内容正文:
高中英语应用文写作
---建议信
高一英语组
写作方法点拨
一、建议信写作核心注意事项
建议信属于功能性书信,写作核心是礼貌提建议、合理给方法,区别于投诉信、抱怨信。全文语气需温和诚恳、客观友好,切忌生硬命令、主观指责。所提建议要贴合高中生学习、生活场景,贴合实际、条理清晰,具备可行性,让读者易于接受,符合高考写作得体性评分标准。
写作方法点拨
二、分段写作满分方法
首段:开门见山,点明目的
礼貌回应对方的问题或困境,简单承接对方来信内容,清晰表明自己写信的目的是提供相关建议。句式简洁自然,不拖沓,快速切入主题,给阅卷人清晰的结构印象。
写作方法点拨
二、分段写作满分方法
主体段:分点建议,逻辑清晰(核心得分段)
采用分层结构逐条给出具体、可落地的建议,用递进、并列逻辑词衔接。每条建议搭配简单的原因或好处,避免只提建议无阐释。内容贴合题目场景,适当使用高级句式,句式错落有致,提升文章层次感与丰富度。
写作方法点拨
二、分段写作满分方法
尾段:礼貌总结,真诚祝愿(完美收尾)
简要总结全文,表达美好期许,希望自己的建议能够帮助对方解决问题、有所收获。结尾使用标准书信礼貌用语,语气谦逊真诚,收尾干净利落,贴合书信文体规范。
信件格式
1. 称呼:Dear 后面加人名,逗号不能丢!顶格写,不空格;一般不用 Mr./Ms. 除非题目给出。
Dear Wang Mei,
2. 署名:Yours, 靠左书写,单独一行,后面逗号!下一行写 Li Hua,和 Yours 对齐。
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 整体布局:三段式,每段空两格。
写作练习
假如你是李华,近日你收到了你的朋友王梅的来信,她在信中向你询问“在高中阶段,如何学好英语?”请你写一篇回给王梅的建议信,内容要点如下:
1. 上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;
2. 课外多与同学用英语交流,提高口语和听力能力;
3. 每天坚持写日记。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
首段---快速切入主题
Dear Wang Mei,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Here is some advice on how to learn English well in senior high school.
prep. 关于
重点短语:hear from sb. 收到某人的来信
主体---分层、逐条
First, you’d better listen carefully and take notes in class so that you can review what you have learned. What’s more, you can communicate with your classmates in English after class to improve your spoken English and listening skills. Last but not least, keeping an English diary is a good choice, which will boost your writing skills.
主体---重点短语&固定搭配
you’d better do sth. 最好做某事
take notes 记笔记
what’s more 此外;而且
communicate with sb. 和某人交流
after class 课后
spoken English 英语口语
last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
keep an English diary 写英语日记
尾段---总结、祝愿
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes!
重点短语:be helpful to sb. 对某人有帮助
范文
Dear Wang Mei,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Here is some advice on how to learn English well in senior high school.
First, you’d better listen carefully and take notes in class so that you can review what you have learned. What’s more, you can communicate with your classmates in English after class to improve your spoken English and listening skills. Last but not least, keeping an English diary is a good choice, which will boost your writing skills.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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