2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：双犬护主显忠诚，爱与理解延续 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 双犬护主显忠诚，爱与理解延续 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Dogs named Hero and Tora saved their owner’s life in March. They remained by his side through two cold nights, fought coyotes (土狼), and waited for help. Their story has won the respect of the world. A charity donation campaign was launched by the victim and the local shelter Taber Lost Paws Society to help the injured dogs. The story began with an attack. When a passerby named Curtis Dahl was walking his dog in a field of muddy grass near the sugar factory in the town of Taber, an area that is quite remote, not well-traveled, and quite cold in March. Suddenly, Hero came running up and bit his dog around the neck. Dahl claimed he fought with Hero for ten minutes, trying to get him off his dog, and his finger was hurt by the end of it. Calling police and animal services with a complaint, he told them about Hero’s presence, but when the officers arrived and saw Hero lying down there, badly hurt and tired out, they suddenly heard a cry for help. 4 4 续写原文 Arriving, they found a man lying on his back in a ditch (沟渠), trembling and unable to move. He told police he is 61 and lives alone and that he was walking his two dogs Hero and Tora when he fell down. He’d been stuck there for two days and his dogs protected him. The man said that when he fell down, Tora and Hero stayed with him to keep him safe and warm for some time, and then Tora ran off. “I know she went home to find some help for me, but every time she came back, very sad,” said the man. Tora went back and forth from the site where her owner was and her home several times. By the time Dahl walked by and rescuers arrived, Tora had just gone back again. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： The man recalled how Hero and Tora protected him from coyotes. Paragraph 2： Knowing what happened, Dahl held no ill feelings toward Hero. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 三月，两只狗狗赫罗和托拉拯救了主人的生命。它们在寒冷的夜晚守在主人身边，与土狼搏斗等待救援。故事始于路人柯蒂斯・达尔的投诉，他称赫罗袭击了他的狗。但警察到达后发现受伤的赫罗及呼救的主人。原来主人独自散步时摔倒，被困两天，托拉往返家中求救，赫罗守护主人与土狼对抗。之后，达尔知晓真相后态度转变。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： The man recalled how Hero and Tora protected him from coyotes. 主人回忆起赫罗和托拉如何保护他免受土狼的侵害。“那些土狼在周围徘徊，饥饿的眼神让人胆寒，它们一直寻找机会靠近我。但赫罗和托拉毫无惧色，始终坚定地守在我身前。赫罗尤其勇猛，每一次土狼试图靠近，它都毫不犹豫地冲上前去，发出低沉的吼声，露出锋利的牙齿，用自己的身躯为我筑起一道防线。在一次激烈的对抗中，一只体型较大的土狼从侧面突袭，赫罗为了保护我，被土狼抓伤了背部，鲜血染红了它的毛发，但它依然没有退缩。托拉也在一旁不断地吠叫，分散土狼的注意力。它们的勇敢和忠诚，支撑着我熬过了那艰难的两天。” 主人说着，声音哽咽，眼中满是对两只狗狗的心疼与感激。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Knowing what happened, Dahl held no ill feelings toward Hero. 了解事情的经过后，达尔对赫罗没有了丝毫的怨恨。回想起当时赫罗的状态，他意识到赫罗并非无端攻击，而是出于对主人的极度担忧和寻求帮助的急切心情。达尔深感愧疚，决定去动物收容所看望受伤的赫罗和托拉。他精心挑选了营养丰富的狗粮和可爱的玩具，满怀诚意地来到收容所。看到受伤的两只狗狗，达尔的眼眶湿润了，他轻声说道：“对不起，是我误会你们了。你们是真正的英雄。” 从那以后，达尔经常来照顾它们，还会向身边的人讲述这个感人的故事，希望更多的人能感受到动物们的忠诚与爱。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 The man recalled how Hero and Tora protected him from coyotes. "Those coyotes were lingering around, with their hungry eyes making me tremble. They were constantly looking for a chance to approach me. However, Hero and Tora showed no fear at all. They firmly stood in front of me all the time. Hero was especially brave. Every time a coyote tried to get close, it rushed forward without hesitation, growling deeply and showing its sharp teeth, building a defense line for me with its own body. During a fierce confrontation, a relatively large coyote launched a surprise attack from the side. To protect me, Hero was scratched on the back by the coyote, and its fur was stained with blood. But it still didn't retreat. Tora was also barking continuously beside, diverting the coyotes' attention. Their courage and loyalty sustained me through those tough two days." The man's voice choked up as he spoke, his eyes full of distress and gratitude for the two dogs. 13 13 范文呈现 Knowing what happened, Dahl held no ill feelings toward Hero. Recalling Hero's state at that time, he realized that Hero didn't attack his dog without reason. Instead, it was out of extreme worry about its owner and eagerness to seek help. Dahl felt deeply guilty and decided to visit the injured Hero and Tora at the animal shelter. He carefully selected nutritious dog food and lovely toys and came to the shelter with full sincerity. Seeing the injured two dogs, Dahl's eyes welled up with tears. He said softly, "I'm sorry. I misunderstood you. You are real heroes." Since then, Dahl often came to take care of them and would tell this touching story to people around him, hoping that more people could feel the loyalty and love of animals. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 The man vividly recalled the harrowing moments when Hero and Tora shielded him from the menacing coyotes. “There they were, those ravenous coyotes, lurking on the periphery, their eyes glinting with hunger, sending shivers down my spine. They incessantly prowled, seeking an opportune moment to pounce. But my valiant companions, Hero and Tora, remained steadfast, their unwavering resolve evident as they stood resolutely before me. Hero, in particular, was a paragon of courage. Each time a coyote dared to encroach, it sprang forward with unbridled determination, emitting guttural growls and baring its formidable teeth, using its own body as a living bulwark to safeguard me. During one particularly intense skirmish, a large - sized coyote launched a surprise flanking attack. In a selfless act of sacrifice, Hero intercepted the assailant, sustaining a deep scratch on its back. The sight of its fur stained with blood was heart - wrenching, yet it refused to yield an inch. Meanwhile, Tora barked furiously, diverting the coyotes' attention and adding to the defensive front. Their unwavering loyalty and indomitable spirit were the very lifelines that sustained me through those arduous two days.” The man's voice quivered with emotion, his eyes glistening with a mix of pain and profound gratitude for his four - legged saviors. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Upon learning the full extent of the story, Dahl's initial animosity towards Hero evaporated completely. Reflecting on Hero's desperate state during the encounter, he finally grasped the true motive behind the seemingly unprovoked attack. It dawned on him that Hero's actions were driven by an overwhelming sense of urgency to protect its injured owner and secure help. Overcome with remorse, Dahl resolved to make amends. He made a beeline for the animal shelter, armed with carefully selected nutritious dog food and a variety of endearing toys. As he laid eyes on the injured Hero and Tora, his heart ached with compassion. With a voice choked with emotion, he murmured, “I'm truly sorry. I misjudged you. You are, without a doubt, true heroes.” From that moment forward, Dahl became a regular visitor at the shelter, showering the two dogs with love and care. Moreover, he made it his mission to share this heart - rending tale with all those he met, hoping to inspire others to recognize and appreciate the boundless loyalty and love that animals are capable of. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$