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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-9(遇困求助与解困建议)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指:要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说:针对同一个话题或题目,从不同的角度命题,要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题,积累更多的素材和灵感,提升思维的灵活性,激发写作的创造力,快速提高写作能力,以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“遇困求助与解困建议”,在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体:认真审题,弄清写作文体,是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为:书信体的求助信、建议信;非书信体的投稿。 二是要谋划篇章结构:一般来说,我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作): 三是要打开写作思路:这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一,近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而,许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外,思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题,笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路:①对“遇困求助与解困建议”话题的考查常见的有下列三种形式有:遇到困难发出求助、为他人提供克服困难的建议以及自己克服困难的经历、经验分享等;②对“遇困求助与解困建议”话题的写作考查常常涉及下列主要内容:学习中遇到的困难、生活中所遇到的困难、组织有关活动或参加有关竞赛备赛所遇到的困难等;③写作的重点在于对所遇困难的叙述、求助内容的表达以及如何提出建议等等。 另外,建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 1-01(福建省福州市2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次质量检测)假设你是李华,刚进人高三,在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件。 内容包括:1. 说明困难; 2. 寻求帮助。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Brown, I am Li Hua, one of your students. __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely; LiHua 1-02(2024届高考英语冲刺三轮考前写作训练专项<有改动>)假设你是某报社编辑李华,最近收到读者Tom的一封信,信中提到他是高一的学生,在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼,请根据以上提示写一篇建议信,帮Tom解决困难,促进学习。 建议:1. 保持良好心态; 2. 改进学习方法; 3. 培养学习兴趣。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【简析】 1-01篇属于书信体写作的求助信。要求考生给外教Mr.Brown写封邮件,说明自己在英语学习上遇到的困难并向对方寻求帮助。1-02篇属于书信体写作的建议信。要求考试以某报社编辑李华的身份给读者Tom写一篇建议信,帮助他解决学习英语过程中遇到的困难,从心态、学习方法和兴趣三个方面提出建议。 1-01篇写作的重点是有关“困难”内容的构思,而1-02篇写作的重点是有关“建议”内容的构思(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就以上两个写作重点提供不同的写作内容。 1. I’m writing for advice about one thing that has been troubling me. While I’ve tried, I still can’t make much progress in my English study. What frustrates me most is that I can’t seem to memorise those new words, which simply keep escaping my mind. It occurs to me that you, as a native of English, can give me some advice about how to learn it well, which I’ll treasure. 2. The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have never got satisfying marks. It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules. Besides, I find it difficult to write good English compositions. My English teacher is always explaining the language points in class and I can hardly take them down. 3. I am writing to seek your guidance on a problem I have been facing while reading English magazines. Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to. I have tried using online translation tools and looking up unfamiliar words in the dictionary, but these methods have not yielded the desired results. I believe that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines. 4. Recently, I have been struggling with understanding complex grammar rules and remembering various words. Despite my efforts, I still find it challenging to apply the knowledge effectively, especially when I communicate with others in English. I feel overwhelmed and am eager to improve. Could you recommend some strategies that could help me overcome these difficulties? 4. I have met much difficulty in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to memorize. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. 5. I have known you have some difficulty in learning English. Don’t worry about it. I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, preview the lessons before class, and you’d better listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Secondly, you can ask your English teacher for advice on how to study it in high school. Communicating with your classmates to get some advice is also helpful. Finally, confidence is of great importance, too. 6. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, practice speaking English as much as possible. You can find a partner or join an English club. Secondly, read English books, newspapers or watch English movies to improve your reading and listening skills. Thirdly, make a study plan and stick to it. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. 7.First of all, it is preferable to memorize as many words as possible since vocabulary makes all the difference to listening, speaking, reading and writing for English learners. Besides, I think it would be wise to read more English newspapers and magazines, which can not only enhance your interest in learning English, but also help to accumulate a large number of sentence patterns for your writing. 