2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：为救女童，小伙开启健康蜕变之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 为救女童，小伙开启健康蜕变之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Kevin, a young man in his twenties, got home from work. He opened the fridge and grabbed one bottle of drink from dozens of various caffeinated drinks. Like some other young people, Kevin was in a pattern of unhealthy living. He often stayed up late, accompanied with late-night snacks like ice cream and pizza. He rushed through his day with skipping breakfast or eating on the go. He was feeding primarily on high-fat, high-calorie foods like fast food, sugary snacks, and caffeinated drinks. When back from work, Kevin spent most of his free time sitting on the sofa, browsing smartphone screen, rarely engaging in physical activity, which caused him overweight. 4 4 续写原文 One evening, as he scrolled through his phone on the sofa as usual, a piece of news caught his eye. It was about a 5-year-old girl named Melody, who was battling leukemia(白血病)and in desperate need of a bone marrow(骨髓)transplant. The story tugged at Kevin’s heartstrings, and he felt a sudden urge to help. The next day, he went to the hospital and asked for getting tested for bone marrow compatibility(相容). To his delight, the test results showed that he was a perfect match for Melody. Excitement filled his heart as he prepared for the donation process. However, during his following medical check-ups, Kevin was informed that he had fatty liver(脂肪肝), meaning that he was unqualified to be a suitable donor at present unless his condition improved. 5 5 续写原文 The thought of little Melody lying in a hospital bed, waiting for a life-saving transplant, drove Kevin into action. He resolved to make significant changes to his lifestyle to improve his health and become a suitable donor. He began by adopting a strict exercise plan, incorporating daily runs into his routine. His diet underwent a transformation as well, with healthier food choices replacing his previous ones. He also made a conscious effort to get more sleep and reduce his screen time. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Day by day, Kevin’s commitment to his new lifestyle began to show results. Paragraph 2： The experience significantly impacted Kevin. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 二十多岁的凯文生活方式不健康，常熬夜、吃垃圾食品、缺乏运动，导致超重。一天，他看到 5 岁患白血病女孩梅洛迪急需骨髓移植的新闻，决定去配型。结果显示他与梅洛迪配型成功，但体检发现他有脂肪肝，不适合捐赠。为了帮助梅洛迪，凯文决心改变生活方式，开始严格锻炼、调整饮食、保证睡眠。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Day by day, Kevin’s commitment to his new lifestyle began to show results. 日复一日，凯文对新生活方式的坚持开始有了成效。每天清晨，他迎着朝阳出门跑步，起初没跑几步就气喘吁吁，双腿像灌了铅般沉重。但随着时间推移，他的耐力逐渐增强，能轻松跑完更远的距离。在饮食方面，他彻底告别了高油高糖的垃圾食品，取而代之的是新鲜蔬菜、水果和富含蛋白质的食物。每次面对美食诱惑，他都会想起病床上等待救助的梅洛迪，从而坚定地选择健康食物。一段时间后，体重秤上的数字不断下降，镜子里的自己身材愈发紧致。去医院复查时，医生惊喜地告诉他，脂肪肝状况明显改善。凯文欣喜若狂，更加坚定了自己的决心。终于，经过几个月的不懈努力，医生宣布他的身体状况适合进行骨髓捐赠。凯文毫不犹豫地踏上了捐赠之路，满心期待能为梅洛迪带来生的希望。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The experience significantly impacted Kevin. 这次经历对凯文产生了深远影响。他不仅拯救了梅洛迪的生命，也彻底改变了自己的人生轨迹。他深刻认识到健康生活的重要性，意识到自己的点滴行动不仅关乎自身，还能对他人产生重大影响。捐赠结束后，他并没有松懈，而是继续保持健康的生活习惯。他主动向身边的朋友和家人分享自己的经历，鼓励他们也重视健康。凯文还积极参与社区的健康宣传活动，用自己的故事激励更多人改变不良生活方式。通过这次经历，凯文找到了人生的新目标，明白了只要坚持做出积极改变，就能创造美好未来，无论是对自己还是对需要帮助的人。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Day by day, Kevin’s commitment to his new lifestyle began to show results. Every morning, he would go out for a run in the rising sun. At first, he would be out of breath after running just a few steps, and his legs felt as heavy as lead. However, as time passed, his endurance gradually increased, and he could easily run longer distances. In terms of diet, he completely bid farewell to high - fat and high - sugar junk food. Instead, he chose fresh vegetables, fruits, and protein - rich foods. Every time he faced the temptation of delicious but unhealthy food, he would think of little Melody lying in the hospital bed waiting for help, and thus firmly choose healthy options. After a period of time, the number on the scale kept dropping, and his figure in the mirror became more toned. When he went to the hospital for a review, the doctor told him pleasantly that his fatty liver condition had improved significantly. Kevin was overjoyed and became even more determined. Finally, after months of unremitting efforts, the doctor announced that his physical condition was suitable for bone marrow donation. Without hesitation, Kevin embarked on the donation journey, eagerly expecting to bring hope of life to Melody. 14 14 范文呈现 The experience significantly impacted Kevin. He not only saved Melody's life but also completely changed his own life trajectory. He deeply realized the importance of a healthy lifestyle and that his every little action could have a significant impact on others. After the donation, he did not slack off. Instead, he continued to maintain healthy living habits. He took the initiative to share his experience with his friends and family around him, encouraging them to also attach importance to health. Kevin also actively participated in community health promotion activities, inspiring more people to change their unhealthy lifestyles with his story. Through this experience, Kevin found a new goal in life. He understood that as long as one perseveres in making positive changes, one can create a beautiful future, both for oneself and for those in need. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Day in and day out, the fruits of Kevin's unwavering dedication to his new - found lifestyle began to manifest. Each dawn, he would set out for a run, greeted by the warm glow of the rising sun. Initially, a mere few steps would leave him gasping for breath, his legs feeling as if they were laden with lead. Nevertheless, with the passage of time, his stamina steadily grew, enabling him to effortlessly cover greater distances. His dietary habits underwent a complete overhaul as well. High - fat, high - sugar junk food was consigned to the past, replaced by a diet rich in fresh vegetables, fruits, and protein. Whenever the allure of unhealthy yet delicious treats tempted him, the image of little Melody, frail and waiting in the hospital bed, would flash before his eyes, steeling his resolve to make healthier choices. As the days turned into weeks and then months, the numbers on the scale steadily declined, and his physique in the mirror became increasingly toned. A subsequent visit to the hospital brought pleasant news; the doctor informed him that his fatty - liver condition had improved remarkably. Overwhelmed with joy, Kevin redoubled his efforts. Finally, after months of arduous perseverance, he received the long - awaited confirmation: he was now fit for bone - marrow donation. Without a moment's hesitation, he embarked on this life - giving journey, filled with the hope of bringing a new lease on life to Melody. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 This experience left an indelible mark on Kevin. It wasn't merely about saving Melody's life; it was a profound transformation of his own existence. He came to realize, in the most profound way, the significance of leading a healthy lifestyle and how even the smallest of his actions could have far - reaching consequences for others. Even after the donation, he remained steadfast in his commitment to health. He took it upon himself to share his journey with friends and family, encouraging them to embrace a healthier way of life. Moreover, he actively engaged in community health - promotion initiatives, using his story as a powerful catalyst for change. Through this experience, Kevin discovered a new purpose in life. He learned that by persistently making positive changes, one could not only transform their own well - being but also extend a lifeline to those in need, forging a brighter future for all. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$