2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从低谷到逆袭：赛场的信心之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从低谷到逆袭：赛场的信心之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 My heart beat fast as I walked onto the field for the state cup finals. The air popped with a mix of excitement and nervousness - a feeling I knew well. But this time was different. The audience were everywhere and this added a layer of pressure, twisting my stomach into a knot. With a whistle that broke the tense silence, the game began. The ball came straight to me. I drove forward, slipped around a defender, and lost it. On the very next play, I gave it straight away again. My confidence, once a steady flame, began to weaken. Determined not to repeat the mistake, I played it safe next time and passed it back. Barely even on target, I was losing it. I could feel others’ eyes burning into the back of my head. 4 4 续写原文 By halftime, the score was a frustrating 0-0. Exhausted and discouraged, I just wanted the final whistle to blow. The second half kicked off, offering a chance to turn things around. But my struggles continued. As I ran up the field, the ball found my foot again. Yet, instead of a clean pass, I mishit it straight to a defender. Defeat flooded me. I only made safe passes, desperate not to make another mistake. Then, three sharp blows. Overtime (加时赛). My heart sank. How could I possibly face another tough period, with this self-doubt weighing me down? On my way to the locker room (更衣室), my legs felt heavy like lead weights. The usual enthusiasm I had when playing was replaced by self-doubt. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： As I walked into the locker room, my coach came up to me. Paragraph 2： The whistle blew for overtime, and I raced down the field, hope in my chest. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 “我” 带着紧张与兴奋踏上州杯决赛赛场，观众的存在让压力倍增。比赛开始后，“我” 接连失误，信心受挫。上半场 0:0 结束，下半场 “我” 依旧表现不佳，频繁犯错。进入加时赛，“我” 满心沮丧，对自己充满怀疑。就在这时，转机出现。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： As I walked into the locker room, my coach came up to me. 当我走进更衣室，教练径直向我走来。他目光坚定地看着我，有力的手重重地搭在我的肩膀上，说道：“孩子，别让这几个失误就把你打倒。你要知道自己是多么优秀的球员，平时训练付出的汗水可不能白费。现在正是你证明自己的时候，大胆去踢，相信自己的实力！” 教练的话如同一剂强心针，让我原本消沉的心渐渐燃起希望。我开始回想平日里刻苦训练的场景，那些无数次的跌倒又爬起，不就是为了今天吗？我在心里暗暗发誓，一定要振作起来。我抬起头，目光坚定地看着教练，用力地点点头。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：The whistle blew for overtime, and I raced down the field, hope in my chest. 加时赛的哨声响起，我带着满腔的希望冲向球场。这一次，我不再畏手畏脚。当球来到我脚下，我迅速观察场上局势，果断起脚传球，精准地找到了队友。随后，我积极跑位，参与每一次进攻与防守。在一次激烈的拼抢中，我成功断球，一路带球突破，面对对方防守队员，我巧妙地晃过对手，起脚射门。球在空中划过一道漂亮的弧线，直入网窝。队友们欢呼着向我跑来，那一刻，我找回了曾经的自信与荣耀。这场比赛不仅是一场竞技的较量，更是我战胜自我的征程。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 As I walked into the locker room, my coach came up to me. He fixed his eyes on me firmly and placed his strong hand on my shoulder. "Don't let these few mistakes defeat you," he said. "You are an excellent player. All the hard work you've done in training shouldn't be in vain. This is the time for you to prove yourself. Play bravely and trust your capabilities!" His words were like a powerful boost to my discouraged heart. I started to recall the scenes of my hard training days, those countless times of falling and getting up, all for this moment. I swore to myself that I must cheer up. I looked up at my coach with determination and nodded vigorously. 13 13 范文呈现 The whistle blew for overtime, and I raced down the field, hope in my chest. This time, I was no longer hesitant. When the ball came to my feet, I quickly observed the situation on the field and passed the ball decisively, accurately finding my teammate. Then, I actively moved around, participating in every attack and defense. In a fierce scramble, I successfully intercepted the ball and dribbled past the opponents. Facing the defenders, I skillfully faked them out and shot. The ball flew through the air in a beautiful arc and went straight into the net. My teammates cheered and rushed towards me. At that moment, I regained my former confidence and glory. This game was not only a competition but also a journey of me overcoming myself. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Stepping into the locker room, I was met by my coach, who strode directly towards me. His gaze fixed intently on mine, he firmly planted his hand on my shoulder. "Don't let these minor setbacks define you," he asserted. "You're an outstanding player. The countless hours of toil in training weren't for naught. Now is your moment to shine. Play with courage and unwavering belief in your abilities!" His words resonated deeply, injecting newfound strength into my disheartened spirit. Memories of my arduous training sessions flooded back - the numerous times I'd stumbled only to rise again, all leading up to this crucial moment. Resolve steeled within me, I looked up at my coach, eyes ablaze with determination, and nodded resolutely. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 With the resounding blast of the overtime whistle, I charged onto the field, hope coursing through my veins. Gone was the hesitation of before. The moment the ball nestled at my feet, I swiftly scanned the field, making a split - second decision to pass with precision, connecting flawlessly with my teammate. Energized, I darted across the pitch, fully engaged in every offensive and defensive play. Amid a fierce tussle for the ball, I managed to intercept it cleanly and, with a burst of speed, dribbled past the opposition. Closing in on the goal, I executed a deft feint, leaving the defenders in my wake, and unleashed a powerful shot. The ball soared through the air in a graceful arc, finding the back of the net with a satisfying thud. In an instant, my teammates converged around me, their cheers echoing across the stadium. In that glorious moment, I reclaimed my lost confidence and basked in the glow of victory. This game had been more than just a test of skill; it was a testament to my ability to overcome self - doubt and emerge victorious. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$