8. First of all, you can read and memorize the English words and articles aloud, which helps enlarge your vocabulary. Besides, it is suggested that you read a variety of English books, which is good for your writing. Last but not least, you should use English more often, such as trying communicating in English with classmates. 9. I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class and practise more. Secondly, confidence is very important. You should be confident and believe in yourself. Finally, you can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on English. I think you will adapt to it and do well in it in the near future. I hope you will make progress soon. 10. Firstly, preview the lessons before class, and you’d better listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Secondly, you can ask your English teacher for advice on how to study it in high school. Communicating with your classmates to get some advice is also helpful. Finally, confidence is of great importance, too. 11. Here are my suggestions. Firstly, it would be a nice choice to spend more time speaking. Only by talking will you master the language orally. Moreover, reading some short English novels is a good idea, which arouses your interest and passion. Above all, don’t lose heart whatever difficulty you face. 附录:其他话题的“求助与建议” 1. Due to the language barrier and the difference in learning style, I have encountered some difficulties. I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of the teachers and I found it challenging to understand their accent and follow their pace of the class. I was wondering if you could offer some tips on how to improve my English comprehension and communication skills. 2. I’m preparing for our school’s English speech contest, and I need your help. My speech topic is “The Power of Dreams.” I want to talk about how dreams can help us succeed. But I’m having trouble organizing my ideas and making my speech flow smoothly. Could you please give me some advice on how to make my speech better? I’d also like to know if my English sounds good and if there’s anything I can improve. 3. I’m writing to share with you a problem I’m currently facing. This semester, our school has introduced an oral English course, and I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of our foreign teacher. I find it challenging to understand his/her accent and follow the pace of the class. As a result, I’m feeling quite frustrated and I’m worried that my oral English skills won’t be effectively improved. 4. I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how to better cope with this situation. Perhaps you have some experience or suggestions that could help me improve my comprehension and communication skills in a foreign language environment. 5. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I’d like to know how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Could you tell me which day is OK with you? It would be great if you email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number, lihua@ 1236, and 12345678. 6. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. I’m happy to offer some advice to help you. Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’ meaning. Secondly, it makes sense to focus on understanding the historical and cultural background of the poems to appreciate the poetic language and imagery. Thirdly, you’d better try to read the poems out loud to better understand the poems’ structure. Finally, why not join a study group that can help you with your studies? 1-01【完整答案】 Dear Mr. Brown, l am Li Hua, one of your students. Entering the 12th grade, I came across some problems about English learning. Therefore, I am writing to seek your guidance. My biggest problem is how to do well in listening tasks. Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea. I also have trouble in remembering new words. Hard as I attempt to memorize them, they seem to disappear from my mind sometime later. l would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, LI Hua 1-02【完整答案】 Dear Tom, I am writing in response to your letter expressing your difficulties in learning English. I understand that facing challenges can be frustrating, but remember to maintain a positive attitude throughout your learning journey. To improve your English skills, it is essential to master effective study methods. Try to develop a routine of daily vocabulary memorization, reading English texts, and practicing speaking and listening. Consistent practice and perseverance are key to progress. Additionally, cultivating a genuine interest and passion for English learning can make the process more enjoyable and rewarding. Explore English literature, music, movies, or other resources that spark your curiosity. Remember, learning a new language takes time and effort, so be patient with yourself and keep striving for improvement. Yours, Li Hua 1 (广东省佛山市S6高质量发展联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考)假定你是高三学生李华,你上一次考试的读后续写题完成得不理想。请你根据以下要点,给你的外教Mike写一封信求助。 内容包括:1. 题型简介; 2. 你的困难。