2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：三轮车刮豪车，老人与陌生人的故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 三轮车刮豪车，老人与陌生人的故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 In a busy city, an old man rode his tricycle（三轮脚踏车） along the street. His face was full of the lines of time. His hands held the handlebars with care. He was returning home from the market, and his tricycle was filled with fresh produce. When he was wondering how much he could sell the produce for, he got distracted（思想不集中的） and the tricycle hit a car which was parked by the roadside. The old man's heart sank as he surveyed the long scratch（划痕） damaging the new paintwork of the expensive car. He stood there with worry and regret on his face. He knew the value of such a car and the potential cost of the damage. "I can't afford this," he whispered to himself sadly. Just then, a stranger approached the old man. The stranger, dressed in a sharp suit, looked at the scene and immediately realized the situation. "The paintwork is damaged. Can you afford to pay for the damage?" he asked gently. The old man shook his head and looked down. "No, I can't," he replied. 4 4 续写原文 The stranger looked around and spoke in a low tone. "If you can't afford it, why don't you leave? Do you wait for the owner to come?" It was more of a suggestion than a question. A small smile appeared on the stranger's mouth. The old man hesitated, torn between his sense of responsibility and the practicality of the stranger's advice. After a moment of internal struggle, he made his decision. He pulled an old plastic bag out of his pocket. He put all the money inside, which was less than twenty dollars, under the wiper（雨刷） of the car. Then, he felt the scratch on the car with his hands. With one last look at the damaged car, he began to push his tricycle away, glancing back every few steps. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： After the old man went away, the stranger took out a car key. Paragraph 2： The stranger pulled over and got out of the car. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 在繁华都市，一位老人骑三轮车从市场满载而归，途中不慎刮到路边一辆昂贵的汽车。老人看着车上的划痕，深知赔不起，满心忧虑。这时，一位身着西装的陌生人出现，暗示老人离开。老人内心挣扎后，选择留下仅有的不到二十美元在雨刷下，然后推车离开。之后，陌生人掏出车钥匙，原来他就是车主，他开车跟上老人，最终归还老人的钱，称赞老人的诚实，认为其诚信比修车费用更珍贵。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：After the old man went away, the stranger took out a car key. 老人离开后，陌生人掏出车钥匙，原来他竟是车主。他发动车子，缓缓跟上老人。一路上，他看着老人费力地推着三轮车，背影满是沧桑与无奈。陌生人心中思绪万千，他在想老人以卖农产品为生，这点钱对自己修车来说微不足道，可对老人或许是几天的生活费。他决定追上老人，给老人一个交代。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2： The stranger pulled over and got out of the car. 陌生人追上老人后，将车停在路边，快步走到老人身边。老人转身，看到是刚刚的陌生人，眼中满是疑惑与不安。陌生人微笑着，把装钱的塑料袋递给老人，说道：“老人家，我刚刚只是想看看你的为人，你的诚实让我很感动，这钱你拿回去，车的事就别放在心上了。” 老人愣住，片刻后，泪水夺眶而出，紧紧握住陌生人的手，不停地说着感谢的话。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 After the old man went away, the stranger took out a car key. It suddenly dawned on the reader that he was actually the owner of the car. He started the car and drove slowly, following the old man. As he watched the old man pushing the tricycle with great difficulty, a sense of pity welled up in his heart. He thought about the old man's hard - working life, making a living by selling fresh produce. The money the old man left was far from enough to cover the cost of repairing the car, but it might mean a lot to the old man. He decided that he couldn't just let the old man go like this and needed to catch up with him. 13 13 范文呈现 The stranger pulled over and got out of the car. He quickly walked towards the old man. When the old man turned around and saw the stranger, there was a look of surprise and unease in his eyes. The stranger smiled gently and handed the plastic bag with the money back to the old man. "Old man," he said, "I just wanted to test your honesty. Your integrity is really precious. I don't care about the scratch on the car. You can keep your money." The old man was stunned. After a while, tears welled up in his eyes. He held the stranger's hands tightly, expressing his gratitude repeatedly. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 After the old man went away, the stranger took out a car key, which revealed that he was the owner of the car. Starting the car, he drove slowly, following the old man, whose back was bent under the weight of the tricycle. Watching the old man struggling to push the vehicle, a feeling of pity welled up in the stranger's heart. Considering the old man's hard - earned money from selling fresh produce, he realized that the money left was far from enough for the car repair but might be a great deal to the old man. Thus, he made up his mind to catch up with the old man. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The stranger pulled over and got out of the car. Walking quickly towards the old man, he saw surprise and unease in the old man's eyes as he turned around. With a gentle smile, the stranger handed the plastic bag with the money back to the old man, saying, "Old man, what I cared about was your honesty. It is your integrity that is really precious, not the scratch on the car. Keep your money." Stunned at first, the old man was soon in tears. Holding the stranger's hands tightly, he expressed his gratitude over and over again. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$