2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：因熊结缘，共赴温暖圣诞之约 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 因熊结缘，共赴温暖圣诞之约 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Seeing the picture of Kelly and I holding teddy bears with great joy, I couldn’t help recalling the sweet memory. A few years ago, before Christmas, my dad placed a large box in his grocery store for people to donate toys for children in need. Kelly, my best friend came over to help with the wrapping. Knowing that our efforts would bring joy to so many children during the holiday season, we thought it was a rewarding experience. As we worked, we shared moments of laughter and joy. After a short while, we had almost finished wrapping all the toys with just one little teddy bear left. Looking at it, I said, “It is the sweetest! It reminds me of my teddy bear. I sold all my little kid stuff at our garage sale when we moved. But now I’m really missing it!” 4 4 续写原文 Kelly came to see it and shared. “I have a sad teddy bear story too. When my little brother was a baby, I let him play with my Rosy Bear, but he refused to give her back. Ever.” After our chat, we knew both of us had a special story with a teddy bear. Right then, my dad entered the room and exclaimed. “Wow, great wrapping job! The kids are going to be thrilled when opening these presents.” “They definitely will. Maybe we both want to be the one who can get the teddy bear. I can just imagine how delighted a kid would be to unwrap this sweet teddy bear.” said Kelly. We laughed, gazing at the perfectly wrapped bears. 5 5 续写原文 My mom, joining in the laughter, suggested, “Why don’t you gather at our house next Saturday for a cookie-decorating party and exchange your Christmas gifts in advance? I’ll prepare the cookies for you.” “Good idea! I will enjoy the great joy of unwrapping the gift.” I said cheerfully. Hearing what we said, Kelly’s eyes lit up, saying, “Count me in!” “All right, girls,” said my dad. “We need to do the toy-loading work now. We have to drop off all these presents before five o’clock!” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. Paragraph 2：Finally, the day of the party arrived. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 几年前圣诞节前，“我” 和好友凯莉在爸爸杂货店帮忙包装捐赠给贫困儿童的玩具。过程中，两人分享了与泰迪熊相关的回忆，都对最后一只泰迪熊情有独钟。之后妈妈提议两人提前交换圣诞礼物，大家约定周六在 “我” 家举办饼干装饰派对。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. 第二周，我一直绞尽脑汁，思索着派对上送给凯莉的完美礼物。我先是翻遍了衣柜，里面的衣物要么太普通，要么凯莉可能不喜欢。接着又查看了书架，想找本有意义的书，可也没有合适的。突然，我想起了外婆送给我的一条手工围巾。那围巾针法细密，颜色柔和，每次看到它，都能感受到外婆满满的爱意。我觉得凯莉一定会喜欢它。于是，我精心挑选了漂亮的包装纸，用丝带打上一个漂亮的蝴蝶结，满心期待着派对上凯莉收到礼物时的惊喜表情。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Finally, the day of the party arrived. 终于，派对的日子来临了。一大早我就起床，精心打扮了一番，然后小心翼翼地捧着礼物来到客厅。凯莉已经到了，她穿着一身漂亮的连衣裙，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。我们迫不及待地交换礼物。当我打开礼盒，看到那只可爱的泰迪熊时，我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。原来凯莉偷偷买下了它，只为给我一个惊喜。我感动得热泪盈眶，立刻紧紧抱住凯莉。而凯莉收到围巾后，也爱不释手，马上围在脖子上，对着镜子开心地打量。随后，我们开始一起装饰饼干，欢声笑语充满了整个房间，度过了一段无比欢乐的时光。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. I searched through my wardrobe, but none of the clothes seemed appropriate. Then I looked through my bookshelf, hoping to find a meaningful book, yet there was nothing suitable. Suddenly, an idea occurred to me. I remembered a handmade scarf given by my grandmother. It was soft, with delicate stitches and a gentle color. Every time I saw it, I could feel my grandmother's deep love. I thought Kelly would surely love it too. So I carefully selected beautiful wrapping paper and tied a pretty bow with a ribbon. I was full of anticipation for the surprise on Kelly's face when she received the gift at the party. 14 14 范文呈现 Finally, the day of the party arrived. I got up early in the morning and dressed up carefully. Then I carried the gift to the living room with great care. Kelly was already there, wearing a beautiful dress and a big smile on her face. We couldn't wait to exchange gifts. When I opened the box and saw the lovely teddy bear, I could hardly believe my eyes. It turned out that Kelly had secretly bought it for me as a surprise. I was so touched that tears welled up in my eyes, and I immediately hugged Kelly tightly. Kelly also loved the scarf very much. She put it around her neck right away and looked at herself in the mirror happily. After that, we started decorating cookies together. Laughter and joy filled the whole room, and we spent an extremely happy time. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The following week, I was immersed in the quest for the perfect gift for the party. Scouring my wardrobe, I found that none of the garments could measure up to my expectations. Turning to my bookshelf, I hoped to unearth a meaningful tome, only to be met with disappointment. Then, a flash of inspiration struck. I recalled a handmade scarf bestowed upon me by my grandmother. Its soft texture, intricate stitches, and soothing color were a testament to her love. I was certain that Kelly would cherish it. With meticulous care, I selected elegant wrapping paper and adorned it with a charming ribbon bow. Anticipation coursed through me as I envisioned the look of surprise on Kelly's face when she received the gift at the party. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Finally, the day of the long - awaited party arrived. Rising early, I dressed with great care, eager to make the occasion special. Cradling the gift in my hands, I entered the living room. There, Kelly awaited, resplendent in a beautiful dress, her face alight with excitement. Without hesitation, we exchanged gifts. As I opened the box and beheld the adorable teddy bear, disbelief washed over me. Kelly had secretly purchased it, intending to surprise me. Overwhelmed with emotion, tears welled in my eyes, and I embraced her tightly. Kelly, too, was enchanted by the scarf. She promptly draped it around her neck and admired herself in the mirror with a contented smile. Subsequently, we embarked on the delightful task of decorating cookies. Laughter echoed through the room, creating a memory that would be cherished forever. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$