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;       2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇:读后续写 (continuation writing) Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2 (北京市八十中2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考)假定你是李华,准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教Jim写封邮件求助。 内容包括:1. 说明比赛要求;   2. 说出你的困难并请求帮助。 注意:1. 词数不少于100; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3 (2024届福建省福州市八县市一中高三5月模拟)假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,在排练英语剧时遇到困难,希望得到外教Betty老师的指导。你发邮件邀请她来现场,并请求帮助。 内容包括:1. 发出邀请: 2. 说明排练难处: 3. 请求指导。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇:排练v. rehearse    n. rehearsal Dear Betty, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4 (2024届江西省百所名校仿真模拟大联考高三下学期三模)假定你是李华,外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题,你就此做了调查。请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 调查结果; 2. 希望得到帮助。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Annie, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5 (广东省广州市玉岩中学2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考)假定你是李华,是你们班的英语课代表,班上部分同学向你反馈在听外教 Chris全英授课时存在困难,请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 说明问题; 2. 提出建议。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 6 (新疆乌鲁木齐市十二中2023-2024学年高三下学期2月月考)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习,他学了两年中文,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7 (2024届江苏省盐城市高三下学期5月考前指导)假定你是李华,最近你校英文报在调查学生英语课外阅读方面存在的困难,请你结合自身情况给编辑部写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 存在的困难; 2. 个人的建议。 注意:1. 词数 80 词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear editor, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 8 (2024年全国高考名校名师联席命制英语押题卷)假定你是李华,你校交换生George给你发来邮件,说他在学习唐诗时遇到了一些困难,希望你能给他提供一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 给出建议; 2. 表达祝愿。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear George, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 9 (陕西省安康市2024-2025学年高三上学期开学学情摸底考试)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己解决学习或生活中所遇到困难的经历,请你以“Efforts to Solve a Problem”为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1. 遇到的困难; 2. 解决措施; 3. 你的感受。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Efforts to Solve a Problem ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 (湖南省衡阳市衡阳县四中2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考)假如你叫李华,是一名高三学生。你的学校校刊英文专栏正在开展主题为“What to Do in the Face of Difficulty”的征稿活动,请分享你的经验和建议。 内容包括:1. 你对困难的理解和态度; 2. 分享你的一次相关经历; 3. 提出应对困难的建议。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 What to Do in the Face of Difficulty ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-9(遇困求助与解困建议)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指:要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说:针对同一个话题或题目,从不同的角度命题,要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题,积累更多的素材和灵感,提升思维的灵活性,激发写作的创造力,快速提高写作能力,以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“遇困求助与解困建议”,在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体:认真审题,弄清写作文体,是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为:书信体的求助信、建议信;非书信体的投稿。 二是要谋划篇章结构:一般来说,我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作): 三是要打开写作思路:这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一,近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而,许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外,思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题,笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路:①对“遇困求助与解困建议”话题的考查常见的有下列三种形式有:遇到困难发出求助、为他人提供克服困难的建议以及自己克服困难的经历、经验分享等;②对“遇困求助与解困建议”话题的写作考查常常涉及下列主要内容:学习中遇到的困难、生活中所遇到的困难、组织有关活动或参加有关竞赛备赛所遇到的困难等;③写作的重点在于对所遇困难的叙述、求助内容的表达以及如何提出建议等等。 另外,建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 1-01(福建省福州市2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次质量检测)假设你是李华,刚进人高三,在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件。 内容包括:1. 说明困难; 2. 寻求帮助。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Brown, I am Li Hua, one of your students. __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely; LiHua 1-02(2024届高考英语冲刺三轮考前写作训练专项<有改动>)假设你是某报社编辑李华,最近收到读者Tom的一封信,信中提到他是高一的学生,在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼,请根据以上提示写一篇建议信,帮Tom解决困难,促进学习。 建议:1. 保持良好心态; 2. 改进学习方法; 3. 培养学习兴趣。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【简析】 1-01篇属于书信体写作的求助信。要求考生给外教Mr.Brown写封邮件,说明自己在英语学习上遇到的困难并向对方寻求帮助。1-02篇属于书信体写作的建议信。要求考试以某报社编辑李华的身份给读者Tom写一篇建议信,帮助他解决学习英语过程中遇到的困难,从心态、学习方法和兴趣三个方面提出建议。 1-01篇写作的重点是有关“困难”内容的构思,而1-02篇写作的重点是有关“建议”内容的构思(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就以上两个写作重点提供不同的写作内容。 1. I’m writing for advice about one thing that has been troubling me. While I’ve tried, I still can’t make much progress in my English study. What frustrates me most is that I can’t seem to memorise those new words, which simply keep escaping my mind. It occurs to me that you, as a native of English, can give me some advice about how to learn it well, which I’ll treasure. 