2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：雪山遇险：绝境中盼来的生机 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 雪山遇险：绝境中盼来的生机 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Rudi Gonsalves could barely contain his excitement as he sped downhill. It was the first day of his holiday in the Romanian ski resort of Poiana Brasov and he was 6,000 feet up one of its highest mountains, breathing in the cleanest air. Weather and snow conditions were perfect. An experienced skier, he tackled the difficult “black” run with ease, knees gently bent to meet the uneven surface of the snow. Rudi, a part-time youth worker from Epsom Downs, Surrey, regularly booked a winter holiday with his wife Sue. But Sue was scared of heights and could not overcome her sense of foreboding as the skiing season approached. So this time Rudi, a keen sportsman and fit for his 57 years, had come alone. 4 4 续写原文 As he snaked his way down the mountain on that March afternoon last year, snowflakes began to fall—lightly at first, then more heavily until the clouds blotted out the sun entirely, transforming everything into a ghostly whiteness. He could just make out other skiers descending the slopes as fast as they could. I’d better stay close to them for safety, he decided. This could be tricky. Straining to see ahead, Rudi was only vaguely aware of a looming outline lumbering up the mountain. “Did anyone see me fall? Where am I?” 5 5 续写原文 He looked around him, trying to get his bearings, but in every direction there was only the same vast whiteness. Then he took out his gold watch, a treasured present from his wife. It not only told him the time, 1.54pm, it also seemed to give him strength. It was getting dark when Rudi finally gave up his attempt to scale the mountain and decided to head downhill instead. He knew it would mean moving away from the best route back to his hotel, but there seemed to be no alternative. Despair began to dog Rudi as he faced up to the reality of spending a night in the open. It was 5.30 pm and the temperature was dropping fast. He began to shiver, his teeth chattering uncontrollably. He felt very alone. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: After three hours he was very tired, colder than he had ever felt. Paragraph 2：He was barely aware of two horses drawing a wagon along the lane towards him. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 鲁迪・贡萨尔维斯独自在罗马尼亚滑雪胜地度假，他经验丰富，在完美的天气和雪况下轻松滑雪。但途中突降大雪，他与其他滑雪者走散，迷失在茫茫白雪中。他尝试寻找路线，却无奈天色渐暗，气温骤降，他陷入绝望，意识到可能要在野外过夜。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： After three hours he was very tired, colder than he had ever felt. 三个小时后，他疲惫至极，感受到了前所未有的寒冷。每迈出一步，都像是用尽了全身的力气，双腿沉重得仿佛灌满了铅。彻骨的寒冷穿透衣物，如冰刀般刺痛他的身体，让他的身体逐渐失去知觉。鲁迪深知自己的处境万分危急，可他依旧努力保持着乐观，脑海中不断浮现出与妻子苏的温馨画面，那是他坚持下去的动力。突然，他看到前方有几块突兀的岩石，或许能为他遮挡一些风雪。他拼尽全力朝那里挪去，在岩石下紧紧地缩成一团，试图保存仅剩的一点体温，在这冰天雪地中，他只能默默祈祷奇迹出现。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：He was barely aware of two horses drawing a wagon along the lane towards him. 他几乎没有察觉到两辆马拉着一辆马车沿着小路朝他驶来。马蹄声由远及近，渐渐传入他的耳中，将他从半昏迷的状态中唤醒。鲁迪艰难地抬起头，模糊地看到马车停在了身旁。一位面容和善的当地人从车上下来，看到鲁迪的惨状，立刻拿来一条厚厚的毛毯，将他裹住，然后小心翼翼地扶他上了马车。当地人把鲁迪带回了温暖的家中，给他端来热气腾腾的汤，还迅速联系了医疗救助。鲁迪的生命因此得以挽救，他心中满是对这次意外相遇的感激之情。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 After three hours he was very tired, colder than he had ever felt. His legs were so heavy that it seemed as if they were filled with lead. Every step he took was a great struggle. The piercing cold penetrated his clothes, numbing his body. Rudi was well aware that he was in a desperate situation. However, he tried his best to stay positive, thinking of the happy moments he had spent with his wife Sue. These memories were what kept him going. Suddenly, he noticed a small outcropping of rocks in the distance. Maybe they could provide some shelter from the wind and snow. With all his remaining strength, he dragged himself towards the rocks. Once there, he huddled up tightly, trying to conserve the little body heat he had left. In this icy world, he could only hope for a miracle. 14 14 范文呈现 He was barely aware of two horses drawing a wagon along the lane towards him. The sound of the horses' hooves gradually became louder, which roused him from his semi - conscious state. With great difficulty, he lifted his head. The wagon stopped beside him, and a kind - faced local man got off the wagon. Seeing Rudi's poor condition, the man quickly fetched a thick blanket and wrapped it around Rudi. Then he helped Rudi into the wagon gently. The local man took Rudi to his warm house, served him hot soup, and immediately called for medical help. Thanks to this unexpected encounter, Rudi's life was saved, and he was filled with deep gratitude. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 After three hours, he was utterly exhausted, experiencing a cold more intense than ever before. His legs, as if laden with lead, made each step a Herculean effort. The frigid cold, like a relentless invader, seeped through his clothing, rendering his body numb. Rudi, fully conscious of his dire situation, clung to optimism, his mind filled with the cherished memories of his wife, Sue. These recollections served as his beacon of hope. Suddenly, a small outcropping of rocks came into view. Perhaps they could offer a haven from the elements. Summoning every ounce of his remaining strength, he dragged himself towards them. Once there, he huddled tightly, desperately attempting to preserve the meager body heat that remained. In this desolate, wintry expanse, he could do nothing but pray for a miracle. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Barely conscious, he was scarcely aware of two horses pulling a wagon along the lane towards him. The rhythmic clatter of the horses' hooves, growing steadily louder, roused him from his semi - stupor. With great effort, he managed to lift his head. The wagon halted beside him, and a kind - faced local emerged. Upon seeing Rudi's pitiful state, the man wasted no time in retrieving a thick blanket to wrap around him. Gently, he assisted Rudi into the wagon. Back at his warm abode, the local provided Rudi with hot soup and promptly summoned medical aid. Thanks to this serendipitous encounter, Rudi's life was spared, and a profound sense of gratitude welled up within him. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$