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高考英语读后续写语篇练习 老师助力，沉默女孩破茧成蝶 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was the beginning of a new year, and I was in the best class, where most of the chatterboxes were. Sadly, I was not one of them. Most of the time, my mouth was zipped very tightly and I hardly had any friends who appreciated my silence. There was a speech competition three months later. The selection was left to our strict English teacher, Mrs. Lee, whom I feared the most because she hardly ever smiled at us. Strangely though, on the day her decision was to be announced to us, she proclaimed,“Jane shall be the one who will join the competition.” There was silence in our usually-noisy class. “You have to write a speech today and show it to me tomorrow, Jane,” Mrs. Lee instructed, thereby breaking the ice. 4 4 续写原文 The next day, I showed my speech to Mrs. Lee. Reading it, she nodded in satisfaction and grinned at me for the first time. In the sweetest voice, she praised me, “Wonderful work! Why don’t you read it to the class?”Instantly, my throat went dry. Butterflies fluttered around in my stomach, crashing against my stomach walls and making me feel sick. Swallowing hard and taking a deep breath, I began reciting my essay with the worst pronunciation anyone had ever heard. However, I stumbled a little and panicked, unable to go on. The entire class burst into laughter as they shouted discouraging words, saying that they should have been in my place instead. Hot tears stung my eyes as I rushed back to my seat, weeping silently in embarrassment. 5 5 续写原文 After school, Mrs. Lee called me to her office, where she gave me a few pointers on how to overcome stage fright. Patiently, she went through the speech with me several times until my utterly bad pronunciation was “cured”. It was with much patience that Mrs. Lee worked through those three months with me, ensuring that my words were crisp and clear and teaching me how to put expressions into my sentences. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Finally, the day of my competition arrived. Paragraph 2： When the contest was over, the judges declared me the champion. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 新学年开始，性格沉默的 “我” 身处爱聊天的同学居多的班级，鲜少朋友。三个月后有场演讲比赛，严格的英语老师李老师选中 “我” 参赛。“我” 按要求写好演讲稿，在班上朗读时因发音差、紧张而失败，遭同学嘲笑。放学后李老师叫 “我” 去办公室，耐心指导 “我” 克服怯场、纠正发音。经过三个月努力，比赛的日子终于来临。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：Finally, the day of my competition arrived. 终于，比赛的日子来临了。我站在后台，心脏砰砰直跳，双腿也微微颤抖。看着前面选手精彩的表现，我既紧张又担心自己会搞砸。但一想到李老师那充满鼓励的眼神和耐心的指导，我便鼓起了勇气。轮到我上台了，我深吸一口气，缓缓走上台。刺眼的灯光让我短暂地有些眩晕，但我迅速调整状态。我清晰地吐出第一个字，声音虽然有些颤抖，但随着演讲的进行，我逐渐找回了自信。我按照李老师教的，注意语调的抑扬顿挫，将情感融入每一句话中，台下的观众也被我的演讲深深吸引。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： When the contest was over, the judges declared me the champion. 当比赛结束，评委宣布我是冠军时，我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。全场顿时响起了热烈的掌声，那掌声如雷般响亮。我激动得热泪盈眶，在人群中一眼就看到了李老师，她正用力地鼓掌，脸上洋溢着骄傲的笑容。我走上领奖台，接过奖杯，心中满是对李老师的感激。如果没有她的信任和悉心指导，我不可能取得这样的成绩。这个冠军不仅是对我演讲能力的肯定，更是我从沉默走向自信的标志。从那以后，同学们对我刮目相看，我也变得更加开朗和自信。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Finally, the day of my competition arrived. Standing backstage, I was extremely nervous. My heart was pounding violently, and my legs were shaking slightly. Watching the wonderful performances of the previous contestants, I felt both nervous and worried that I might mess up. However, the moment I thought of Mrs. Lee's encouraging eyes and patient guidance, I summoned up my courage. When it was my turn to go on stage, I took a deep breath and walked up slowly. The dazzling lights made me feel dizzy for a short moment, but I quickly pulled myself together. I clearly pronounced the first word. Although my voice was a bit trembling at first, as the speech went on, I gradually regained my confidence. Following Mrs. Lee's instructions, I paid attention to the ups and downs of my intonation and put emotions into every sentence. The audience was deeply attracted by my speech. 14 14 范文呈现 When the contest was over, the judges declared me the champion. I could hardly believe my ears. The whole audience burst into warm applause immediately. The applause was as loud as thunder. I was so excited that tears welled up in my eyes. Among the crowd, I spotted Mrs. Lee at once. She was clapping vigorously with a proud smile on her face. I walked onto the podium and received the trophy. My heart was filled with gratitude to Mrs. Lee. Without her trust and careful guidance, I couldn't have achieved such a result. This championship was not only an affirmation of my speaking ability but also a symbol of my transformation from being silent to becoming confident. Since then, my classmates looked at me with new eyes, and I became more cheerful and confident. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Finally, the day of my competition arrived. Standing backstage, I was a bundle of nerves, my heart pounding like a drum and my legs quivering ever so slightly. Witnessing the remarkable performances of the preceding contestants, a sense of nervousness and self - doubt washed over me. However, the mere thought of Mrs. Lee's encouraging gaze and patient tutelage steeled my resolve. As my turn to take the stage approached, I drew a deep breath and ascended slowly. The blinding lights momentarily disoriented me, yet I swiftly composed myself. I enunciated the first word clearly, my voice initially tremulous. But as the speech unfolded, confidence welled up within me. Adhering to Mrs. Lee's teachings, I modulated my intonation and infused each sentence with heartfelt emotion, captivating the audience's attention. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 When the contest was over, the judges declared me the champion. It was almost too good to be true. Instantly, the audience erupted into thunderous applause. Overwhelmed with excitement, tears streamed down my face. Amid the crowd, I immediately caught sight of Mrs. Lee, who was applauding enthusiastically, her face beaming with pride. I stepped onto the podium to receive the trophy, my heart brimming with gratitude towards Mrs. Lee. Had it not been for her unwavering trust and meticulous guidance, this achievement would have been unattainable. This championship not only validated my speaking prowess but also marked my transformation from a reticent individual to a confident one. From then on, my classmates regarded me in a new light, and I blossomed into a more cheerful and self - assured person. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$