2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：少年守信，传递善意与温暖 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 少年守信，传递善意与温暖 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Ten-year-old Sam Evans was a die-hard football fan, and he’d been saving for months to buy his favorite football kit. However, when he reached the store, he discovered that the kit’s price had risen, and the cost was now a few more dollars than what he’d managed to save. Disappointed, Sam almost burst into tears, but just then, he heard a voice from behind, He turned and saw Mr, Barney, his neighbor, holding a shopping bag. “Well, you don't seem okay, young man. Tell me if there’s anything l cab do to help you.” Mr. Barney asked. Sam wiped his tears and approached him, explaining that he had saved money for a football kit, “But when I came today, l saw it was a few dollars more than what I have.” Sam cried. 4 4 续写原文 Mr, Barney, with a warm smile, patted Sam on the head and generously offered to cover the extra cost. However, Sam quickly refused the offer. He explained that his mother was always concerned about him spending too much time playing football and had refused to buy him a new kit. She had also told him never to borrow money from anyone, stressing the importance of depending on himself. Mr. Barney was amused by Sam's honesty. “Well, then how about paying me back right now?” Mr. Barney suggested. “Now?” Sam was puzzled. Mr. Barney explained, “Yes, promise me that you'll pay forward this kindness. That means if you see someone in need, and you have the money, you’ll help them without hesitation, Deal?” “Done, Mr. Barney,” Sam answered joyfully and they went to pay for his football kit. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： After that day, Sam tried different ways to earn money. Paragraph 2： At the store, he noticed an old lady. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 十岁的山姆是个足球迷，攒钱想买心仪的足球装备，却发现钱不够。邻居巴尼先生提出帮忙补齐差价，山姆因妈妈的教导拒绝。巴尼先生提议让山姆承诺日后将善意传递出去来 “偿还”，山姆欣然答应。之后，山姆努力赚钱，不仅想还钱，还想攒钱买新足球。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： After that day, Sam tried different ways to earn money. 自那天之后，山姆想尽各种办法去挣钱。他先是挨家挨户询问邻居是否需要帮忙做些杂活。很快，他就接到了不少活儿，像修剪花草、清扫落叶。每到周末，他还会早早起床，在社区门口摆起旧物售卖摊，将自己不再使用的玩具、书籍整理出来出售。经过长时间的辛苦积攒，他终于凑齐了还给巴尼先生的钱，还额外存了一笔能买新足球的钱。怀着满心的期待，在一个阳光明媚的周末，山姆兴高采烈地前往商店。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：At the store, he noticed an old lady. 走进商店，山姆径直朝着足球区走去。就在他挑选足球时，注意到不远处有一位老奶奶。老奶奶站在玩具区前，手中拿着一个玩具，眉头紧皱，嘴里还小声嘀咕着什么。山姆心生好奇，便走上前去询问。老奶奶无奈地说，她想给孙子买这个玩具当生日礼物，可带的钱不够。山姆听后，脑海中立刻浮现出巴尼先生对他的嘱托。他毫不犹豫地从口袋里掏出钱，递给老奶奶，说道：“奶奶，您用这些钱买吧，希望您孙子能喜欢。” 老奶奶感动得热泪盈眶，对山姆连连道谢。山姆看着老奶奶离去的背影，心中充满了成就感，他知道，自己做到了将善意传递下去。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 After that day, Sam tried different ways to earn money. He began by visiting his neighbors, asking if they needed any help with tasks like trimming hedges or cleaning gutters. Every weekend, he set up a second - hand goods sale in his driveway, selling toys and books he no longer needed. With persistent efforts, he finally managed to save enough money to pay back Mr. Barney and even had some extra for a new football. On a sunny weekend, filled with excitement, Sam made his way to the store. 13 13 范文呈现 At the store, he noticed an old lady. She was standing in the toy section, looking at a toy car with a troubled expression. Sam walked up to her and asked, "Is everything okay, ma'am?" The old lady sighed and said, "I want to buy this toy for my grandson's birthday, but I'm short on money." Remembering his promise to Mr. Barney, Sam didn't hesitate. He took out his wallet and handed some money to the old lady, saying, "Please take this. I hope your grandson loves his gift." The old lady was deeply touched and thanked Sam repeatedly. Watching the old lady leave, Sam felt a great sense of accomplishment, knowing that he had fulfilled his promise to pay forward the kindness. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 After that day, Sam resorted to diverse means to earn money. Starting with approaching his neighbors, he offered his assistance in tasks such as hedge - trimming and gutter - cleaning. On weekends, he transformed his driveway into a second - hand goods sale venue, where he sold toys and books that had outlived their use for him. It was through his unwavering efforts that he finally managed to amass sufficient funds to reimburse Mr. Barney and even had a surplus for a new football. On a radiant weekend, brimming with excitement, Sam made his way to the store. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 At the store, an old lady caught his attention. Standing in the toy section, she was eyeing a toy car with a furrowed brow. Sam stepped forward and inquired, "Is everything all right, ma'am?" With a sigh, the old lady replied, "I'm eager to purchase this toy for my grandson's birthday, yet I'm short on cash." It was at this moment that Sam, mindful of his promise to Mr. Barney, didn't hesitate for a second. Taking out his wallet, he proffered some money to the old lady, stating, "Please accept this. I hope your grandson adores his gift." Deeply moved, the old lady expressed her gratitude profusely. As Sam watched the old lady depart, a profound sense of accomplishment washed over him, for he was well - aware that he had fulfilled his vow to pay forward the kindness he had received. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$