2024届高三考前冲刺测验(一) 读后续写 双胞胎在母亲节给妈妈做早餐 课件

2024届高三考前冲刺测验（一） 读后续写 双胞胎在母亲节给妈妈做早餐 01原文一致原则 内容要前后衔接，上下连贯 语言表达风格一致。 02曲折性原则 凡是故事都应有一定的跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。 03正能量原则 故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。 三大原则 Revision Main idea of the text Elements Contents who when where what why the twins, Jeff and Janna, Dad, Mom on Mother’s Day at home, in the kitchen The twins were preparing the breakfast but they messed it up and Jeff burned the finger. They wanted to surprise their mom. Underline useful information. Step 1: Analysis of the text Para 1、2 Step 2: 续写分析 描述首句引发 的反应或动作 (movement) 增加心理 感受描写 (emotion) 增加场景描写 (scene) 延续首句主语， 复现首句关键词 。 延迟符 Rivision 1 2 3 4 衔接首句 的方法 7 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. What was father’s reaction? Did the twins make the breakfast successfully? What did father say to the twins? Did father make the breakfast with the twins together? What was mother’s reaction? What would mother say and do? Step 3: 续写情节展开 Para 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. 1.(爸爸的反应) 看到厨房里乱糟糟的，父亲惊呆了。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.但在双胞胎解释了他们的计划后，他笑着安慰他们：“别担心。我会帮你的。” But after the twins explained what they planned, he ____________ _______________, “Don’t worry. I’ll help you.” 3.(父子/女合作) 他把一锅粥放在炉子上,调到小火,让Jeff看火15分钟。 He put the pot of porridge over the stove, __________________ _____________, and asked Jeff to _______________ for 15 minutes. Seeing the mess in the kitchen, the father was shock with his mouth wide open. At the sight of the mess in the kitchen, the father was numb with shock. smiled and comforted them adjusted the fire to the gentle heat watch out for it 4.然后他让Jenna再打两个鸡蛋，把它们和牛奶一起搅拌。 And then he ______ Jenna to break another two eggs and ____________________________. 5.一切准备就绪后，他们开始一起煎面包。 ________________________, they started to fry bread together. 6.（成果）不一会儿，厨房里充满了香味。 ______________________________________________________. asked mix them with milk After making all preparations With all preparations made/done In a flash, (a) sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. After a while, the kitchen was filled with (a) sweet smell. Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 7.（妈妈醒来）妈妈一睁开眼睛，就听到双胞胎孩子们和谐的“母亲节快乐”，摆在面前是一顿热腾腾、甜甜的早餐。 ___________ Mother other opened her eyes, she heard a ____________ “Happy Mother’s Day” from her twin kids ______________________________________. 8.孩子们的父亲站在他们的身后，告诉了她整个故事。（倒装句） ______________________________________, who told her the whole story. The monent harmonious with a hot sweet breakfast before her Behind the children stood their father Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 9.（妈妈的反应）在得知发生的事情后，她迅速站起来检查男孩的手。 After learning about ______________, she ____________ to check the boy’s hand. 10.（妈妈的感想）确保儿子的手没大碍后，母亲紧紧地拥抱着他们，泪水顺着脸颊滚落下来。“谢谢你，”妈妈说，“这是我收到过的最好的礼物。” After ___________ that his son’s hand was okay, Mother ___________________. “Thank you,” said the mother, ________________________________. what happened rose quickly making sure hugged them tightly with tears rolling down her cheeks Sample 1： 基础版 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior(救星) to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive action and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking the porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. With their efforts, delicious breakfast was finally ready. How happy they were! The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the perfectly-made and loving breakfast in front of her, she was so surprised. It was not only the gift, but also the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly,“Happy Mother's Day!”Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again. Step 4: 范文赏析 Sample 2 Sample 3： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess in the kitchen, the father was numb with shock. But after the twins explained what they planned, he smiled and comforted them, “Don’t worry. I’ll help you.” What a relief to hear that! They took action immediately. The twins cleaned up the spilled(溢出的) porridge on the stove while their father was frying the bread. Soon the breakfast was ready. The twins hugged their father excitedly for his timely help. Sample 3： The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” They said together loudly. The mother just couldn’t believe what she saw when the breakfast was served along with a card. Deeply moved, she held them tightly and kissed them again and again. “Mum, have a taste of it,” the twins asked. The mother bit into the toast and said, “It is definitely the most delicious breakfast I have ever had. I am also proud to be your mother.” Sample 4： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The moment he saw Jeff’s hand was burned, he went and fetched the first-aid kit and treated it instantly. “Why did you cook by yourselves? Don't you know it's dangerous?” shouted the father with anger. “Today is Mother's Day. We want to prepare breakfast and give Mother a big surprise.” Hearing this, the father smiled and whispered, “How I am proud of you! Let's do it together!” It was not long before a perfect breakfast was well done, giving off a nice smell. Sample 4： The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. At the sight of the meal, the mother felt a little confused, asking, “Where did you get this breakfast?” “We have done it with Father. It's a surprise for you on Mother's Day,” responded Jeff, (with) his face blooming like a flower. “This is the best gift I have ever received! Thank you!” said the mother excitedly with tears sparkling in her eyes. She embraced the twins tightly. At that time, the twins really knew that home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. Thank you! $$