2. The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have never got satisfying marks. It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules. Besides, I find it difficult to write good English compositions. My English teacher is always explaining the language points in class and I can hardly take them down. 3. I am writing to seek your guidance on a problem I have been facing while reading English magazines. Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to. I have tried using online translation tools and looking up unfamiliar words in the dictionary, but these methods have not yielded the desired results. I believe that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines. 4. Recently, I have been struggling with understanding complex grammar rules and remembering various words. Despite my efforts, I still find it challenging to apply the knowledge effectively, especially when I communicate with others in English. I feel overwhelmed and am eager to improve. Could you recommend some strategies that could help me overcome these difficulties? 4. I have met much difficulty in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to memorize. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. 5. I have known you have some difficulty in learning English. Don’t worry about it. I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, preview the lessons before class, and you’d better listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Secondly, you can ask your English teacher for advice on how to study it in high school. Communicating with your classmates to get some advice is also helpful. Finally, confidence is of great importance, too. 6. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, practice speaking English as much as possible. You can find a partner or join an English club. Secondly, read English books, newspapers or watch English movies to improve your reading and listening skills. Thirdly, make a study plan and stick to it. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. 7.First of all, it is preferable to memorize as many words as possible since vocabulary makes all the difference to listening, speaking, reading and writing for English learners. Besides, I think it would be wise to read more English newspapers and magazines, which can not only enhance your interest in learning English, but also help to accumulate a large number of sentence patterns for your writing. 8. First of all, you can read and memorize the English words and articles aloud, which helps enlarge your vocabulary. Besides, it is suggested that you read a variety of English books, which is good for your writing. Last but not least, you should use English more often, such as trying communicating in English with classmates. 9. I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class and practise more. Secondly, confidence is very important. You should be confident and believe in yourself. Finally, you can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on English. I think you will adapt to it and do well in it in the near future. I hope you will make progress soon. 10. Firstly, preview the lessons before class, and you’d better listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Secondly, you can ask your English teacher for advice on how to study it in high school. Communicating with your classmates to get some advice is also helpful. Finally, confidence is of great importance, too. 11. Here are my suggestions. Firstly, it would be a nice choice to spend more time speaking. Only by talking will you master the language orally. Moreover, reading some short English novels is a good idea, which arouses your interest and passion. Above all, don’t lose heart whatever difficulty you face. 附录:其他话题的“求助与建议” 1. Due to the language barrier and the difference in learning style, I have encountered some difficulties. I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of the teachers and I found it challenging to understand their accent and follow their pace of the class. I was wondering if you could offer some tips on how to improve my English comprehension and communication skills. 2. I’m preparing for our school’s English speech contest, and I need your help. My speech topic is “The Power of Dreams.” I want to talk about how dreams can help us succeed. But I’m having trouble organizing my ideas and making my speech flow smoothly. Could you please give me some advice on how to make my speech better? I’d also like to know if my English sounds good and if there’s anything I can improve. 3. I’m writing to share with you a problem I’m currently facing. This semester, our school has introduced an oral English course, and I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of our foreign teacher. I find it challenging to understand his/her accent and follow the pace of the class. As a result, I’m feeling quite frustrated and I’m worried that my oral English skills won’t be effectively improved. 