2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：狗狗相伴，开启彼此新生之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 狗狗相伴，开启彼此新生之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Sadness hit me when I realized that 4 p. m. had gone unnoticed. Every day, a few minutes before the hour, my cute dog, Jake, would stare at me, pushing me to get his dinner. Now Jake is gone, and the disappearance of the comforting pace he brought to my days is like a minute-by-minute reminder of my loss. Friends comfort me by telling me I saved him. But a rescue organization did that. By the time I met him, he had already been saved, just not settled. The real story is that Jake saved me. Before Jake, I was living in a total mess, addicted madly to video games. I lost interest in any schoolwork and skipped classes a lot. Electronic devices were what I cared about most. My parents were deeply concerned about me but it’s tricky to handle a stubborn teenager, taking the wrong way. Shortly afterwards, I dropped out of school. 4 4 续写原文 It felt so good at the very beginning. I locked myself inside my bedroom, lost in violent games and losing track of time and meals. Fights with parents occurred frequently. I thought my life would be that forever, but one day, without any trace, those games couldn’t interest me anymore. I sank into a deep sorrow, feeling everything in my life was blank and meaningless. That lifelessness swallowed me whole. I was consumed with boredom and emptiness. I was separated from the world by a sheet of dirty glass. Me on inside, everything and everyone else on the other. I avoided socializing. I rarely reached out. I assumed the worst in people and figured they saw the worst in me. My parents were anxious and appointed a therapist for me. 5 5 续写原文 That’s when I first met Jake. I was waiting for a traffic light when I spotted an adoption event and then Jake, with his big eyes drooping (低垂), in which I saw his pain, just as he saw mine. I could tell his eyes glittered when approached. After living a whole irresponsible life, I decided to be responsible for something. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： I adopted him without hesitation, thus opening a new chapter of his life. Paragraph 2： Jake, too, witnessed great changes in me. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 作者因狗狗杰克的离去而悲伤，回忆起相识前自己沉迷游戏、辍学、生活混乱，父母忧心忡忡。偶遇领养活动时，作者看到杰克眼中的痛苦，决定收养它。从此，杰克开启新生活，同时作者也因它发生巨大改变，重新回归学校，积极社交，找回生活的意义。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：I adopted him without hesitation, thus opening a new chapter of his life. 我毫不犹豫地收养了它，就此开启了它生命的新篇章。我带着杰克回到家，一路上它乖乖地跟在我身边。到家后，我为它精心布置了一个温暖的小窝，还准备了各种美味的狗粮和有趣的玩具。每天清晨，阳光洒进房间，我会带着杰克去小区的花园散步，它总是兴奋地在草地上奔跑、玩耍。遇到其他狗狗时，一开始它还有些害怕，但在我的鼓励下，它渐渐变得勇敢起来，和小伙伴们愉快地嬉戏。傍晚，我们会一起坐在院子里，看着夕阳西下，杰克会靠在我的脚边，享受这宁静的时光。它的眼神不再是最初的哀伤，而是充满了对新生活的期待和快乐。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Jake, too, witnessed great changes in me. 杰克，也见证了我身上巨大的改变。有了杰克的陪伴，我不再沉迷于虚拟的游戏世界。我重新回到了学校，每天认真学习，积极参加各种活动。课堂上，我专注听讲，课后主动完成作业，成绩逐渐提高。我还结交了许多志同道合的朋友，我们经常一起带着狗狗出去玩。杰克就像我的社交名片，让我更容易与他人交流。我不再是那个孤僻、叛逆的少年，而是变得开朗、自信。我学会了承担责任，明白了生活的意义。杰克的存在，让我找到了前进的动力，我的生活变得充实而美好。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I adopted him without hesitation, thus opening a new chapter of his life. I brought Jake home, and during the journey, he followed me obediently. Once we arrived, I carefully arranged a warm little nest for him, along with a variety of delicious dog food and interesting toys. Every morning, as the sunlight streamed into the room, I would take Jake for a walk in the community garden. He would run and play on the grass excitedly. When meeting other dogs, at first, he was a bit scared. However, with my encouragement, he gradually became brave and played happily with his little companions. In the evening, we would sit in the yard together, watching the sunset. Jake would lean against my feet, enjoying the peaceful moment. His eyes, no longer sad as before, were filled with anticipation and joy for the new life. 14 14 范文呈现 Jake, too, witnessed great changes in me. With Jake's company, I no longer indulged in the virtual gaming world. I returned to school, where I studied hard every day and actively participated in various activities. In class, I listened attentively, and after class, I took the initiative to finish my homework, and my grades gradually improved. I also made many like - minded friends. We often went out with our dogs together. Jake was like my social card, making it easier for me to communicate with others. I was no longer the withdrawn and rebellious teenager. Instead, I became cheerful and confident. I learned to take responsibility and understood the meaning of life. Jake's presence gave me the motivation to move forward, and my life became fulfilling and wonderful. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I adopted him without hesitation, thus opening a new chapter of his life. Bringing Jake home, he obediently trailed me all the way. Upon arrival, I meticulously arranged a cozy little den for him, stocked with an array of scrumptious dog food and engaging toys. Each morning, as sunlight filtered into the room, I'd lead Jake to the community garden for a stroll. There, he'd frolic on the grass with unbridled excitement. Encountering other dogs initially made him timid, yet with my encouragement, he gradually overcame his fear and mingled merrily with his furry peers. In the evenings, we'd settle in the yard, watching the sunset as Jake nestled contentedly by my feet, his eyes now brimming with hope and joy for his new - found life, a far cry from the sorrow they once held. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Jake, too, witnessed great changes in me. With Jake by my side, I bid farewell to the virtual gaming abyss. I resumed my school life, where I immersed myself in studies daily and actively engaged in diverse activities. In class, I hung on every word, and post - class, I proactively completed assignments, resulting in a steady improvement in my grades. I also forged numerous like - minded friendships. We'd often embark on outings with our dogs. Jake, acting as my social catalyst, facilitated my interactions with others. No longer the aloof and rebellious youth, I blossomed into a cheerful and confident individual. I grasped the essence of responsibility and discovered the true meaning of life. Jake's presence was the driving force propelling me forward, transforming my life into a fulfilling and delightful journey. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$