals（著名景点和节日）：…… ④Some others（其他特色）：…… 要求： ①短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； ②文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； ③不少于60词。 高分范文： My Hometown - Shijiazhuang I am very happy to tell you about my hometown, Shijiazhuang. It is in the north of China, near the Taihang Mountains. It is the capital city of Hebei Province. People here speak Chinese. Shijiazhuang has many beautiful places, such as Zhaozhou Bridge and Zhengding Ancient City. There are also many festivals like the Spring Festival and Lantern Festival. During these festivals, people enjoy delicious food and colorful lanterns. Shijiazhuang is also famous for its apples and chestnuts. The people here are very friendly and welcoming. Do you want to visit Shijiazhuang? Welcome to my hometown! Thank you! 名师点评： ① 开篇点题，用“I am very happy to tell you about my hometown”引出下文。 ② 用“in the north of China”和“near the Taihang Mountains”清晰介绍石家庄的位置。 ③ 用“such as”列举石家庄的著名景点和节日，使内容具体生动。 ④ 用一般疑问句“Do you want to visit Shijiazhuang?”引起读者的兴趣，结尾“Welcome to my hometown”热情邀请，富有感染力。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$