4. I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how to better cope with this situation. Perhaps you have some experience or suggestions that could help me improve my comprehension and communication skills in a foreign language environment. 5. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I’d like to know how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Could you tell me which day is OK with you? It would be great if you email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number, lihua@ 1236, and 12345678. 6. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. I’m happy to offer some advice to help you. Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’ meaning. Secondly, it makes sense to focus on understanding the historical and cultural background of the poems to appreciate the poetic language and imagery. Thirdly, you’d better try to read the poems out loud to better understand the poems’ structure. Finally, why not join a study group that can help you with your studies? 1-01【完整答案】 Dear Mr. Brown, l am Li Hua, one of your students. Entering the 12th grade, I came across some problems about English learning. Therefore, I am writing to seek your guidance. My biggest problem is how to do well in listening tasks. Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea. I also have trouble in remembering new words. Hard as I attempt to memorize them, they seem to disappear from my mind sometime later. l would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, LI Hua 1-02【完整答案】 Dear Tom, I am writing in response to your letter expressing your difficulties in learning English. I understand that facing challenges can be frustrating, but remember to maintain a positive attitude throughout your learning journey. To improve your English skills, it is essential to master effective study methods. Try to develop a routine of daily vocabulary memorization, reading English texts, and practicing speaking and listening. Consistent practice and perseverance are key to progress. Additionally, cultivating a genuine interest and passion for English learning can make the process more enjoyable and rewarding. Explore English literature, music, movies, or other resources that spark your curiosity. Remember, learning a new language takes time and effort, so be patient with yourself and keep striving for improvement. Yours, Li Hua 1 (广东省佛山市S6高质量发展联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考)假定你是高三学生李华,你上一次考试的读后续写题完成得不理想。请你根据以下要点,给你的外教Mike写一封信求助。 内容包括:1. 题型简介; 2. 你的困难。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;       2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇:读后续写 (continuation writing) Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】1 Dear Mike, I hope this message finds you well. As I prepare to enter my final year of high school, I’ve encountered challenges with the continuation writing task in English. Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions. Could you please provide me with advice on how to develop coherent and engaging story-lines? Additionally, I have no idea how to ensure that my continuation writing remains in line with the original text. Your guidance on these aspects would be greatly appreciated. I eagerly anticipate your insights and appreciate any assistance you can offer. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就对读后续写这一题型感到困惑一事,给外教Mr. Mike写一 封邮件求助。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 准备:prepare to → get ready to 令人困惑的:puzzling → confusing 合理的:reasonable → rational 指导:guidance → instruction 2. 句式拓展 原 句:Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions. 拓展句:Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions, which makes me anxious. 【高分句型】 1. As I prepare to enter my final year of high school, I’ve encountered challenges with the continuation writing task in English.(运用了as引导时间状语从句) 2. Could you please provide me with advice on how to develop coherent and engaging story-lines? (运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语) 【答案】2 Dear Mike, Confronted with the new type of test called “continuation writing”, so bewildered do I feel that I am writing in no time to request your professional and practical guidance, as you are exceptionally experienced in essay writing. For one thing, I feel it rather demanding to analyze the reading text accurately, let alone complete an impressive composition in such a limited time during an examination. For another, a shortage of vivid expressions to describe actions, feelings and surroundings undoubtedly becomes an enormous obstacle for me. Therefore, I’m in dire need of your assistance and advice. I’d appreciate it if you could burden yourself with my trouble and lend me a helping hand. Hopefully, blessed with your expert guidance, I could make more progress. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 2 (北京市八十中2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考)假定你是李华,准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教Jim写封邮件求助。 内容包括:1. 说明比赛要求;   2. 说出你的困难并请求帮助。 注意:1. 