2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：以善制恶：化解校园欺凌的智慧 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 以善制恶：化解校园欺凌的智慧 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Michael saw the trouble coming. There standing in the hallway was Frank, the boy who enjoyed making fun of anyone at any given moment. Frank was tall and strong, so few of his victims stood up to him. Michael hated the idea that Frank always got away with his wrongdoing. Yet like most kids who were picked on, he just took it quietly and waited for the unpleasant to pass. Frank walked up, his eyes locked on the books in Michael’s arms. When they met, Frank stopped unexpectedly, “Hey, let me see those books!” Some students watched as Michael held out the books he was carrying, trying not to give away his nervousness. Frank took a book, looked inside for a second, and then threw the book at Michael, who dropped all the other books. “Hey, those are school property,” Frank barked, “Be careful!” Then he walked away, laughing loudly. 4 4 续写原文 Michael, his cheeks turning red, half kicked the fallen books. Suddenly a hand picked up one book. “You look like you could use a p ally (盟友),” a friendly voice said. It was Ramon, the most athletic boy in the high school. Michael couldn’t believe Ramon was stopping to help him as they barely spoke. “Thanks,” Michael sighed with relief. “It’s confusing. I don’t know what his problems is.” “Well, as I see it,” Ramon said, “you need to find a way to end this.” Michael nodded, stuck for what to say. Ramon continued, “You know my grandmother used to tell me whenever I had a problem with someone. She’d say, ‘You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar (醋).’” 5 5 续写原文 Looking puzzled, Michael asked, “What does that mean?” “It means kindness may be more effective than anger,” Ramon explained. “Can you just tell Frank to stop picking on me?” Michael suggested. “That’s vinegar,” Ramon laughed as he walked away. “Try honey instead.” Ramon’s words left Michael thinking. The next school day brought Michael’s usual pain. There stood Frank, and Michael knew it would be just seconds before he had to face him in the middle of the hall. Frank came nearer. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. Paragraph 2：Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank’s books on the floor. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 迈克尔在学校常被弗兰克欺负，弗兰克身材高大强壮，爱取笑他人，多数受害者都默默忍受，迈克尔也不例外。一次，弗兰克又抢走迈克尔手中的书并扔向他，书散落一地。此时，学校里最具运动天赋的拉蒙出现，帮迈克尔捡起书，并建议他用友善（“蜂蜜”）而非愤怒（“醋”）来解决问题。第二天，迈克尔又遇到了弗兰克。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. 接着，突然，意想不到的事情发生了。弗兰克如往常一样，带着一脸不怀好意的笑，大踏步朝迈克尔走来。可就在他快要走到迈克尔面前时，不知怎么的，他像是被什么绊了一下，整个人向前扑了出去，“砰” 的一声重重摔倒在地。他手中抱着的书也跟着飞了出去，在地上四处散落。周围的同学都被这突如其来的一幕惊到了，忍不住倒吸一口凉气。摔倒的弗兰克满脸通红，既疼又尴尬，他抬起头，目光扫过周围的同学，似乎在等着有人嘲笑他。然而，此刻的迈克尔，脑海中突然浮现出拉蒙说的话。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank’s books on the floor. 迈克尔弯下腰，迅速捡起地上弗兰克的书。他脸上带着真诚的微笑，站起身，把书递给弗兰克，关切地说：“你没事吧？谁都不想摔这么一跤。” 弗兰克愣住了，他瞪大了眼睛，不敢相信眼前发生的一切。他怎么也没想到，一向被自己欺负的迈克尔，不但没有嘲笑他，反而还关心他。他结结巴巴地说了声 “谢谢”，然后有些手足无措地站在那里。从那以后，弗兰克再也没有找过迈克尔的麻烦。迈克尔深切地体会到，拉蒙所说的友善，真的是解决矛盾的神奇法宝。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. Frank, who was approaching Michael with a sneer on his face as usual, somehow tripped over something. He stumbled forward and fell heavily to the ground with a loud thud. The books in his hands flew out and scattered all over the corridor. The students around were startled by this sudden event and couldn't help but gasp. Lying on the ground, Frank's face turned red with a mix of pain and embarrassment. He looked up, his eyes scanning the students around, as if expecting someone to laugh at him. At this moment, however, Michael remembered what Ramon had told him. 14 14 范文呈现 Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank’s books on the floor. With a sincere smile on his face, he stood up and handed the books back to Frank, saying with concern, “Are you okay? Nobody wants to have such a bad fall.” Frank was taken aback. His eyes widened in disbelief. He never expected that Michael, whom he had always bullied, would not only not laugh at him but also show concern for him. He stammered out a “Thanks” and stood there, looking a bit awkward. From then on, Frank never bothered Michael again. Michael deeply realized that the kindness, the “honey” Ramon mentioned, was really a magic weapon to resolve conflicts. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Then, all of a sudden, the unexpected unfolded. Frank, strutting towards Michael with his customary sneer, inexplicably tripped. He lurched forward, crashing to the ground with a resounding thud. The books clutched in his hands went flying, dispersing haphazardly across the corridor. The onlookers gasped in unison, startled by this abrupt turn of events. Prostrate on the floor, Frank's face flushed scarlet, a blend of pain and mortification. His eyes darted around, anticipating the usual mockery. At that very instant, though, Michael's mind echoed with Ramon's words. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Michael promptly crouched down and gathered Frank's books from the floor. Rising to his feet, a warm, sincere smile gracing his features, he returned the books to Frank, inquiring solicitously, “Are you alright? No one wishes to endure such a tumble.” Frank was left stunned, his eyes widening in sheer disbelief. It had never occurred to him that Michael, the very target of his bullying, would not only refrain from ridicule but also extend a caring hand. He stammered a hesitant “Thanks” and stood there, a hint of awkwardness evident. From that moment on, Frank ceased his harassment of Michael. Michael came to a profound realization that the kindness, the “honey” as Ramon had put it, was indeed a miraculous means of resolving conflicts. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$