2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：小城男孩的城市适应与交友之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 小城男孩的城市适应与交友之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Sammy was a happy little boy who loved to play outside and explore the woods behind his house. He spent most of his time with his family, especially with his older sister Abby. They would run around in the fields together, climb trees, and catch insects. One day, Sammy’s parents sat him down for an important talk. They told him that they were moving to the big city so that they could be closer to their jobs. At first, Sammy didn’t understand what that meant or how it would change things for him. But soon enough, he realized that everything was going to be different. He wouldn’t have as much space to run around in like he did in their small town. And worst of all—he’d have to start a new school! 4 4 续写原文 Sammy had never been very good at making friends quickly—it always took some time before people warmed up to him and vice versa (反之亦然). So when he thought about starting over again somewhere new, it made him feel pretty anxious. He tried talking to Abby about it but she seemed excited about the move—she jumped at the idea of exploring new places and meeting new people! But Sammy couldn’t shake off this feeling: what if nobody liked him? what if everyone else already had friends? 5 5 续写原文 As they packed up their belongings into boxes ready for their journey ahead, Sammy felt sad saying goodbye to everything familiar: the old oak tree by the riverbank which he used to sit on during summer afternoons; the bakery shop owner who always gave them free cookies on Saturdays. It was hard to let go of all those memories they shared together. Sammy’s family finally lived in the big city. Everything seemed so different from what he was used to in their small town. The buildings were taller, the streets were busier, and there were people everywhere. Sammy was feeling really nervous about starting school. He had never been to a big school before, and he didn’t know anyone there. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Then, his sister Abby noticed how worried he was. Paragraph 2： One day, with Abby sick, Sammy decided to try making friends by himself. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 喜欢在户外玩耍的小男孩萨米，原本和家人在小镇过着快乐的生活。但父母因工作原因决定搬到大城市，这让萨米感到焦虑，因为他不擅长快速结交新朋友，且不舍小镇的一切。搬到城市后，一切都很陌生，萨米对即将开始的新学校生活充满担忧，而姐姐艾比却对搬家一事充满期待 。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Then, his sister Abby noticed how worried he was. 这时，姐姐艾比注意到他有多焦虑。艾比深知萨米的担忧并非毫无道理，她温柔地坐在萨米身旁，将手臂轻轻搭在他的肩上，试图给予他力量与安慰。艾比轻声说道：“萨米，我明白这对你来说很可怕，可大城市有着数不清的精彩。新学校可能会有各种奇妙的社团和有趣的活动，你一定会喜欢。交朋友也并非你想象中那么困难。你心地善良、真诚待人，只要勇敢迈出第一步，大家肯定会喜欢你的。” 艾比还分享了自己之前的经历，告诉他自己在新环境中是如何结识朋友的。在艾比的耐心开导下，萨米渐渐平复了心情，心中燃起一丝对未来的期待。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：One day, with Abby sick, Sammy decided to try making friends by himself. 有一天，艾比生病了。萨米决定自己尝试去结交朋友。他独自来到学校操场，看到一群同学正在玩球。萨米深吸一口气，鼓起勇气走上前去。起初，他有些紧张，说话都结结巴巴，但同学们都很友善，热情地邀请他一起玩。在游戏过程中，萨米展现出自己的开朗与机智，大家都被他的幽默逗得哈哈大笑。游戏结束后，几个同学主动和萨米交换联系方式，还约好下次一起玩。萨米兴奋不已，他第一次感受到主动交友带来的快乐。回到家，萨米迫不及待地把这个好消息告诉了艾比，艾比为他感到骄傲。从此，萨米逐渐适应了城市生活，也拥有了属于自己的朋友圈 。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Then, his sister Abby noticed how worried he was. Abby, well - aware of Sammy's concerns, sat beside him tenderly and put her arm around his shoulders, trying to offer him strength and comfort. "Sammy, I understand this is terrifying for you, but the big city has countless wonderful things. The new school might have all kinds of amazing clubs and interesting activities that you'll surely love. And making friends isn't as difficult as you think. You're kind - hearted and sincere. As long as you bravely take the first step, people will definitely like you," Abby said softly. She also shared her own experiences, telling him how she made friends in new environments. Under Abby's patient guidance, Sammy gradually calmed down, and a glimmer of hope for the future ignited in his heart. 14 14 范文呈现 One day, with Abby sick, Sammy decided to try making friends by himself. He went to the school playground alone and saw a group of classmates playing ball. Taking a deep breath, Sammy summoned up his courage and walked forward. At first, he was so nervous that he stuttered when speaking, but the classmates were very friendly and warmly invited him to play with them. During the game, Sammy showed his cheerfulness and quick - wittedness. Everyone was amused by his humor. After the game, several classmates took the initiative to exchange contact information with Sammy and made an appointment to play together next time. Sammy was overjoyed. He felt the happiness of making friends on his own for the first time. When he got home, Sammy couldn't wait to tell Abby the good news. Abby was proud of him. Since then, Sammy gradually adapted to city life and had his own circle of friends. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Then, Abby, ever - perceptive, noticed the deep - seated anxiety that had taken hold of Sammy. Recognizing the gravity of his concerns, she settled down beside him, her arm encircling his shoulders in a gesture of comfort and solidarity. "Sammy," she began, her voice soft yet filled with conviction, "I understand that this transition seems daunting, but the city holds a world of opportunities. The new school could be a treasure trove of extraordinary clubs and engaging activities tailored to your interests. And making friends? It's not the insurmountable task you envision. Your kindness and sincerity are your greatest assets. With a little courage and a step forward, you'll find that people are drawn to you." Abby then delved into her own anecdotes of forging connections in unfamiliar settings, painting a vivid picture of hope and possibility. As she spoke, Sammy felt a sense of calm wash over him, and a spark of anticipation for the future ignited within his heart. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 One day, with Abby laid up in bed due to illness, Sammy resolved to take the plunge and initiate his own journey of friendship - building. He made his way to the school playground, his heart pounding with a mix of trepidation and determination. Spotting a group of classmates engrossed in a game of ball, he took a deep breath and summoned the courage to approach. Initially, his nerves got the better of him, causing his words to stumble, but the warmth and openness of his peers were instantaneous. They welcomed him into the game with open arms. During the course of play, Sammy's natural charm and quick - thinking shone through, eliciting peals of laughter from the group. Post - game, several classmates eagerly exchanged contact details with him, arranging future meet - ups. Sammy was elated, experiencing the thrill of self - initiated friendship for the first time. Returning home, he couldn't contain his excitement, rushing to share the news with Abby. Her eyes sparkled with pride as she witnessed Sammy's new - found confidence and the beginnings of his integration into his new community. From that day forward, Sammy's journey of adaptation to city life was well - on its way, and a vibrant circle of friends began to form around him. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$