2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：与会说话贝壳的奇妙邂逅与抉择 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 与会说话贝壳的奇妙邂逅与抉择 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Caitlyn stepped into the warm and wet sands. The white waves raced over her feet and up her legs and then pulled back again. Caitlyn was on vacation with her family in a nearby coastal town, and she loved playing in the ocean water. “Ouch!” cried the girl, as her foot stepped on something hard. She looked down and it was a large shell (贝壳). Caitlyn bent down to pick it up. It was a pretty pink shell with points and an opening that looked like a horn (号). She held it up to her ear, hoping to hear the whooshing sound (呼啸声). Instead, she heard something quite different. “Hey kid! Want to hear a joke?” Caitlyn nearly dropped the shell. Holding it back up to her ear, she tried again. 4 4 续写原文 “Why don’t fish play basketball?” the shell asked. “I... I don’t know,” Caitlyn whispered. “Because they are afraid of the net! Ha, ha!” laughed the shell. Caitlyn looked around to see if anyone was looking at her. Nobody was. “That’s, uh, funny,” she replied. She didn’t really know what was going on. “Why don’t oysters (蚌) share their pearls?” It seemed to be waiting for a reply. “Uh, I’m not sure.” Caitlyn said. Was she dreaming? The shell answered its own joke. “Because they’re ‘shellfish’! Ha, ha!” 5 5 续写原文 The girl laughed. On and on the shell went, being silly and making jokes. Caitlyn sat in the shallow water and listened for an hour. When her mother called to her, saying it was time to go, the girl laid the shell gently on the sands. She promised to come back the next day. And she did. On the last day of her vacation, Caitlyn decided she couldn’t leave the shell behind. “You’re coming home with me,” she said to the pretty shell. She thought it would be happy. “My home is in the ocean,” it replied, without any laughter in its voice. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： But Caitlyn couldn’t bear to go home without it. Paragraph 2： Gently, she lowered it back under the water. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 凯特琳在海边度假，踩到一个贝壳。当她把贝壳凑近耳边，竟听到它讲笑话。此后几天，凯特琳都与贝壳愉快交谈。度假最后一天，她想把贝壳带回家，然而贝壳表示自己的家在海洋。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： But Caitlyn couldn’t bear to go home without it. 但凯特琳实在不忍心不带它回家。过去几天，这个会说话的贝壳已经成为她在海边最特别的伙伴。它那些诙谐有趣的笑话，总能在不经意间逗得她开怀大笑。她想象着回到家后，没有贝壳陪伴的日子，生活将会变得多么平淡无趣。于是，她不顾内心隐隐的不安，小心翼翼地把贝壳放进了背包。在回去的路上，她时不时打开包看看贝壳，可贝壳却始终沉默着。凯特琳心中的愧疚感越来越强烈，她开始反思自己的行为，意识到贝壳离开了海洋，就像自己离开了熟悉的家一样，会无比痛苦。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Gently, she lowered it back under the water. 她轻轻地把贝壳放回水下。当贝壳接触到海水的那一刻，凯特琳仿佛看到它重新焕发出了生机。她对着贝壳轻声说道：“对不起，我差点因为自己的自私，让你离开心爱的家。希望你在这里能一直快乐。” 贝壳似乎听懂了她的话，在水中轻轻晃动了一下。凯特琳站起身，望着一望无际的大海，心中感到前所未有的平静。这次经历让她明白，真正的喜爱不是占有，而是给予自由和尊重。带着这份感悟，凯特琳踏上了回家的路，而这段与贝壳的奇妙经历，将永远留在她的记忆深处。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 But Caitlyn couldn’t bear to go home without it. Over the past few days, the talking shell had become her most special companion at the beach. Its humorous jokes could always make her burst into laughter. She imagined that without the shell’s company after returning home, her life would become dull and uninteresting. So, regardless of the faint unease in her heart, she carefully put the shell into her backpack. On the way back, she opened the bag from time to time to check on the shell, but the shell remained silent all the time. The sense of guilt in Caitlyn’s heart grew stronger and stronger. She began to reflect on her behavior and realized that if the shell left the ocean, it would be as painful as she would be if she left her familiar home. 14 14 范文呈现 Gently, she lowered it back under the water. The moment the shell touched the sea water, Caitlyn seemed to see it come back to life. She said softly to the shell, "I'm sorry. I almost let you leave your beloved home because of my selfishness. I hope you can be happy here forever." The shell seemed to understand her words and swayed gently in the water. Caitlyn stood up and looked out at the endless sea, feeling an unprecedented sense of peace in her heart. This experience taught her that true love is not possession, but giving freedom and respect. With this realization, Caitlyn embarked on her journey home, and this wonderful experience with the shell would always remain deep in her memory. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 However, the thought of leaving without the shell was simply unbearable for Caitlyn. Over the span of those few days, the talking shell had transformed into an irreplaceable part of her beach escapade. Its hilarious jokes had been the source of countless hearty laughs, and she found herself envisioning a rather lackluster home - bound life devoid of their engaging banter. Thus, despite the nagging unease tugging at her conscience, she gingerly slipped the shell into her backpack. During the journey back, she repeatedly opened the bag, stealing glances at the shell, only to be met with an eerie silence. As time passed, the guilt within her swelled, gnawing at her heart. It was then that she began to introspect, finally coming to the realization that wrenching the shell away from its oceanic abode would be as agonizing for it as it would be for her to be uprooted from her own familiar surroundings. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 With utmost care, she submerged the shell back beneath the water's surface. The instant the shell made contact with the briny depths, Caitlyn fancied she could see a newfound vitality coursing through it. In a soft, remorseful tone, she murmured, "I'm truly sorry. My selfishness nearly condemned you to a life away from your cherished home. May you find eternal happiness here." As if in response, the shell gently swayed in the water, as if bidding her farewell. Rising to her feet, Caitlyn cast her gaze upon the vast expanse of the ocean, a profound sense of tranquility washing over her. This encounter had been a valuable lesson, teaching her that genuine affection lies not in possession but in bestowing freedom and respect. With this newfound wisdom, Caitlyn set off on her journey home, carrying the memories of this extraordinary encounter with the shell as a cherished keepsake in the recesses of her heart. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$