2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：警察为小男孩拯救生日派对 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 警察为小男孩拯救生日派对 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on. After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons, Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room? He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it. 4 4 续写原文 Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That’s when he decided to save the day—he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. “We like to be involved in our community. It’s not just about enforcing (执行) the law. We like to be there in the good times as well,” he explained to Rachel. On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn’t know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： There, a party was waiting for him. Paragraph 2： After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 小时候，生日派对对孩子意义重大。艾伦・米勒因喜爱警察故事，七岁生日派对选警察主题，满心期待朋友来参加，还渴望得到一辆模型警车。然而，朋友们因各种原因无法赴约，母亲瑞秋纠结是否取消派对。得知消息的警察弗兰克・史密斯决定召集当地警察拯救派对。派对当天，史密斯警官开警车接艾伦母子，带他们到市政厅会议室，那里一场为艾伦准备的惊喜派对正等待着他。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：There, a party was waiting for him. 当艾伦走进房间，他瞬间被眼前的景象震撼。五彩斑斓的气球从天花板垂落，墙上贴满了警察主题的海报，正中央摆放着一个巨大的、精心制作的警察造型蛋糕，蛋糕上的警灯闪烁着微光。警察们穿着整齐的制服，微笑着鼓掌欢迎他。接着，警察们带着艾伦玩起了有趣的游戏，比如模拟追捕小偷的游戏，艾伦扮演英勇的警察，在房间里穿梭，玩得不亦乐乎。大家还一起唱歌跳舞，艾伦完全沉浸在欢乐的氛围中，之前因朋友缺席的失落早已烟消云散。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2： After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. 在尽情享受蛋糕后，史密斯警官神秘地拿出一个礼物袋。艾伦好奇地看着他，眼中满是期待。史密斯警官笑着说：“艾伦，这个礼物是大家对你的祝福。” 艾伦迫不及待地打开袋子，当看到梦寐以求的模型警车时，他激动得跳了起来。他紧紧抱住模型警车，连声道谢。随后，警察们和艾伦一起合影留念，记录下这美好的时刻。这个特别的生日派对，不仅让艾伦度过了难忘的一天，更在他心中种下了一颗更加坚定的梦想种子，让他对未来成为警察充满了向往。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 When Allen entered the room, he was immediately stunned by what he saw. There were colorful balloons hanging from the ceiling, and police - themed posters were pasted all over the walls. In the center of the room stood a huge, exquisitely - made police - shaped cake with the lights on it twinkling slightly. The policemen, dressed in neat uniforms, were smiling and clapping to welcome him. Then, the policemen led Allen to play some interesting games. For example, they played a game of simulating catching a thief. Allen, acting as a brave police officer, ran around the room, having a great time. Everyone also sang and danced together. Allen was completely immersed in the joyous atmosphere, and the disappointment caused by his friends' absence had long since disappeared. 13 13 范文呈现 After they had enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag mysteriously. Allen looked at him curiously with full of anticipation in his eyes. Officer Smith smiled and said, "Allen, this gift is the blessing from all of us." Allen couldn't wait to open the bag. When he saw the model police car he had been dreaming of, he jumped up excitedly. He hugged the model police car tightly and thanked everyone repeatedly. Subsequently, the policemen took pictures with Allen to record this wonderful moment. This special birthday party not only made Allen have an unforgettable day, but also planted a more determined dream seed in his heart, making him look forward to becoming a police officer in the future with great eagerness. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 There, a party was waiting for him. As Allen stepped into the room, what greeted his eyes was a scene straight out of his dreams. Colorful balloons, like floating rainbows, hung from the ceiling, while police - themed posters adorned the walls, creating an exciting atmosphere. In the very center stood a magnificent police - shaped cake, its lights twinkling invitingly. The policemen, in their immaculate uniforms, wore warm smiles and welcomed Allen with thunderous applause. They then engaged Allen in a series of thrilling games. Take the "catch - the - thief" game for instance, where Allen, as a valiant police officer, dashed around the room, his laughter ringing out. All were singing and dancing, with Allen being completely lost in this sea of joy, the previous disappointment over his friends' absence long forgotten. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. With a mysterious smile, Officer Smith presented the bag to Allen, who was looking at him with eyes brimming with curiosity. "This is a token of our love for you, Allen," said Officer Smith. Eagerly, Allen tore open the bag. The moment he laid eyes on the long - awaited model police car, he let out an excited shriek. Clutching the car tightly, he showered everyone with heartfelt thanks. Then, came the moment of taking pictures. The policemen and Allen grouped together, freezing this beautiful moment in time. This extraordinary birthday party not only etched an indelible mark in Allen's memory but also fortified his dream of becoming a police officer, inspiring him to strive for it with unwavering determination. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$