Unit 5 Writing课件-2024-2025学年沪教（2024）英语七年级上册

Unit 5 Off to space 汇报人：Sophie 第5课时Writing 单元话题写作 话题概述 本单元的写作话题是“太空”。该话题涉及的写作主题相对广泛，如“太空旅行计划”“对太空生活的畅想”“航天梦”等。 需要注意的是，在写此类作文时，文章的主要时态为一般将来时，可多用 will do 和 be going to do结构来表示将来。 素材积累：I. 单词运用 背一背 1. space n. 太空 2. journey n. 旅程 3. nervous adj. 紧张的 4. explore v. 探索 5. astronaut n. 宇航员 6. visit v. 参观；拜访 7. weightless adj. 失重的 8. rocket n. 火箭 9. return v. 返回 10. leave v. 离开 11. gravity n. 重力；地球引力 12. powerful adj. 强大的 练一练 1. My brother wants to be a(n) when he grows up. 2. I was a little bit when I got into the spaceship. 3. He home very late last night because he missed the last bus. 4. Why do you want to home to live by yourself? 5. Jerry usually his grandparents at the weekend. 6. Do you know who was the first Chinese to travel into ? astronaut nervous returned leave visits space 素材积累：II. 短语运用 背一背 1. land on 着陆于……;降落在…… 2. come true 实现 3. make sure 保证；确保 4. be excited about 对……感到兴奋 5. be able to 能；能够 6. be ready for 为……做好准备 7. would like to 愿意；想要 8. be proud of 为……感到自豪 练一练 1. Please that you arrive at the school gate on time. 2. I the final exam. I believe I can do it well. 3. A UFO the grassland last night. 4.We will travel to the Moon one day. make sure am ready for landed on be able to 素材积累：III. 佳句储备 背一背 1. Spaceships make it possible for people to travel to the Moon. 2. Whenever I look up at the sky, I dream of travelling into space. 3. I will do sports as often as possible because a strong and healthy body is of great importance for an astronaut. 4. Looking at the Earth from the spaceship, I am amazed at the beauty of the Earth. 5. I will study hard and make contributions to our country's space industry. 译一译 1. 。 2. 。 3. 。 4. 。 5. 。 航天飞船使人类去月球旅行成为可能 每当我抬头看天空的时候，我都梦想去太空旅行 我将尽可能经常做运动，因为一个强壮健康的身体对航天员来说是非常重要的 从航天飞船上俯瞰地球，我被地球的美丽所震撼 我将努力学习，为我们国家的航天事业做贡献 佳作赏析 满分范文 Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. As we know, in recent years, China has made great progress in its space industry. We Chinese are all proud of it!① Since I was a child, I have been dreaming of becoming an astronaut, because flying to the Moon is so cool.② I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will try my best to③ achieve it. I am going to study hard③ and get more knowledge about space. What's more, I plan to take③ some exercise every day to get a strong body. 满分解密 ①用从句As we know及短语make great progress in 和 be proud of交代了中国在航天工业方面的发展，为下文作者介绍自己的太空梦提供了背景。 ②用since引导的时间状语从句、because引导的原因状语从句和短语dream of do- ing something交代了作者的太空梦及其原因。长句的准确运用展现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ③用短语 try one’s best to do、study hard 和plan to do 写出作者为了实现太空梦做出的努力，简短有力。 佳作赏析 满分范文 As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”④ I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day.⑤ Thanks for your listening! 满分解密 ④谚语的使用增强了文章的可读性和说服力，同时也体现出作者平时的语言积累。 ⑤使用that引导的宾语从句、as long as 引导的条件状语从句和短语keep on do- ing、come true表达作者的决心，由此可见作者对各种从句和短语的熟练掌握。 参考译文 大家早上好。我很高兴站在这里发表演讲。正如我们所知，近年来，中国在航天工业方面取得了巨大的进步。我们中国人都为此感到骄傲! 从我还是个孩子的时候起，我就一直梦想着成为一名航天员，因为飞往月球很酷。我知道成为一名航天员不容易，但我会尽我最大的努力去实现它。我会努力学习，获取更多关于太空的知识。另外，我打算每天做一些运动来拥有一个强壮的身体。 俗话说：“有志者，事竟成。” 我坚信只要我不断努力，总有一天我的梦想会实现。 感谢你们的倾听！ 写作运用 I. 词语操练(背诵“佳作赏析”的范文并填空) Good morning, everyone. I'm glad to stand here to give a speech. As we know, in recent years, China has 1. ____ 2. ____ 3. 4. its space industry. We Chinese 5.___ all 16. ______ 7. it! Since I was a child, I have been 8. 