2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：一趟触动心灵的出租车之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 一趟触动心灵的出租车之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 This is an unforgettable experience which impressed me most. I'd name it “ A Taxi Ride I'll Never Forget". Here comes the story. About ten years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at2: 30 am, when I arrived to collect, the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Often, many drivers would just honk (按喇叭) once or twice, wait a short minute, then drive away. But I had seen too many needy people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation. Unless a real danger, I always went to the door to collect the passenger. It might be someone who needed my assistance. Would I not want a driver to do the same if my father or mother had called for a taxi? 4 4 续写原文 So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute”, answered a weak and elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long wait, the door opened. A small woman in her 80's stood before me. Wearing a long dress and a black hat, she looked like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small suitcase. “Would you carry my bag out to the car?” she said. I took the suitcase to the taxi, then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly toward the taxi. She kept thanking me for my kindness. “It's nothing”, I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.” 5 5 续写原文 “Oh, you're such a good man,” she said. When we got in the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, “Could you drive through downtown?” “It's not the shortest way,” I answered quickly. “Oh, I don't mind,” she said, “I'm in no hurry. I'm on my way to a hospice (临终医院).” I looked in the rear-view mirror (后视镜). Her eyes were shining with tears. “I don't have any family left,” she continued. “The doctor says I don't have very long.” I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (里程器). “What route would you like me to take?” I asked. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： For the next two hours, we drove through the city. Paragraph 2： “How much do I owe you?” she asked , reaching into her purse. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 十年前，作者以开出租车为生。一天凌晨两点半，他去接一位乘客。到达后，他坚持上门迎接。一位 80 多岁的老妇人出现，她要去临终医院，请求作者开车穿过市区。老妇人透露自己时日无多且无家人，作者关闭里程器，决定倾听她的故事，陪伴她完成这趟特别的旅程。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： For the next two hours, we drove through the city. 在接下来的两个小时里，我们驾车穿梭于城市之中。车子缓缓驶向她曾经就读的小学，她望着窗外，目光中满是温柔与怀念，轻声讲述着课间与小伙伴们在操场嬉戏的欢乐场景。随后，我们路过她初入职场的地方，她回忆起那时的自己，怀揣着对未来的憧憬，努力学习业务知识，与同事们建立起深厚的情谊。当经过她和丈夫常去的公园时，她的声音有些哽咽，眼眶中闪烁着泪花，讲述着他们携手漫步在花丛间、长椅上互诉衷肠的美好时光。我安静地开着车，不时附和几句，沉浸在她的故事里。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：“How much do I owe you?” she asked , reaching into her purse. “我该付你多少钱？” 她边问边把手伸进钱包。我微笑着轻声说：“您不用付钱，这趟旅程对我来说意义非凡。” 她有些惊讶，眼中满是感激。我接着说：“能陪您重温这些回忆，是我的荣幸。” 到达临终医院后，我帮她拿好行李，搀扶她下车。她紧紧握着我的手，颤抖地说：“谢谢你，年轻人，你让我最后的旅程充满温暖。” 我目送她缓缓走进医院，心中五味杂陈。这一趟出租车之行，不仅载着她走过城市，更让我深刻体会到生命的珍贵与温情的力量 。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 For the next two hours, we drove through the city. The car slowly approached her primary school. Looking out of the window, with tenderness and nostalgia in her eyes, she softly told me the happy scenes of playing with her classmates on the playground during breaks. Then, we passed by the place where she started her first job. She recalled how she was full of hopes for the future at that time, studied business knowledge hard, and built deep friendships with her colleagues. When we drove past the park where she and her husband used to go, her voice choked up a bit, with tears glistening in her eyes. She told me about the beautiful moments when they walked hand in hand among the flowers and confided in each other on the bench. I drove quietly, chiming in from time to time, and immersed myself in her stories. 14 14 范文呈现 “How much do I owe you?” she asked, reaching into her purse. I smiled and said softly, "You don't have to pay. This journey means a great deal to me." She was a bit surprised, with gratitude in her eyes. I continued, "It's my honor to accompany you to relive these memories." After arriving at the hospice, I helped her carry the luggage and assisted her to get off the car. She held my hand tightly and said tremblingly, "Thank you, young man. You've made my last journey full of warmth." I watched her walk slowly into the hospital, with mixed feelings in my heart. This taxi ride not only carried her through the city but also made me deeply realize the preciousness of life and the power of warmth. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 For the ensuing two hours, we meandered through the cityscape. As our vehicle gently rolled towards her alma mater, the primary school, her eyes, brimming with tenderness and nostalgia, were fixed on the view outside the window. Softly, she recounted the jubilant moments of frolicking with classmates on the playground during recess. Next, we traversed the locale where she embarked on her first career venture. She reminisced about her youthful self, filled with aspirations for the future, toiling away at mastering business acumen and forging profound bonds with colleagues. When we passed by the park that held so many cherished memories of her and her late husband, her voice quivered, and tears welled up in her eyes. She painted a vivid picture of their romantic strolls among blooming flowers and intimate conversations on park benches. I drove in silence, interjecting occasionally, completely engrossed in her tales. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 “How much do I owe you?” she inquired, her hand delving into her purse. With a warm smile, I replied softly, "There's no need for payment. This journey has been invaluable to me." Surprise flickered across her face, quickly replaced by a profound sense of gratitude. I added, "It has been my privilege to accompany you on this journey down memory lane." Upon arriving at the hospice, I promptly assisted her with her luggage and carefully helped her out of the car. She grasped my hand firmly, her voice trembling with emotion, "Thank you, young man. You've made this final chapter of my life filled with warmth." I stood there, watching her figure recede into the hospital, a complex blend of emotions surging within me. This taxi ride had not merely been a physical journey through the city streets; it had been a profound odyssey that had made me acutely aware of the preciousness of life and the indelible power of human kindness. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$