2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：森林奇遇引转机，妹妹病情得救助 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 森林奇遇引转机，妹妹病情得救助 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Peter sat at the kitchen table, having breakfast. It had been another bad night for his baby sister, Lily, and his parents were arguing in the sitting room. He heard his mother mention Tom, an old man who lived in the forest. Peter often explored the forest and knew Mr. Tom was a kind herbalist (草药医生). Was it true that he could help Lily? Peter wouldn’t rest until he found it out. After breakfast, Peter immediately set off. It was a short walk from his home to the forest’s edge. Peter was so focused on his thoughts of his sister that he didn’t notice the strange crying sounds in the distance until he got close enough. He followed the sounds until they led him to a cave. 4 4 续写原文 A flashlight lit up suddenly in the cave, and Peter saw a little boy lying on the dirt-covered stone. Peter learned that the boy called Cliff came to this forest with his mother but ran off by himself. Cliff was injured and didn’t see his mother. Peter decided to take Cliff to Mr. Tom. When they saw Mr. Tom and told him everything, Mr. Tom treated the injury with a bandage (绷带) and helped contact Cliff’s mother over the radio. Peter moved closer to look at Cliff’s bandaged ankle and felt a sense of relief. Then Peter turned to Mr. Tom and said, “Mr. Tom, my baby sister is very sick. I overheard Mom mention you, so I came out here today to ask you for help...” Before Peter finished his words, Mr. Tom said, “I had tried to help, but your sister needed to be sent to a big hospital and a lot of money...” Peter realized his parents had argued because they couldn’t afford Lily’s treatment. 5 5 续写原文 Mr. Tom was trying to comfort Peter when someone knocked on the door. Mr. Tom opened it and saw a lady, who claimed herself as Cliff’s mother. “It’s you!” Mr. Tom shouted excitedly. “You’re a fan?” the lady said. “I came to this area to spend a holiday with my son. Thankfully, you have saved him. Where is he?” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. Paragraph 2：The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 彼得的妹妹莉莉生病，父母为此争吵，彼得得知森林里的草药医生汤姆先生或许能帮忙，便出发寻找。途中他在山洞发现受伤的男孩克里夫，带他去找汤姆先生。汤姆先生为克里夫处理伤口并联系其母亲。彼得向汤姆先生求助，汤姆表示莉莉需大医院治疗但费用高昂。此时，克里夫母亲到来，她竟是位富商。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. 汤姆先生点点头，领着这位女士走向她的儿子。看到儿子安然无恙，女士激动得泪水夺眶而出。克里夫也紧紧抱住母亲，诉说着自己的害怕与无助。女士平复情绪后，对汤姆先生和彼得千恩万谢。汤姆先生在交谈中，不经意间说起彼得妹妹莉莉生病却没钱医治的困境。这位女士听闻后，内心深受触动。她深知疾病给家庭带来的痛苦，作为一位富有同情心且财力雄厚的商人，她当场决定要伸出援手，承担莉莉所有的医疗费用。彼得站在一旁，简直不敢相信自己的耳朵，眼中瞬间燃起了希望的光芒。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. 第二天清晨，在自己的卧室里，彼得被一声欢快的尖叫唤醒。他迷迷糊糊地睁开眼睛，听出是母亲的声音，便急忙冲向客厅。只见父母都满脸洋溢着兴奋与喜悦。母亲一把拉住彼得，激动地告诉他，那位好心的女士已经迅速安排好了一切，莉莉马上就能转去一家顶尖的大医院接受治疗。很快，莉莉被送往医院，在专业医生的精心照料下，病情逐渐好转。一家人对这位女士的善举感激不尽，而彼得也感受到了人间的温暖与美好。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. When the lady saw Cliff, she was so excited that tears welled up in her eyes. Cliff also ran to his mother and hugged her tightly, telling her how scared he was. After calming down, the lady thanked Mr. Tom and Peter repeatedly. During the conversation, Mr. Tom mentioned Peter's sister Lily's illness and the financial problem they faced. The lady, who was a wealthy and kind - hearted businesswoman, was deeply touched. She thought for a moment and then decided to cover all of Lily's medical expenses. Peter stood there, his eyes wide open, hardly believing what he had just heard. A glimmer of hope appeared in his eyes. 14 14 范文呈现 The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. He opened his eyes sleepily and recognized it was his mother's voice. He rushed to the living room in a hurry. There, he saw his parents beaming with happiness. His mother told him that the kind lady had arranged everything quickly. Lily was going to be transferred to a top - class hospital right away. Soon, Lily was sent to the hospital. With the careful treatment of professional doctors, Lily's condition gradually improved. The whole family was extremely grateful to the lady, and Peter also felt the warmth and kindness of the world. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Mr. Tom nodded and, with a gesture, led the lady towards her son. The moment the lady laid eyes on Cliff, overwhelming excitement surged within her, and tears welled in her eyes. Cliff, in turn, sprinted towards his mother, embracing her tightly as he poured out his fear and helplessness. Once the initial emotion subsided, the lady expressed her gratitude to Mr. Tom and Peter profusely. It was during this conversation that Mr. Tom, casually yet sincerely, brought up the plight of Peter's sister Lily—her illness and the financial burden that came with it. The lady, a wealthy and compassionate businesswoman, was deeply moved. Without a moment's hesitation, she resolved to shoulder all of Lily's medical expenses. Peter, standing by, was left dumbfounded, his eyes wide with disbelief, yet a glimmer of hope sparkled within them. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was roused from his slumber by a joyful scream. Rubbing his eyes sleepily, he recognized it as his mother's voice. Hastening to the living room, he was greeted by the sight of his parents beaming with elation. His mother, filled with excitement, informed him that the kind - hearted lady had expeditiously arranged everything. Lily was to be immediately transferred to a top - notch hospital. Soon, Lily was on her way to the hospital, where, under the meticulous care of professional doctors, her condition began to improve steadily. The entire family was filled with profound gratitude towards the lady, and Peter, too, experienced a deep sense of the warmth and goodness that pervaded the world. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$