2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：为家人，她选择了另一份奖品 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 为家人，她选择了另一份奖品 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The teacher had just announced that she was going to give a small gift to the boy or girl who answered the most questions correctly in the tests they were going to have that day. What it was, she wouldn’t say, except that it was very nice, very pretty, and very tasty. Of course that last word set everybody’s mouth watering. “Something tasty!” said Tadao. “I could use that right now.” “And so could I,” said Enrica, whose mother had been so busy that morning looking after her two little sisters and her baby brother that she had forgotten to make her lunch. 4 4 续写原文 Then the tests began, and how everyone worked! When the teacher asked the questions aloud, hands flashed up all over the room and waved about like trees in a high wind. When the answers had to be written, there was an unusual silence. It was lots of fun, and everyone had high hopes of winning the prize. Slowly the hours dragged by, and poor Enrica got hungrier and hungrier every minute, imagining what she would do with the prize if she won. At last the tests were all over, the answers all checked, and the final grades all totaled up. “Now,” said the teacher, “I’m ready to tell you the winner of the prize - Enrica, beating Renee by just one point.” 5 5 续写原文 At this moment the teacher opened her desk and took out a big chocolate egg, tied with a piece of wide blue ribbon (丝带). “How lovely!” cried everybody. “Now just a moment,” said the teacher. “I have a second prize. It’ s in this box.” Everyone looked and saw four little chocolate eggs. They looked good, too, but not as attractive as the big one in the blue ribbon. Enrica came forward to receive her prize. She had looked at both prizes and was thinking hard. “Please,” she stammered (结结巴巴地说), “would - would you mind if I had the second prize instead?” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： The teacher was so surprised that she hardly knew what to say. Paragraph 2： Enrica just ran home with the second prize box for her sisters and brother. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 老师宣布要给当天测试中答对题目最多的学生一份既好看又美味的小礼物。同学们都踊跃参与测试，埃丽卡因为妈妈忙碌没做午餐，一直饿着肚子，还在想象赢得奖品后的场景。测试结束后，埃丽卡以一分优势战胜蕾妮赢得奖品。但老师拿出一大一小两份奖品时，埃丽卡却出人意料地选择了小份的那份。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：The teacher was so surprised that she hardly knew what to say. 老师听到埃丽卡的请求后，十分惊讶，嘴巴微张，眼睛瞪大，愣在了原地。过了好几秒，她才缓过神来，温柔地看着埃丽卡问道：“亲爱的，能告诉老师为什么吗？毕竟大的巧克力蛋看起来更诱人呀。” 埃丽卡有些不好意思地低下头，小声说：“老师，我妈妈今天忙着照顾弟弟妹妹，忘记给我做午餐，我现在虽然很饿，但我更想把这些巧克力蛋带回去给弟弟妹妹们吃，他们肯定会很开心。” 老师听后，眼眶微微泛红，被埃丽卡的善良深深打动，她摸摸埃丽卡的头，说道：“你真是个好孩子，老师为你骄傲。” 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Enrica just ran home with the second prize box for her sisters and brother. 埃丽卡紧紧抱着装有四个小巧克力蛋的盒子，一路小跑回家。到家后，她气喘吁吁地推开家门，大声喊道：“弟弟妹妹们，快来看我带什么回来啦！” 正在客厅玩耍的弟弟妹妹们听到声音，像小炮弹一样冲向埃丽卡。她笑着打开盒子，弟弟妹妹们看到巧克力蛋，眼睛瞬间亮了起来，兴奋地欢呼着。埃丽卡给每个弟弟妹妹都分了一个，看着他们吃得津津有味，脸上露出满足的笑容。尽管自己没有吃到大巧克力蛋，但此刻，她心里却比吃了蜜还甜。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Enrica clutched the box with the four little chocolate eggs tightly and ran all the way home. As soon as she arrived, she pushed the door open breathlessly and shouted, "Sisters and brother, come and see what I've brought back!" Her siblings, who were playing in the living room, rushed towards her like little rockets. With a big smile, she opened the box. At the sight of the chocolate eggs, their eyes sparkled with excitement, and they cheered loudly. Enrica distributed one chocolate egg to each of them. Watching them enjoy the treats with relish, a contented smile spread across her face. Even though she didn't get the big chocolate egg, at this moment, she felt happier than ever before. 14 14 范文呈现 Weeks after my promise, I found it increasingly hard to continue my horrible work. Every time I approached the workbench filled with the materials for creating the female monster, a sense of revulsion welled up inside me. As I looked at those components, I could vividly imagine the two monsters causing chaos and destruction in the world. I was acutely aware that what I was doing was like playing with fire, but the fear of the monster's revenge on my family held me back. This conflicted feeling haunted me day and night. I paced restlessly in the workshop, constantly on the verge of giving up. However, the thought of my family's safety forced me to keep going, even though every step felt like I was walking on broken glass, filled with pain and hesitation. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The teacher was so surprised that she hardly knew what to say. After a moment of shocked stillness, she regained her composure and, looking tenderly at Enrica, inquired, "Dear, what prompts your choice? The large chocolate egg, after all, seems far more tempting." Blushing and lowering her gaze, Enrica replied softly, "Teacher, my mom, occupied with my little sisters and baby brother, overlooked making my lunch today. Despite my hunger, I'm eager to bring these chocolate eggs home for them. Their joy will be my reward." Deeply moved by Enrica's selflessness, the teacher's eyes welled up. Stroking Enrica's hair, she said, "You're an extraordinary girl, and I'm truly proud of you." 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Clutching the box of four little chocolate eggs, Enrica sprinted home. Upon arrival, breathlessly pushing open the door, she exclaimed, "Sisters and brother, come quickly! Look what I've got!" Her siblings, engrossed in play in the living room, dashed towards her. With a beaming smile, she opened the box. Instantly, their eyes lit up with excitement, and cheers filled the room. Enrica handed each of them a chocolate egg. As she watched them savor the treats, a sense of fulfillment washed over her. Although she didn't claim the larger chocolate egg, at that moment, her heart was filled with an indescribable happiness. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$