词数不少于100; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is going to hold an English poetry recitation contest. The requirements for the contest are quite strict. Each participant needs to choose an English poem and recite it within a limited time. I really want to do well in this competition, but I have some difficulties. Firstly, I’m having trouble choosing an appropriate poem. I’m not sure which one would be suitable for the contest. Secondly, my pronunciation and intonation are not perfect. I’m worried that this might affect my performance. I sincerely hope that you can give me some suggestions on poem selection and help me improve my pronunciation. Your guidance will be of great value to me. Thank you very much! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的求助信。要求考生给外教Jim写封信,就自己准备参加学校组 织的英文诗朗诵比赛一事说明困难并请求帮助。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 首先:firstly→ first of all 做某事有困难:have trouble doing→ have difficulty doing 担忧的:worried→ concerned 真诚地:sincerely→ genuinely 2. 句式拓展 原 句:Our school is going to hold an English poetry recitation contest. The requirements for the contest are quite strict. 拓展句:Our school is going to hold an English poetry recitation contest, whose requirements are quite strict. 【高分句型】 1. I’m not sure which one would be suitable for the contest.(运用了which引导的宾语从句) 2. I’m worried that this might affect my performance.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 3 (2024届福建省福州市八县市一中高三5月模拟)假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,在排练英语剧时遇到困难,希望得到外教Betty老师的指导。你发邮件邀请她来现场,并请求帮助。 内容包括:1. 发出邀请: 2. 说明排练难处: 3. 请求指导。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇:排练v. rehearse    n. rehearsal Dear Betty, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Betty, As president of the English Drama Club, I’m feeling fully frustrated since the days has witnessed our unsatisfactory rehearsal. Given that you are an enthusiast in drama performance , we are in desperate need of your expert guidance on the scene. To start with, with the lines from the original play, we students encounter great challenges during the rehearsals because of our limited vocabulary and inaccurate pronunciation. Could you please help adapt the lines and correct our pronunciation? What depressed us more is that during the rehearsal, not only does our action stiffen, but our facial expressions seem unnatural on the scene, making the performance unintegrated with the play. Words fail to express my gratitude if you can make presence and offer us valuable guidance. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就英语戏剧社在排练英语剧时遇到困难问题,写一封邮件 邀请外教Betty老师来现场指导。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 完全地:fully→completely 沮丧的:frustrated→downcast 专业的:expert→professional 首先:to start with→in the first place 2. 句式拓展 原 句:Words fail to express my gratitude if you can make presence and offer us valuable guidance. 同义句:Words cannot express my gratitude if you could come and provide us with valuable guidance. 【高分句型】 1. As president of the English Drama Club, I’m feeling fully frustrated since the days has witnessed our unsatisfactory rehearsal. (运用了since引导的时间状语从句) 2. What depressed us more is that during the rehearsal, not only does our action stiffen, but our facial expressions seem unnatural on the scene, making the performance unintegrated with the play.(运用了what引导的主语从 句和that引导的表语从句) 4 (2024届江西省百所名校仿真模拟大联考高三下学期三模)假定你是李华,外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题,你就此做了调查。请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 调查结果; 2. 希望得到帮助。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Annie, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Annie, I’ve conducted a survey among my classmates to gather insights on the challenges that we face in English learning. The results indicate that the most common difficulties are related to vocabulary retention and comprehension of native English speakers’ accents. Additionally, some students struggle with grammar rules and the application of them in real-world conversations. Given our collective interest in improving these areas, I would greatly appreciate your guidance and assistance. Your expertise in English teaching would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles. Thank you for considering our needs. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题,考生就此做了调查, 要求考生按照要求给外教写一封邮件。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 实施,做:conduct→ do 收集:gather→ collect 表明:indicate→ suggest 困难:difficulty→ trouble 2. 句式拓展 原 句:Your expertise in English teaching would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles. 拓展句:It is your expertise in English teaching that would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles. 【高分句型】 1. I’ve conducted a survey among my classmates to gather insights on the challenges that we face in English learning.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) 2. The results indicate that the most common difficulties are related to vocabulary retention and comprehension of native English speakers’ accents.