Unit 6 Writing 课件 2024-2025学年沪教版英语七年级上册

Unit 6 Travelling around Aisa 汇报人:Sophie 第5课时Writing 单元话题写作 话题概述 Part 1 话题概述 本单元的写作话题是“旅游”。常见的写作主题有:“介绍旅游景点”“制订旅行计划”“写一份旅游指南”“写一篇旅行日记”等。 例如,在介绍某个旅游景点时,可从以下几个方面入手:1. 地理位置;2. 历史背景;3. 文化价值;4. 景点特点;5. 景点分类;6. 相关活动。在写旅游日记时,可注重描写旅行的过程和收获,并表达自己的旅途感受。 素材积累 Part 2 I. 单词运用 背一背 1. tourist n. 游客 2. ticket n. 票 3. book v. 预订 4. island n. 岛 5. wonderful adj. 精彩的 6. amazing adj. 令人惊叹的 7. crowded adj. 拥挤的 8. climb v. 爬;攀登 9. guide n. 导游 10. camp v. 野营;露营 11. enjoy v. 享受;喜爱 12. scenery n. 风景 练一练 1. The park is very because many people go there. 2. mountains is a tiring but interesting activity. 3. I’d like to a single room for two days in this hotel. 4. Millions of visit the lake in summer every year. 5. Visitors can’t get in the museum without a ! 6. The old town is known for its beautiful . crowded Climbing book tourists ticket scenery II. 短语运用 背一背 1. arrive at/in 到达 2. have a good time 玩得开心 3. place of interest 名胜 4. go on a vacation/holiday 去度假 5. show somebody around 带某人四处逛逛 6. check in 登记;报到 7. by air 乘飞机 8. walk along 沿着……走 练一练 1. I in Poland last month. It was wonderful! 2.They Singapore at 6:30 p.m. yesterday. 3. Our family will the city if you come here. 4. the street and you’ll see the post office. went on a vaction/holiday arrived in show you around Walk along III. 佳句储备 背一背 1. Holidays are a good chance for people to travel and relax. 2. We went to the beach as soon as we arrived there. 3. It takes about two hours from Nantong to Beijing by plane. 4. Travelling not only relaxes me, but also broadens my horizons. 5. Though I was tired, I enjoyed myself there. 译一译 1. 。 2. 。 3. 。 4. 。 5. 。 假期是人们旅行和放松的好机会 我们一到那里就去了海滩 从南通乘飞机到北京需要大约两个小时 旅游不仅使我放松,也开拓了我的眼界 虽然我很累,但我在那里玩得很开心 佳作赏析 Part 3 佳作赏析 满分范文 Xiamen is one of the cleanest cities in China with many places of interest.① I went there with my parents last summer vacation. We had an unforgettable time. First, we visited Xiamen University, which is famous for its beautiful campus.② I hope I can enter Xiamen University for further study. Then we paid a visit to Gulangyu Island. We all enjoyed the beautiful beach and the pleasant sunshine. We couldn’t help taking③ lots of photos. We had fresh seafood and fruit for 满分解密 ①此处用“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构,点明厦门是个适合旅行的城市。 ②此处用which引导的定语从句及短语be famous for介绍了厦门大学美丽的校园,丰富了文章句式。 ③此处用短语can’t help doing something 突出了鼓浪屿的美丽风光。 佳作赏析 满分范文 dinner. And the people there are very friendly. No matter what difficulties we met, there was always someone to help.④ I had a pleasant trip to Xiamen. It is worth visiting because of its beauty.⑤ 满分解密 ④此处用no matter what引导的让步状语从句及there be句型写出了厦门人的热情好客,使文章句式结构更加多样化。 ⑤此处用“be worth+动名词”结构表达了作者对厦门的热爱及对此次厦门之行的满意。 参考译文 厦门是中国最干净的城市之一,有许多名胜古迹。去年暑假我和父母去了那里。我们度过了难忘的时光。 首先,我们参观了厦门大学,它以其美丽的校园而闻名。我希望能进入厦门大学继续深造。然后我们去了鼓浪屿。我们都喜欢美丽的海滩和宜人的阳光。我们忍不住拍了许多照片。晚餐,我们吃了新鲜的海鲜和水果。那里的人都很友好。不管我们遇到什么困难,总会有人帮助我们。 我的厦门之行很愉快。它因其美景而值得一游。 写作运用 Part 4 I. 词语操练(背诵“佳作赏析”的范文并填空) Xiamen is one of the cleanest cities in China with many 1. 2. 3. . I went there with my parents last summer vacation. We had an 4. time. First, we visited Xiamen University, which 5. 6. 7. its beautiful campus. I hope I can enter Xiamen University for 8. 