2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从厨艺小白到参赛蜕变之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从厨艺小白到参赛蜕变之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 When Mr. Bruin, our teacher, announced a competition to end our kitchen skills unit, where participants must cook without recipes, using only the ingredients (原料) provided by the judges, I recalled what always happened in my family. My mom knew how to make seven meals. She kept all seven recipes in a pink binder (活页夹), each one labelled with a day of the week. On Mondays was Meatloaf (烘肉卷). And it had been Tuna Tuesdays and Spaghetti Saturdays for, like, my entire life. I hated it. Oh, not only I, but also my younger brother, Georgie. “Not every meal has to start with the same letter as a day of the week. And all of it tastes awful,” I complained at the dining table. “Yeah! Meatloaf's awful,” repeated Georgie.. My mom's eyes flashed. But at least I had someone at my back. 4 4 续写原文 My thought was interrupted by the words of Tania, my best friend. “I'm totally going to win,” she announced. “I've got talent in my genes.” It was true. Tania's dad was the best cook ever. I thought about my genes. I didn't know much about them. So, if I wanted to win, I needed practice. Tonight, I was making supper. 5 5 续写原文 My attempt, unfortunately, proved a failure. I combined chocolate chips, marshmallows, carrots, potatoes, and kidney beans in a pot, which turned out a burnt mess, much to my own disappointment. Georgie even cheered when my mom offered the remaining meatloaf as a more appealing option. As I was pouring it into the garbage can, Mrs. Benny, my neighbor, spotted me. “What's that?” she asked. “Supper,” I said. “Good to know,” said Mrs. Benny. “It's nice of you to help your mother, even if it didn't work out. Your mom works hard.” “Actually, I was just practicing for a cooking competition at school. We have to come up with our own recipes for it. But I'm a lost cause.”Mrs. Benny looked thoughtful, “Why don't you come over to my place? I'll offer you some help.” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: The next day I was standing in Mrs. Benny's garden, surrounded by red tomatoes and rows of greens. Paragraph 2：When I got home with two containers of tomato jam, my mom was lying on the sofa, a wet cloth on her forehead. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 老师宣布厨艺单元有一场无食谱烹饪比赛，原料由评委提供。“我” 想起妈妈只会做七道菜，且味道不佳，自己和弟弟都不喜欢。好友塔尼亚称有家族厨艺基因能夺冠，“我” 决定练习。然而首次尝试却失败了，把各种原料混合煮成一团焦糊。邻居本尼夫人看到后，邀请 “我” 去她家帮忙练习厨艺。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：The next day I was standing in Mrs. Benny's garden, surrounded by red tomatoes and rows of greens. 第二天，我站在本尼夫人的花园里，四周环绕着红彤彤的西红柿和一排排翠绿的蔬菜。本尼夫人热情地穿梭在菜畦间，一边向我介绍各种蔬菜的特点，一边讲解如何根据它们的特性来搭配食材。她摘下一颗饱满的西红柿，放在我手心，说：“西红柿是很多菜肴的好搭档，酸甜的味道能为菜品增添丰富层次。” 接着，我们又挑选了鲜嫩的罗勒叶和紫皮洋葱。回到厨房，本尼夫人系上围裙，开始手把手教我制作番茄果酱。她耐心地指导我控制火候，不停地搅拌，适时加入适量的糖和香料。在她的悉心指导下，锅里的食材逐渐融合，散发出诱人的香气。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2When I got home with two containers of tomato jam, my mom was lying on the sofa, a wet cloth on her forehead. 当我带着两罐番茄果酱回到家时，妈妈正躺在沙发上，额头上敷着一块湿布。我心中一紧，轻手轻脚地走到沙发旁。我把一罐果酱放进冰箱，然后拿着另一罐来到妈妈身边，轻声说：“妈妈，尝尝这个，我和本尼夫人一起做的。” 妈妈缓缓坐起身，接过勺子，挖了一勺果酱放入口中。瞬间，她的眼睛亮了起来，惊喜地说：“太好吃了！宝贝，你真厉害。” 听到妈妈的夸赞，我心里满是欢喜。这一刻，我明白了，只要有人指导并加以练习，我也能做出美味的食物。我对即将到来的烹饪比赛充满了信心。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 The next day I was standing in Mrs. Benny's garden, surrounded by red tomatoes and rows of greens. Mrs. Benny was bustling around the vegetable beds, introducing the characteristics of each vegetable to me. She picked a plump tomato and put it in my palm, saying, "Tomatoes are great partners for many dishes. Their sweet - and - sour taste can add rich layers to the food." Then, we also selected fresh basil leaves and purple onions. Back in the kitchen, Mrs. Benny put on an apron and started teaching me how to make tomato jam step by step. She patiently guided me to control the heat, keep stirring, and add the right amount of sugar and spices at the right time. Under her careful guidance, the ingredients in the pot gradually blended together, giving off an attractive aroma. 14 14 范文呈现 When I got home with two containers of tomato jam, my mom was lying on the sofa, a wet cloth on her forehead. I was worried and walked quietly to the sofa. I put one container of jam in the fridge and then took the other to my mom. I said softly, "Mom, try this. I made it with Mrs. Benny." Mom slowly sat up, took a spoon, and put a spoonful of jam into her mouth. Immediately, her eyes lit up and she said in surprise, "It's delicious! Honey, you're amazing." Hearing my mom's praise, I felt extremely happy. At this moment, I realized that with guidance and practice, I could also make delicious food. I was full of confidence in the upcoming cooking competition. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The next day found me standing in Mrs. Benny's garden, where I was enveloped by clusters of red tomatoes and neat rows of verdant greens. Mrs. Benny, with enthusiasm, flitted among the vegetable beds, expounding on the unique traits of each vegetable. She plucked a plump tomato, placing it gently in my palm, and remarked, "Tomatoes, a versatile ingredient, can infuse dishes with a delightful sweet - and - sour flavor, adding depth and complexity." Subsequently, we gathered fresh basil leaves and purple onions. Returning to the kitchen, Mrs. Benny donned an apron and commenced guiding me, step - by - meticulous step, in the art of making tomato jam. She patiently instructed me on heat control, the importance of constant stirring, and the precise addition of sugar and spices. Under her watchful eye, the ingredients in the pot melded harmoniously, releasing an enticing aroma. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Upon my arrival home, bearing two containers of tomato jam, I found my mom reclining on the sofa, a damp cloth resting on her forehead. Concern welled up within me as I tiptoed towards the sofa. I deposited one container of jam in the fridge and then approached my mom with the other. Softly, I said, "Mom, give this a try. I made it alongside Mrs. Benny." Mom roused herself slowly, took a spoon, and sampled a spoonful of the jam. Instantly, her eyes sparkled with delight, and she exclaimed in amazement, "It's scrumptious! My dear, you've outdone yourself." Her words of praise filled me with a profound sense of joy. At that moment, I came to realize that with proper guidance and dedicated practice, I, too, could create culinary masterpieces. Thus, I was brimming with confidence for the impending cooking competition. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$