9. 10. an astronaut, because 11. 12. the Moon is so cool. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will try my best to achieve it. I am going to 13. 14. and get more knowledge about space. What’s more, I 15. 16. take some exercise every day to get a strong body. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” I strongly believe that as long as I 17. 18. 19. , my dream will come true one day. Thanks for your listening! make great progress in are proud of dreaming of becoming flying to study hard plan to keep on trying 写作运用 Ⅱ. 句型仿写 1. As we know, in recent years, China has made great progress in its space industry. 正如我们所知，近年来，中国在航天工业方面取得了巨大的进步。 仿写1 正如我们所知，人类在医学上取得了巨大的进步。 . 仿写2 正如我们所知，中国在科学和技术方面都取得了巨大的进步。 . As we know, man has made great progress in medicine As we know, China has made great progress in both science and technology 写作运用 Ⅱ. 句型仿写 2. I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day.我坚信，只要我不断努力，总有一天我的梦想会实现。 仿写1只要天气好，我们就去公园。 . 仿写2只要你对英语感兴趣，你就能很快学会。 . As long as the weather is fine, we’ll go to the park As long as you are interested in English, you can learn it quickly 写作运用 Ⅲ. 段落操练，将下列句子排成一篇文理通顺的短文 1. I’d like to travel to the Moon. 2. I will also walk on the Moon. 3. But it won't be so easy for me to eat either. 4. What's more, I will try to eat something on the Moon. 5. But I think it'll be difficult for me to walk quickly on the Moon. 6. Anyway, I think the travel to the Moon will be great fun! 7. If I get to the Moon, I'll talk with aliens(外星人)happily and invite them to the Earth. 排序后的正确顺序是: ____________ 1-7-2-5-4-3-6 写作运用 IV. 短文改错 文中共有5处语言错误。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在横线上写出加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线上写出修改后的词。 Liu Yang, the first Chinese woman astronaut, were born in Zhengzhou, Henan Province in October 1978. At the age of 19, she became a woman pilot. In 2010, she became China's first woman astronaut. After about two year of hard training, she went up into space with two man astronauts. On June 5th, 2022, she went into space again in Shenzhou-14 spaceship. She is hard-working and determined. She is ∧ good example for us students. I have learnt a lot of from her and I hope I can be an astronaut like her in the future. 1. __________ 2. __________ 3. __________ 4. __________ 5. __________ was years men a 写作运用 V. 学以致用 假如航天员景海鹏是你的偶像，你的梦想也是当一名航天员，为国家的航空航天事业做贡献。请你以“My Space Dream”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲讲你为成为一名航天员做了哪些努力。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; 2. 词数60左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数。 参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；make contributions to做贡献 My Space Dream Astronaut Jing Haipeng is my idol. _______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 My Space Dream Astronaut Jing Haipeng is my idol. I want to be an astronaut like him one day. In order to achieve my dream, I have done a lot to prepare myself to be a great astronaut. I often visit space museums in my spare time. And I keep following the news about the spaceships and the space station through TV or the Internet. Besides, I also read some books and magazines about the space. Last but not least, I play sports every day to keep fit and study hard at science. I believe that with my hard work, my dream will come true one day and I can make contributions to the aerospace industry. The End Sophie $$