2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：哈利战风记：从恐惧到勇敢的蜕变 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 哈利战风记：从恐惧到勇敢的蜕变 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Harry, the Wind is Blowing Harry was afraid of the wind. It whistled under his door. It followed Harry home from the school bus. It blew off his hat. At night, it made the trees blowing in the woods near his house. “How can anyone be afraid of the wind? ”Someone laughed at Harry. Harry's friend Antony didn't make fun of Harry. “You'll get over it, Harry, ”he said. Sometimes that made Harry feel better. But not for long. One day Antony came to Harry’s house to play. “Look at my glider(滑翔机), ”said Antony. “It does tricks and loop-de-loops when I fly it outside in the wind. ”“Nice, ”said Harry. They played cars. They played robots. They drew pictures. Clouds rolled in. The tree in front of Harry's house swayed. A garbage can fell clattered down the street. "Harry, ”said Antony, “the wind is blowing. I don't want to stay inside. I want to fly my glider. ” 4 4 续写原文 Harry was silent. “Want to come? ”asked Antony. "No, thanks, ”answered Harry. Harry stayed inside and played with his construction set. He pictured launching the glider with Antony. But when he imagined the wind blowing against his face, he was down. He felt sad to be in his room while everyone else was outside. Harry got a big piece of paper and drew a kite. He cut it out and colored it. He pretended the kite was flying against the clouds. But after a while, he got tired of pretending. Outside the window Antony's glider was making circles. It was flying upside down. Harry sighed. He was tired of feeling afraid. Suddenly he wanted to stamp his feet. He wanted to tell out loud. He wanted to yell, “IAM NOT AFRAID!!”So he tried it. Harry was surprised. It felt good to yell. Then Harry took his kite and went outside. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： The wind was blowing, but he marched forward and pulled himself into the branches of the tree in front of his house. Paragraph 2： The wind blew harder, then Harry let his kite go. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 哈利一直害怕风，常被人嘲笑，但朋友安东尼给予鼓励。一天安东尼来玩，风大时他想出去放滑翔机，哈利拒绝并留在屋内玩。之后哈利画风筝假装放飞，可很快厌倦。看到安东尼的滑翔机在空中精彩表现，哈利受刺激，决定克服恐惧。他先是爬上家门前树，最后在风更大时放飞风筝，成功战胜恐惧，还感受到风的美好，实现自我突破。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： The wind was blowing, but he marched forward and pulled himself into the branches of the tree in front of his house. 风在呼啸，但哈利鼓起勇气向前，奋力爬上家门前树的树枝。他紧紧抱住树枝，双腿微微颤抖，眼睛紧张地盯着周围。风不断吹过，树枝摇晃得厉害，他感觉自己随时可能掉下去。但他想起安东尼在外面快乐地玩滑翔机，心中涌起一股不服输的劲儿。他小心翼翼地调整姿势，往更高处爬去。这时，一片树叶被风吹到他脸上，他吓了一跳，但很快镇定下来。他看到安东尼在树下向他招手，给他加油，这让他更有动力继续前进。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2： The wind blew harder, then Harry let his kite go. 风刮得更猛了，哈利深吸一口气，然后放开了手中的风筝。风筝瞬间被风卷上高空，在空中快速上升、盘旋。哈利仰头看着风筝，眼睛睁得大大的，充满了惊喜。他的心跳得很快，但这次是因为兴奋。他开始在树下奔跑起来，手中的风筝线不断放出。随着风筝越飞越高，他感觉自己的恐惧也被抛到了九霄云外。他大喊着：“我做到了！” 脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，在风中享受着这份胜利的喜悦。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 The wind blew harder, then Harry let his kite go. The kite was immediately swept up into the sky by the wind, rising and circling rapidly. Harry looked up at the kite with his eyes wide open, full of surprise. His heart was beating fast, but this time it was because of excitement. He started running under the tree, letting out the kite string in his hand. As the kite flew higher and higher, he felt his fear being blown away. He shouted, "I did it!" with a big smile on his face, enjoying the joy of victory in the wind. 13 13 范文呈现 I could see the pain in his eyes, and despite my disappointment, I couldn't help but feel empathy for my friend. I knew he wasn't a bad person at heart; he was just pushed to the edge by life's hardships. Taking a deep breath, I told him that making mistakes was not the end, but the important thing was to face them bravely and correct them. I encouraged him to confess to the teacher with me and seek leniency. After a moment of hesitation, Colin nodded. We went to the teacher and explained the situation sincerely. The teacher, after a stern reprimand, also showed understanding for Colin's family. With the teacher's help, Colin made amends for his mistake by doing volunteer work at school and gradually managed to move on from this dark period. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 The wind was howling, yet Harry summoned his courage and advanced resolutely, hauling himself onto the branches of the tree before his house. Clutching the branches tightly, his legs quivered slightly. His gaze was fixed apprehensively on the surroundings. With the wind lashing ceaselessly, the branches swayed wildly, making him feel as if he might plunge at any instant. However, when the thought of Antony relishing the glider flight outside flashed through his mind, a surge of determination welled up within him. Meticulously adjusting his stance, he clambered higher. Suddenly, a leaf was blown onto his face, startling him momentarily, but he swiftly regained his composure. Spotting Antony waving and cheering from beneath the tree spurred him on further. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The wind intensified, and then Harry released his kite. Instantaneously, the kite was whisked aloft by the wind, ascending and swirling rapidly. Harry's eyes widened in astonishment as he gazed skyward at the kite. His heart pounded furiously, yet this time it was with excitement. He commenced running beneath the tree, paying out the kite string in his hand. As the kite soared ever higher, he sensed his fear being dissipated by the wind. "I did it!" he exclaimed, his face beaming with a broad smile, savoring the triumph in the wind's embrace. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$