2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：雪中邂逅，开启纽约温暖之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 雪中邂逅，开启纽约温暖之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was my first winter in New York, and the city was covered in a thick blanket of snow. I decided to embrace the extremely cold weather by visiting Central Park to see it transformed by the winter’s touch. As I walked through the park, the fresh snow crunched under my boots, which sounded like a piece of cheerful music, and I could see families enjoying skiing down the small hills, full of fun and laughter. I felt a mixture of excitement and homesickness, missing my hometown’s warmer winters yet thrilled by the new experiences ahead of me. 4 4 续写原文 It was on that very day that I met Alex, a freelance (自由职业的) photographer. While wandering in the world of ice and snow, I noticed one that captured the winter scenes, and his camera was focused on a group of children building a huge snowman, which stimulated my curiosity. I walked towards him and struck up a conversation with him about photography and the magic of New York in winter. He offered to share some tips and show me some of his favorite shots and images. Inspired by his works and passion, I was wondering and asked if he would mind giving me a quick photography lesson right there in the park. 5 5 续写原文 Alex agreed readily and enthusiastically, inviting me to join him, and we spent the next hour experimenting with different settings on my camera. Devoted to this communication and learning, I felt that time passed quickly. As the sun began to set, casting a golden glow over the snow, we captured some beautiful shots while enjoying the magnificent scene here. Feeling grateful for the impromptu (即兴的) lesson, I thanked him and started to head home, filled with joy and a sense of satisfaction. As I walked down the way out of the park, I realized I had left my gloves next to where we had been standing. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： I turned back to find them and saw Alex waving them in his hand. Paragraph 2： A few days later, I went to the nursing house with Alex. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 初到纽约的冬天，“我” 前往中央公园感受冬日魅力，在这里偶遇自由摄影师亚历克斯。他专注拍摄雪景，“我” 被吸引，与之交谈并向他请教摄影。亚历克斯热情应允，教 “我” 调试相机，一起捕捉夕阳雪景。离开时，“我” 落下手套，折返时亚历克斯正拿着手套等 “我”，还提议一起去养老院拍照，“我” 欣然同意。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I turned back to find them and saw Alex waving them in his hand. 我转身回去寻找手套，看到亚历克斯正挥舞着它们。他脸上挂着灿烂的笑容，大步朝我走来。“我就知道你会回来找，这么冷的天，可不能没有手套。” 他边说边把手套递给我。我接过手套，再次向他表达了感激之情，并再次提及今天的摄影教学让我收获颇丰。亚历克斯听后，兴致勃勃地跟我分享他常去养老院为老人们拍照的经历，他说那里的老人们生活单调，照片能给他们带来很多欢乐。说着，他便邀请我也一同前往，我听后，脑海中浮现出老人们看到照片后开心的样子，当即毫不犹豫地答应了。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： A few days later, I went to the nursing house with Alex. 几天后，我和亚历克斯带着相机和精心准备的道具来到养老院。刚踏入养老院，老人们就用热情的笑容迎接我们。我们先为老人们拍摄单人照，镜头下，他们的眼神里满是岁月的故事。随后，我们精心布置了一场以雪为主题的拍摄活动，虽然是人工雪，但老人们玩得不亦乐乎。一位老奶奶小心翼翼地捧着 “雪花”，仿佛回到了童年；一位老爷爷假装在 “雪中” 滑雪，逗得大家哈哈大笑。在欢声笑语中，我们按下快门，记录下这一个个珍贵的瞬间。这次经历，不仅让我摄影技术更上一层楼，更让我深刻体会到给予他人快乐的意义。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I turned back to find them and saw Alex waving them in his hand. With a broad smile across his face, he walked briskly towards me. "I knew you'd come back for these. It's far too cold to be without them," he said, handing over the gloves. I thanked him again and reiterated how much I had enjoyed the photography lesson. Alex then began sharing his experiences of regularly visiting a nursing home to take pictures for the elderly. He explained that the photos brought a lot of joy to their rather monotonous lives. As he spoke, he extended an invitation for me to join him. Imagining the happy expressions on the elderly's faces when they saw the photos, I readily agreed without hesitation. 14 14 范文呈现 A few days later, I went to the nursing house with Alex. We arrived with cameras in hand and carefully prepared props. As soon as we entered, the elderly greeted us with warm smiles. We started by taking individual portraits of the elderly, and through the lens, their eyes were filled with the stories of their lives. Then, we set up a snow - themed photo - shoot. Although it was artificial snow, the elderly had a great time. An old lady held the "snowflakes" carefully, as if she had returned to her childhood. An old man pretended to ski in the "snow", making everyone burst into laughter. Amidst the laughter and joy, we pressed the shutter, capturing these precious moments. This experience not only enhanced my photography skills but also made me deeply understand the significance of bringing happiness to others. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Upon realizing my gloves were left behind, I swiftly turned back, only to spot Alex waving them in the air. His face adorned with a radiant smile, he made his way towards me with purposeful strides. "I was certain you'd retrace your steps for these. In this frigid weather, gloves are an absolute necessity," he remarked, presenting me with the gloves. I expressed my gratitude once more and emphasized how much I had relished the photography session earlier. Alex, in response, delved into sharing his frequent visits to a local nursing home, where he dedicated himself to capturing moments for the elderly. He elaborated on how these simple acts of photography injected much - needed joy into their otherwise monotonous routines. As he shared his experiences, he extended an invitation for me to accompany him on his next visit. Visualizing the elated expressions that would grace the faces of the elderly, I consented without a moment's hesitation. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 A few days elapsed, and I found myself accompanying Alex to the nursing home, cameras slung over our shoulders and an array of carefully - chosen props in tow. The moment we stepped through the doors, we were greeted by a sea of warm smiles from the elderly residents. We commenced by taking individual portraits, each click of the shutter freezing in time the unique stories etched in their eyes. Subsequently, we orchestrated a snow - themed photo - shoot. Despite the snow being artificial, it didn't dampen the spirits of the elderly one bit. An elderly lady tenderly cradled the "snowflakes", her eyes glistening with memories of her youth. Meanwhile, an elderly gentleman playfully pretended to ski through the "snow", eliciting peals of laughter from all around. Amidst the jubilant atmosphere, we repeatedly pressed the shutter, immortalizing these precious moments. This experience not only honed my photography skills to a finer edge but also instilled in me a profound understanding of the immeasurable value of bringing happiness to others. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$