2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：雪中邂逅：从摄影交流到爱心传递 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 雪中邂逅：从摄影交流到爱心传递 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was my first winter in New York, and the city was covered in a thick blanket of snow. I decided to embrace the extremely cold weather by visiting Central Park to see it transformed by the winter’s touch. As I walked through the park, the fresh snow crunched under my boots, which sounded like a piece of cheerful music, and I could see families enjoying skiing down the small hills, full of fun and laughter. I felt a mixture of excitement and homesickness, missing my hometown’s warmer winters yet thrilled by the new experiences ahead of me. 4 4 续写原文 It was on that very day that I met Alex, a freelance (自由职业的) photographer. While wandering in the world of ice and snow, I noticed one that captured the winter scenes, and his camera was focused on a group of children building a huge snowman, which stimulated my curiosity. I walked towards him and struck up a conversation with him about photography and the magic of New York in winter. He offered to share some tips and show me some of his favorite shots and images. Inspired by his works and passion, I was wondering and asked if he would mind giving me a quick photography lesson right there in the park. 5 5 续写原文 Alex agreed readily and enthusiastically, inviting me to join him, and we spent the next hour experimenting with different settings on my camera. Devoted to this communication and learning, I felt that time passed quickly. As the sun began to set, casting a golden glow over the snow, we captured some beautiful shots while enjoying the magnificent scene here. Feeling grateful for the impromptu (即兴的) lesson, I thanked him and started to head home, filled with joy and a sense of satisfaction. As I walked down the way out of the park, I realized I had left my gloves next to where we had been standing. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： I turned back to find them and saw Alex waving them in his hand. Paragraph 2： A few days later, I went to the nursing house with Alex. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 初到纽约的第一个冬天，作者在中央公园赏雪时，偶遇自由摄影师亚历克斯。亚历克斯专注拍摄雪景，作者被吸引，与之交谈并请教摄影技巧。亚历克斯欣然应允，耐心教学。日落时分，作者在离开公园途中发现手套落下，折返时与亚历克斯有了更多交流，得知他常去养老院做志愿摄影，作者表示想一同前往。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I turned back to find them and saw Alex waving them in his hand. 我转身回去找手套，看到亚历克斯正挥舞着它们。我如释重负，急忙朝他跑去。亚历克斯脸上挂着温暖的笑容，对我说：“我就知道你肯定需要它们，外面可冷了。” 我发自内心地向他道谢，他接着提出陪我一起走出公园。在回去的路上，我们敞开心扉，聊起了各自的生活、兴趣爱好和梦想。我了解到，亚历克斯经常去当地的一家养老院做志愿者，他运用自己的摄影专长，为老人们带去欢乐。我听后很感兴趣，询问他下次能否带上我一起去。亚历克斯毫不犹豫地答应了，眼中闪烁着期待的光芒，那一刻，我感受到我们之间的情谊在悄然加深。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： A few days later, I went to the nursing house with Alex. 几天后，我和亚历克斯一同前往养老院。我们手持相机走进养老院，刚一进门，老人们的脸上便绽放出灿烂的笑容。亚历克斯轻车熟路地开始为正在参与各种活动的老人们拍照，有的老人在专注地编织毛衣，有的在兴致勃勃地下象棋，每一个画面都被他敏锐地捕捉下来。受他的感染，我也鼓起勇气，用刚学到的摄影技巧记录下这些温馨的瞬间。随后，我们将照片打印出来，一一分发给老人们。看着老人们手中捧着照片，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容，我内心充满了成就感。这次经历，不仅让我的摄影技术得到了提升，更让我深刻体会到了分享与传递快乐的意义，而这一切，都源于在雪中中央公园与亚历克斯的那次奇妙相遇。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I turned back to find them and saw Alex waving them in his hand. Relieved, I hurried towards him. Alex wore a warm smile and said to me, "I knew you'd need these. It's extremely cold outside." I thanked him sincerely. Then he offered to walk me out of the park. On the way, we opened up and talked about our lives, hobbies, and dreams. I learned that Alex often volunteered at a local nursing home, using his photography skills to bring joy to the elderly. Interested, I asked him if I could go with him next time. Alex agreed without hesitation, with anticipation shining in his eyes. At that moment, I felt our friendship deepening. 14 14 范文呈现 A few days later, I went to the nursing house with Alex. We entered the nursing home with cameras in hand. As soon as we came in, the elderly people's faces lit up with big smiles. Alex skillfully started taking photos of the elderly engaged in various activities. Some were knitting sweaters attentively, and some were playing chess with great enthusiasm. Inspired by him, I also took pictures of these heartwarming moments using the photography skills I had just learned. Later, we printed the photos and distributed them to the elderly one by one. Looking at the happy smiles on their faces, I felt a great sense of achievement. This experience not only improved my photography skills but also made me deeply understand the meaning of sharing and bringing happiness. And all of this was due to that wonderful encounter with Alex in the snowy Central Park. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Realizing I had left my gloves behind, I quickly turned on my heel and retraced my steps. To my relief, there was Alex, waving the gloves high in the air, as if signaling a warm welcome back. With a sense of urgency, I rushed towards him, the cold snow crunching beneath my boots. A warm smile graced Alex's face as he handed me the gloves, saying, "I knew you'd be in a fix without these. It's biting cold out here." Expressing my heartfelt gratitude, I was pleasantly surprised when he offered to accompany me out of the park. During our stroll, we delved deeper into each other's lives, sharing stories about our hobbies, aspirations, and life experiences. It was then that I learned of his regular volunteering at a local nursing home, where he employed his photographic prowess to bring cheer to the elderly. Intrigued by this noble cause, I couldn't resist asking if I could join him on his next visit. Without a moment's hesitation, Alex agreed, his eyes twinkling with anticipation, forging a stronger bond between us. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 A few days later, camera in hand, I accompanied Alex to the nursing home. The moment we stepped through the doors, the somber atmosphere was instantly transformed as the elderly residents' faces lit up like beacons of joy. Alex, with his characteristic ease and expertise, immediately set about capturing the elderly engaged in their daily activities. Some were absorbed in knitting, their hands deftly moving the needles, while others were engrossed in intense chess matches. Inspired by his example, I applied the photography skills I had acquired during our park session to document these heartwarming scenes. Afterward, we printed the photos and distributed them among the residents. The sight of their faces, beaming with happiness as they held their personalized mementos, filled me with an overwhelming sense of fulfillment. This experience not only honed my photography skills but also instilled in me the profound value of sharing and spreading happiness, all thanks to that serendipitous encounter with Alex in the snow - covered Central Park. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$