2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：好友间的分歧与和解的温馨故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 好友间的分歧与和解的温馨故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Ella and Jenny were best friends. They had known each other since Jenny moved next door three years ago. They hung out almost every day after school, exploring the world around them. They had a lot of fun, but like any friends, they sometimes had disagreements because they were very different people. Ella was a hardworking girl who did well in her school work, loved reading books, and took ballet classes. On the other hand, Jenny was outgoing. She would rather play soccer, chat with classmates at school, and couldn’t sit still long enough to finish reading a story book. In spite of their differences, they always found a way to have fun together. 4 4 续写原文 Usually, they would play together at the park across the street. They would play on the sports equipment, race around the playground, or play soccer with a group of kids in their neighborhood. On rainy days, they would go in one of their houses to make artworks, play video games, or paint each other’s nails. They could spend hours and hours together. While most days were filled with laughter and shared adventures, there were times when they couldn’t agree on what to do. One day, Ella wanted to play on the playground equipment, while Jenny preferred soccer on the freshly-cut grass. Ella suggested they should play on the equipment as they had already played soccer for three days. However, Jenny, with her eyes shining eagerly, argued that they should play soccer because the grass in the field had just been cut and it was nice and short. “We always do what you want to do, Jenny. Can’t we try something different for once?” said Ella, feeling upset. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： “Fine! Go play by yourself. I will play soccer,” Jenny shouted. Paragraph 2： Ella’s face lit up when she heard what Jenny said. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 艾拉和珍妮是好朋友，三年前珍妮搬到艾拉隔壁后二人相识。她们性格迥异，艾拉勤奋好学、热爱阅读与芭蕾；珍妮外向活泼，喜欢足球，不爱长时间阅读。尽管如此，她们总能一起愉快玩耍，晴天在公园运动，雨天在家创作。但也有意见不合的时候，一次艾拉想玩游乐设施，珍妮却想踢足球，两人产生争执。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： “Fine! Go play by yourself. I will play soccer,” Jenny shouted. “行啊！你自己玩去吧，我去踢足球。” 珍妮大喊道。她气呼呼地朝着足球场大步走去，留下艾拉呆呆地站在原地，满心委屈。艾拉望着珍妮离去的背影，心里五味杂陈，无奈地走向游乐设施。她爬上滑梯，却怎么也提不起兴致。以往和珍妮一起玩耍时的欢声笑语仿佛还在耳边，可此刻只有她形单影只。而在足球场上，珍妮一脚又一脚地用力踢球，可她的眼神却不时飘向艾拉那边，心里也开始后悔自己刚刚的冲动。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2： Ella’s face lit up when she heard what Jenny said. 艾拉听到珍妮的话，脸上立刻绽放出笑容。珍妮走上前，真诚地说：“艾拉，我不该那么固执，只想着自己。我们是好朋友，应该多考虑你的感受。” 艾拉感动极了，连忙回应：“我也有错，不该冲你发脾气。” 两人相视一笑，重归于好。她们决定先去玩游乐设施，之后再一起去踢足球。在接下来的时间里，她们尽情享受着彼此陪伴的快乐，在公园的每个角落都留下了她们的欢声笑语，友谊也更加深厚。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 “Fine! Go play by yourself. I will play soccer,” Jenny shouted. She walked away angrily towards the football field, leaving Ella standing there, feeling sad and let - down. Ella watched Jenny for a while, then walked slowly to the playground equipment. She climbed on the slide, but she didn't feel like having fun. She missed Jenny's company. Meanwhile, on the football field, Jenny kicked the ball hard, but her mind was not on the game. She kept thinking about Ella. She started to realize that she had been too selfish. 13 13 范文呈现 Ella’s face lit up when she heard what Jenny said. Jenny came closer and said sincerely, “Ella, I'm sorry. I was wrong. I should have considered your feelings. We are best friends after all.” Touched by Jenny's apology, Ella replied, “I'm sorry too. I shouldn't have been so angry.” They both smiled at each other and made up. They decided to play on the playground equipment first and then play soccer together. They spent the rest of the day having fun, laughing and running around the park, and their friendship became even stronger. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 “Fine! Go play by yourself. I will play soccer,” Jenny shouted. Away she stormed towards the football field, leaving Ella rooted to the spot, a profound sense of sadness and disappointment washing over her. Ella's eyes lingered on Jenny's retreating figure for a while before she trudged slowly towards the playground equipment. Climbing onto the slide, she found herself devoid of the usual enthusiasm. The echoes of their past laughter seemed to reverberate in her ears, yet now she was alone. Meanwhile, on the football field, Jenny launched the ball with forceful kicks, her eyes, however, straying frequently in Ella's direction. It was then that a sense of regret began to gnaw at her for her hasty outburst. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Ella’s face lit up the instant she heard what Jenny said. Approaching Ella, Jenny spoke with sincerity, “Ella, I deeply regret my actions. I was being overly self - centered and failed to take your feelings into account. After all, we're best friends.” Moved by Jenny's heartfelt apology, Ella responded, “I too bear my share of blame. I shouldn't have lost my temper.” With smiles on their faces, they reconciled. They resolved to enjoy the playground equipment first and then engage in a game of soccer together. For the remainder of the day, they immersed themselves in joy, their laughter and energetic running echoing throughout the park, further strengthening the bond of their friendship. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$