2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从抵触到理解：父亲职业在意外中带来的转变 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从抵触到理解：父亲职业在意外中带来的转变 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 One day, Mrs. Green asked everyone about their dream jobs. The classroom suddenly got filled with eager voices as classmates enthusiastically shared their dreams. “I want to be a college professor,” said Sarah confidently. “I dream of becoming a basketball player,” exclaimed Mike with light in his eye. The air was filled with dreams of doctors, nurses, police and various professions. When Mrs. Green turned her attention to me, inquiring about my future career, I hesitated. “I don’t know yet,” I admitted. Then she asked if I wished to follow in my dad’s footsteps. “No,” I replied firmly. 4 4 续写原文 My dad is a distinguished doctor with a demanding schedule, who often finds himself engaged in the responsibilities of his job. Thus, he often return s home late in the evening. The limited time we spent together during my growth created a noticeable distance in our relationship. I had such a lot to complain about his job and thus being a doctor would be the last option I would take. Upon hearing my response, Mrs. Green remained silent. Instead, she encouraged me to reflect further. 5 5 续写原文 A turning point came when our school organized a cultural festival. It was an important event, and we had been preparing for it for a long time. For my role, I needed to purchase a costume. Unfortunately, my mother was abroad, so the responsibility fell on my father. Unwillingly, I agreed, acknowledging that there was no other choice. In the mall, my dad’s unfamiliarity with the shopping list became apparent. Despite Mom’s thorough list, we wandered aimlessly through the floors, struggling to find the necessary items. As we did, I felt a growing sense of discomfort. Suddenly, a chaos drew our attention. A crowd had gathered, and someone was shouting for help. It turned out that an elderly customer had a fall, and onlookers were at a loss on how to assist. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Without hesitation, my father rushed forward. Paragraph 2： For the first time, I felt a sense of pride in his work. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 课堂上同学们畅谈梦想职业，当老师问 “我” 时，“我” 因父亲医生工作忙碌致亲子时光少而坚决拒绝从医。学校文化节需买服装，母亲不在只能让父亲陪同。在商场父亲对购物清单不熟，两人四处寻找。此时一老人摔倒众人无措，这成为 “我” 对父亲职业态度转变的契机，让 “我” 重新审视父亲的工作。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Without hesitation, my father rushed forward. 父亲毫不犹豫地冲上前去，他迅速来到老人身边，蹲下身子，眼神专注地查看老人的情况。他先用手轻拍老人的肩膀，呼唤着老人，接着仔细地检查老人是否有明显的外伤，同时询问周围人老人摔倒的经过。随后，他镇定地从口袋里掏出手机，拨打了急救电话，并向电话那头详细地描述老人的现状。在等待急救人员的过程中，他不断安抚着周围紧张的人群，告诉大家不要慌乱。他的每一个动作都有条不紊，让我看到了他作为医生的专业素养和冷静果断，这与我平时印象中的忙碌父亲截然不同，我的内心开始有些动摇。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：For the first time, I felt a sense of pride in his work. 在那一刻，我第一次为父亲的工作感到骄傲。当救护车赶到时，父亲站起身来，与医护人员进行了专业的交接，详细地说明了老人的身体状况和他采取的初步措施。医护人员对父亲的处理表示肯定和赞赏，周围的人也纷纷投来敬佩的目光。在回家的路上，我主动和父亲聊起这件事，表达了我对他的敬佩之情，也为自己之前对他工作的误解而感到愧疚。父亲微笑着看着我，语重心长地说每一个职业都有它的意义和价值，希望我能理解。从那以后，我不再抵触医生这个职业，反而开始尝试去了解医学知识，对父亲也多了一份理解和尊重。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Without hesitation, my father rushed forward. He quickly made his way through the crowd and got to the old man's side. Kneeling down, he focused his eyes on examining the old man's condition. First, he gently patted the old man's shoulder and called out to him. Then he carefully checked if there were any obvious injuries on the old man's body and asked the bystanders about how the old man had fallen. After that, he calmly took out his phone and dialed the emergency number, describing the old man's current situation in detail to the person on the other end. While waiting for the ambulance, he kept soothing the nervous crowd around, telling them not to panic. Every move of his was so orderly that I saw his professionalism and calmness as a doctor, which was quite different from the busy father I usually knew. My heart started to change. 14 14 范文呈现 For the first time, I felt a sense of pride in his work. When the ambulance arrived, my father stood up and had a professional handover with the medical staff. He explained the old man's physical condition and the preliminary measures he had taken in detail. The medical staff gave their approval and praise for my father's handling. The people around also cast admiring glances at him. On the way home, I took the initiative to talk to my father about this and expressed my admiration for him. I also felt guilty for my previous misunderstanding of his job. My father smiled at me and said earnestly that every profession has its meaning and value and hoped that I could understand. Since then, I no longer resisted the profession of a doctor. Instead, I started to try to learn medical knowledge and had more understanding and respect for my father. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Without hesitation, my father rushed forward. Swiftly threading through the throng, he reached the elderly's side. Kneeling, his eyes intently probed the man's state. Gently patting, he called out, then meticulously inspected for injuries and queried onlookers. Calmly, he dialed the emergency, detailing the situation. While awaiting the ambulance, he soothed the agitated crowd, exuding an air of authority. His methodical moves revealed a doctor's prowess, shattering my preconceived notions. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 or the first time, I felt a sense of pride in his work. As the ambulance arrived, father rose, engaging in a seamless handover with the medics. His detailed account of the condition and actions won their acclaim. Admiring glances from the crowd showered him. On the way home, I broached the topic, voicing my newfound respect and guilt for past misjudgment. Father's earnest words resonated. Since then, I've embraced medicine, seeking knowledge and deepening my regard for him. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$