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 5 (广东省广州市玉岩中学2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考)假定你是李华,是你们班的英语课代表,班上部分同学向你反馈在听外教 Chris全英授课时存在困难,请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 说明问题; 2. 提出建议。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to tell you about some problems that some classmates are facing. Some of my classmates have difficulty understanding your lessons because you speak English throughout the class. They are not used to this pure English teaching environment and find it hard to catch up with your pace. They suggest that you speak a little slower and explain some difficult words or expressions. Also, it would be great if you could give more examples and visual aids to help us better understand the content. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信,向其说明同学们反馈的 Chris全英授课时存在的困难并提出建议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 做某事有困难:have difficulty (in) doing→ have trouble (in) doing 建议:suggest→ advise 极棒的:great→ wonderful 有帮助的:be helpful→ be of help 2. 句式拓展 原 句:They are not used to this pure English teaching environment and find it hard to catch up with your pace. 拓展句:Since they are not used to this pure English teaching environment, they find it hard to catch up with your pace. 【高分句型】 1. I’m writing to tell you about some problems that some classmates are facing.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 2. Some of my classmates have difficulty understanding your lessons because you speak English throughout the class.(运用了because引导的状语从句) 6 (新疆乌鲁木齐市十二中2023-2024学年高三下学期2月月考)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习,他学了两年中文,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jack, I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. As for the problem that you mentioned in your letter, I have some tips for you. Firstly, just like learning any other foreign language, when learning Chinese, you should not be shy. On the contrary, you should be confident and brave, and try to speak Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. After all, the more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. Besides, you’d better speak Chinese slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood by others easily. Thirdly, if others can’t understand you, or you don’t know how to express yourself, it is also a good idea to use pictures or body language to help you. I really hope you will find my advice useful and helpful. Looking forward to seeing you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给Jack写封回信,就他担心用中文交流时会遇到困难 提几点建议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 高兴的:glad →pleased 建议:tip →advice/suggestion 重要的:be important → be of importance 此外:besides →furthermore/what’s more 2. 句式拓展 原 句:In this way, you can make yourself understood by others easily. 拓展句:Only in this way can you make yourself understood by others easily. 【高分句型】 1. As for the problem that you mentioned in your letter, I have some tips for you. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 2. After all, the more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it.(运用了the more…the more…固定句型) 7 (2024届江苏省盐城市高三下学期5月考前指导)假定你是李华,最近你校英文报在调查学生英语课外阅读方面存在的困难,请你结合自身情况给编辑部写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 存在的困难; 2. 个人的建议。 注意:1. 词数 80 词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear editor, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Editor, Learning that you are conducting a survey about students’ difficulties in English extracurricular reading, I’m writing to share my thoughts. Personally, there exist some common difficulties among students such as lack of suitable reading materials, little spare time after class and heavy academic pressure from exams. To address these, I suggest teachers recommend proper reading materials according to students’ English levels. Besides, school is expected to reduce students’ studying tasks to allow them more time to read after class. I do hope that my email can be of some value to your survey. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,就自身在英语课外阅读方面存在的困难向英 文报编辑部写一封邮件,包括自己存在的问题以及建议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 困难:difficulty→ trouble 就我而言:Personally→ In my opinion 建议:suggest→advise 此外:Besides→ What’s more 2. 句式拓展 原 句:To address these, I suggest teachers recommend proper reading materials according to students’ English levels. 复合句:To address these, I suggest teachers recommend proper reading materials which can meet students’ English levels. 【高分句型】 1. Learning that you are conducting a survey about students’ difficulties in English extracurricular reading, I’m writing to share my thoughts.(现在分词作状语) 2. I do hope that my email can be of some value to your survey.(强调句和that引导的宾语从句) 8 (2024年全国高考名校名师联席命制英语押题卷)假定你是李华,你校交换生George给你发来邮件,说他在学习唐诗时遇到了一些困难,希望你能给他提供一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 给出建议; 2. 表达祝愿。