2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：怪物的威胁与 “我” 的艰难抉择 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 怪物的威胁与 “我” 的艰难抉择 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 After William was killed, I couldn’t get over my deep feelings of sadness and loss. Worse still, Justine, who was a loyal servant and attached to my family, was wrongly sentenced to death even if everybody in my family believed she was the last one to kill William. I knew it was the monster who killed my dear William but how could I prove that? I felt regretful and guilty because it was I myself who created such a monster but there seemed to be nothing I could do to stop him. I now felt that I was the true murderer. The endless horror and despair consumed me everyday whenever I thought of my creation being capable of killing anyone close to me. I wished I could kill him right away! I wanted to take revenge (复仇) for the death of William and Justine. 4 4 续写原文 Then came the chance when I climbed Montanvert one day. Reaching the top and enjoying the view, I suddenly saw a large man coming towards me at superhuman speed. Realizing it was the monster, I shouted with anger and horror, “Devil! How dare you come near me? Aren’t you afraid that I will take my revenge?” “My creator, you want to kill me? How dare you play with life like this?” 5 5 续写原文 Inflamed by burning hatred, I jumped at him but he easily moved out of the way. Then magically he used eloquence (口才) to persuade me into listening to him about all his sufferings. For a moment, sympathy took possession of me when he accounted how he was hated and condemned by humans just because of his frightening appearance, even if he always behaved nicely to them and tried to be kind and gentle. “I was good, but I am alone.” The monster concluded with a torturing look in his ugly face. “Promise you will create a companion for me. Humans will have nothing to do with me, but a female as deformed and horrible as myself would not refuse me.” I refused his request without hesitation. How could I create another monster after so many tragedies (悲剧)? 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： He then threatened that if I didn’t agree, he would destroy me and my family. Paragraph 2： Weeks after my promise, I found it increasingly hard to continue my horrible work. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 威廉被杀后，“我” 深陷悲痛与自责，因是 “我” 创造的怪物行凶，而忠诚的贾斯汀还被误判死刑。一天在蒙唐韦尔山顶，“我” 偶遇怪物，欲复仇却被其说服听其苦难。怪物请求 “我” 为它造个伴侣，遭拒后威胁 “我” 和家人，“我” 无奈答应。之后，“我” 越发觉得继续这可怕工作困难重重，内心满是挣扎与恐惧，不知是否该信守承诺。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：He then threatened that if I didn’t agree, he would destroy me and my family. 怪物威胁若 “我” 不答应为它创造伴侣，便会对 “我” 和家人下手。“我” 心中满是恐惧与愤怒，可又实在担心家人的安危。在怪物的步步紧逼下，“我” 脑海中不断浮现家人遭遇不幸的画面，最终在极度的痛苦与无奈中，“我” 颤抖着答应了它的要求。怪物见状，发出一阵令人毛骨悚然的笑声，随后消失在黑暗之中。“我” 瘫倒在地，心中满是对未来的担忧与迷茫，不知这一决定将会带来怎样更可怕的后果。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Weeks after my promise, I found it increasingly hard to continue my horrible work. 答应怪物之后的几周，“我” 每拿起一件制作怪物的工具，手都会止不住地颤抖。每当夜深人静，“我” 望着那些材料，仿佛看到两个怪物在世间肆虐，给人类带来无尽灾难。“我” 深知创造另一个怪物是在玩火，可又害怕违背承诺会让家人陷入绝境。这种矛盾的心理日夜折磨着 “我”，让 “我” 食不知味，夜不能寐。“我” 在工作室里徘徊，无数次想要停下手中的工作，但一想到怪物的威胁，又只能无奈地继续，内心的痛苦与挣扎愈发强烈。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 He then threatened that if I didn’t agree, he would destroy me and my family. Facing his menacing words, I was overwhelmed with a mix of fear and rage. My heart pounded violently in my chest as I stared at the monster, whose eyes glinted with a terrifying determination. Thoughts of my family being harmed flashed through my mind like a nightmare. I knew I couldn't risk their lives. With a heavy heart and a trembling voice, I finally gave in to his demand. The monster, upon hearing my promise, let out a sinister laugh that echoed through the desolate mountaintop. Then, he vanished into the shadows, leaving me alone with my despair. I stood there, frozen, realizing that I had just made a deal with the devil, and the future seemed filled with even more uncertainty and dread. 14 14 范文呈现 Weeks after my promise, I found it increasingly hard to continue my horrible work. Every time I approached the workbench filled with the materials for creating the female monster, a sense of revulsion welled up inside me. As I looked at those components, I could vividly imagine the two monsters causing chaos and destruction in the world. I was acutely aware that what I was doing was like playing with fire, but the fear of the monster's revenge on my family held me back. This conflicted feeling haunted me day and night. I paced restlessly in the workshop, constantly on the verge of giving up. However, the thought of my family's safety forced me to keep going, even though every step felt like I was walking on broken glass, filled with pain and hesitation. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 He then threatened that if I didn’t agree, he would destroy me and my family. Struck by his menacing words, fear and rage surged within me. As I stared at the monster, whose eyes glinted with terrifying determination, thoughts of my family in peril flashed through my mind like a haunting nightmare. Unable to risk their lives, I finally, with a heavy heart and trembling voice, gave in to his demand. The monster, upon hearing my promise, let out a sinister laugh echoing through the desolate mountaintop. Then, into the shadows he vanished, leaving me alone in despair, realizing I'd made a deal with the devil and the future loomed with even more uncertainty. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Weeks after my promise, continuing my horrible work became increasingly difficult. Every time I approached the workbench filled with materials for the female monster, a sense of revulsion welled up. Looking at those components, I could vividly imagine the two monsters bringing chaos and destruction. Aware that I was playing with fire, yet held back by the fear of the monster's revenge on my family, this conflicted feeling haunted me day and night. I paced restlessly in the workshop, constantly on the verge of giving up. But it was the thought of my family's safety that forced me to keep going, every step filled with pain and hesitation. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$