9. . Then we 10. 11. _ 12. 13. Gulangyu Island. We all enjoyed the beautiful beach and the pleasant sunshine. We 14. 15. 16. lots of photos. We had fresh seafood and fruit for dinner. And the people there are very friendly. 17. 18. 19. _ difficulties we met, 20. 21. always someone to help. I had a pleasant trip to Xiamen. 22. _ 23. 24. 25. because of its beauty. places of interest unforgettable is famous for further study paid a visit to couln’t help taking No matter what there was It is worth visiting . 句型仿写 1. Xiamen is one of the cleanest cities in China with many places of interest. 厦门是中国最干净的城市之一,有许多名胜古迹。 仿写1 他是班里最好的学生之一。 _ 仿写2 它是世界上最美丽的地方之一。 _ He is one of the best students in the class. It is one of the most beautiful places in the world. . 句型仿写 1. 2. No matter what difficulties we met, there was always someone to help.不管我们遇到什么困难,总会有人帮助我们。 仿写1 不管你有什么问题,都可以找我帮忙。 _ 仿写2 不管我们面临什么样的挑战(challenge),我们都会尽力而为。 _ No matter what questions you have, you can ask me for help. No matter what challenges we face, we will try our best. . 段落操练,将下列句子排成一篇文理通顺的短文 1. When we arrived there, we felt excited. 2. Every year we have a chance to go sightseeing. 3. Last week we had a trip to Chimelong Paradise in Guangzhou. 4. It took us an hour to get to Chimelong Paradise by bus. 5. When we came back home, we felt tired but happy. 6. We played lots of games there. 7. And we also enjoyed a lot of delicious food there. 排序后的正确顺序是: _ 2-3-4-1-6-7-5 IV. 短文改错 文中共有5处语言错误。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在横线上写出加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在横线上写出修改后的词。 Taking a trip is interesting and relaxing. Last summer, my parents take me to Dalian for a vacation. We went there by train and saw some farm and villages along the way. When we arrived ∧ Dalian, it was sunny. We went to the beach. We put up a tent and played volleyball on the beach. It was exciting. But the sun was so big that we felt very hot. So we went to swimming in the sea. It was cool and relaxing. At night, we enjoyed delicious seafood and watched beautiful stars. How a wonderful vacation! I would like to go there again. 1. _ 2. _ 3. _ 4. _ 5. _ took farms in What V. 学以致用 暑假即将来临,假如你是李华,正为你的暑假做旅游计划。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语介绍一下你的计划。 提示: 1. 度假地点与旅伴; 2. 旅游期间活动(至少2点); 3. 你的期待。 要求: 1. 文中应包含提示的所有信息,并适当拓展; 2. 文中不得出现校名,姓名等真实信息; 3. 不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My plan for summer holiday Hello, everyone! I’m Li Gua. I’m making a plan for my summer holiday. _ 参考范文 My Plan for Summer Holiday Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. I’m making a plan for my summer holiday. I am going to have a trip with my parents in Kunming during the summer holiday. We will go there by plane. We are going to stay there for three days. On the first day, we are going to visit Dianchi Lake. It’s one of the most famous places in Yunnan. On the second day, we will climb the West Hill. It might be hard to climb, but I am looking forward to it. On the last day, we will go shopping. We plan to buy some souvenirs. I hope it will be an interesting experience for us to broaden our horizons as well as relax ourselves. The end 汇报人:Sophie $$