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear George, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear George, I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. I’m happy to offer some advice to help you. Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’ meaning. Secondly, it makes sense to focus on understanding the historical and cultural background of the poems to appreciate the poetic language and imagery. Thirdly, you’d better try to read the poems out loud to better understand the poems’ structure. Finally, why not join a study group that can help you with your studies? Don’t be discouraged. With time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals. Best wishes, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生George回信,给他提供一些学习唐诗的建议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 首先:firstly→first of all 集中:focus on→concentrate on 沮丧的:discouraged→upset 能够:be able to→be capable of 2. 句式拓展 原 句:With time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals. 拓展句:As long as you try with time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals. 【高分句型】 1. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 2. Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’ meaning. (运用了虚拟语气) 9 (陕西省安康市2024-2025学年高三上学期开学学情摸底考试)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己解决学习或生活中所遇到困难的经历,请你以“Efforts to Solve a Problem”为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1. 遇到的困难; 2. 解决措施; 3. 你的感受。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Efforts to Solve a Problem ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Efforts to Solve a Problem After starting high school, I felt stressed out and would always relax by playing computer games. I got so absorbed that I played them day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards. With my grades dropping sharply, I knew that it was necessary to adjust my lifestyle immediately. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace gaming with something else. Watching comedies and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. After five months of trying out new ways to relax, I feel more energetic. Best of all, I feel like I am now in control of my own life. I can change myself. I just need to try. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报组织同学们分享自己解决学习或生活中所遇到困难的经历, 请考生以“Efforts to Solve a Problem”为题写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 意识到:realize→be aware of 取代:replace→take the place of 立即:immediately→instantly 精力充沛:energetic→full of energy 2. 句式拓展 原 句:After five months of trying out new ways to relax, I feel more energetic. 拓展句:It is after five months of trying out new ways to relax that I feel more energetic. 【高分句型】 1. I got so absorbed that I played them day and night. (运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句) 2. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace gaming with something else. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 10 (湖南省衡阳市衡阳县四中2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考)假如你叫李华,是一名高三学生。你的学校校刊英文专栏正在开展主题为“What to Do in the Face of Difficulty”的征稿活动,请分享你的经验和建议。 内容包括:1. 你对困难的理解和态度; 2. 分享你的一次相关经历; 3. 提出应对困难的建议。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 What to Do in the Face of Difficulty ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 What to Do in the Face of Difficulty It’s known that we live in a world with various difficulties. Therefore, it’s natural for us to meet with difficulties in our growth. Faced with them, we should keep calm and have an optimistic attitude. As for me, I once had difficulty in balancing my study and life. As a result, I failed in many exams of the first year. Luckily, I was not discouraged by this. Instead, I made a detailed time schedule with the help of teachers and carried out it strictly, which helped me make great progress in my study. Also I can successfully balance my life and study. To deal with difficulties better, I think we should learn more knowledge and skills. Besides, we can regard challenges as opportunities to grow. Every challenge or difficulty we confront in life serves to strengthen our will, confidence and ability to conquer future obstacles. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校刊英文专栏开展的主题为“What to Do in the Face of Difficulty”的征稿活动投稿,分享经验和教训。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 各种各样的,不同的:various→different 遇到:meet with→encounter 幸运的是:luckily→fortunately 把……看作:regard...as→consider...as/view ... as 2. 句式拓展 原 句:It’s known that we live in a world with various difficulties. 拓展句:As we all know, we live in a world with various difficulties. 【高分句型】 1. Faced with them, we should keep calm and have an optimistic attitude. (运用了过去分词作状语) 2. Every challenge or difficulty we confront in life serves to strengthen our will, confidence and ability to conquer future obstacles. (运用了省略that的限制性定语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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