高考写人记叙文 课件-2025届高三上学期英语二轮复习专项

写人叙事类记叙文 与书信体相结合 【写作指导】 1.题型解读 　　本单元的写作任务是人物描写。人物描写主要是介绍人物的外貌、生平、成就等。人物描写的体裁一般是记叙文,有时也以看图作文、表格、书信、新闻的形式出现。其基本结构为: 开头:总体描写,即对该人物进行简要地介绍,如年龄、性别、出生地、家庭、身份、职业教育背景、外表、性格特点和特长爱好等; 主体:详细介绍人物的特点及生平大事(成就),可以按照时间顺序或在事件中的主次地位进行描述; 结尾:发表对人物的评价或感想。 2.锦囊妙计 3.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①...was one of the greatest...in the 20th century. 在20世纪……是最伟大的……之一。 ②He/She studied at...and graduated... 他/她在……学习和毕业…… ③...is the one who impresses me most. ……是使我印象最深刻的人。 (2)主体段落句 ①...is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. ……是一个如此有学问/意志坚强的人,我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。 ②He/She devoted all his/her life to... 他/她把他/她的一生都献给了…… (3)段尾句 ①He/She was highly thought of...他/她被高度评价…… ②In my opinion,he/she... 在我看来,他/她…… ③He/She will live in the hearts of...forever. 他/她将生活在……的心中,直到永远。 【实践应用】 　　假定你是高一学生李华。你的英国朋友吉姆在给你的邮件中提到他对中国儒家文化很感兴趣,并请你介绍历史人物孔子(Confucius)。请你给吉姆回一封邮件,介绍孔子,内容包括: 1.基本情况; 2.主要主张:仁、义; 3.重要影响。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 【写作思维流程】 Step 1:谋篇布局 Step 2:遣词造句 完成句子 1.在中国古代历史上,孔子是我最喜欢的人物。(figure) _______________________________________________________ 2.他是中国的思想家和社会哲学家。(Chinese thinker) ___________________________________________ 3.(一句多译)他的学说和哲学深深地影响了许多亚洲国家。 (1) __________________________________________________________________ (influence v.)  (2) _______________________________________________________________ __________(influence n.)  Confucius is my favourite figure in the ancient Chinese history.  He was a Chinese thinker and social philosopher.  His teachings and philosophy have deeply influenced many Asian countries. His teachings and philosophy have had a deep influence on many Asian countries. 4.(一句多译)他强调善良、责任和社会秩序的重要性。(kindness, duty and order) (1) __________________________________________________________(stress)  (2) _______________________________________________________ (attach importance to sth.)  5.(一句多译)我们中国人深受他的学说的影响。(teachings) (1) ______________________________________ (2) _____________________________________________(被动)  He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society. He attached importance to kindness, duty and order in society. His teachings greatly influence us Chinese.  We Chinese are greatly influenced by his teachings. 6.他激励我永远保持善良和礼貌。(inspire) _______________________________________ 7.那就是我想要被对待的方式。(treat) __________________________________________________ Step 3:句式升级 He inspires me to always be kind and polite.  That’s the way(that/in which) I would like to be treated.   Step 4:完美成篇 Dear Jim, It’s great to hear from you.I feel proud of knowing your interest in confucian culture in the ancient Chinese history. As for Confucius,he is my favourite figure in the ancient Chinese history.He was a Chinese thinker and social philosopher.His teachings and philosophy have deeply influenced many Asian countries.He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society.We Chinese are greatly influenced by his teachings.He inspires me to always be kind and polite. That’s the way I would like to be treated. Interested in knowing more? I can even find you some books! Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 2022重庆八中高三第二次阶段检测假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Emma 在给你的邮件中提到她对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Emma回复，内容包括： 1.身份 2.贡献 3.对你的影响 12 2.本文主要采用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主 写作指导 1.本文要求考生写一封邮件，向英国朋友Emma介绍一位中国历史人物； 3.写作要点：①该历史人物的身份【名字，出生地，身份，著作等】；②该历史人物的主要贡献、成就【文化，经济，教育，医学，军事等】；③该历史人物对自己的影响【精神，态度，行为方式等】。 13 Dear Emma, It’s a great pleasure to know that you take an interest in Chinese history, and I just can’t wait to share my favorite historical figure with you! Yours, Li Hua 14 Li Shizhen, a scholar and doctor of the Ming Dynasty, was one of the most influential figures in China’s medical history. His famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost him years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. It is the very book that has lifted Chinese medicine science to a new level. Hadn’t it been for his work, many previous errors wouldn’t have been corrected and many more people’s lives could have been claimed(获得）. What impresses me most are his perseverance and kindness shown in his career. Encouraged by him, I’m determined to work harder for my dream. Hope you will like him too and know Chinese history better. 15 $$