2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：艾米丽在画展中面对画作售卖请求的艰难抉择 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 艾米丽在画展中面对画作售卖请求的艰难抉择 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was a warm spring afternoon, and the sun cast a golden hue (色调) over the small town of Willow Creek. The city’s annual art exhibition was going on, and the visitors were discussing the works with excitement. Among them was Emily, a talented artist. She appreciated the pictures with her heart pounding in her chest. Emily had always been passionate about painting since young. Over the years, her talent had bloomed, and her pictures had become a reflection of her soul — full of life and emotion. Each brushstroke (笔画) was a whisper of her thoughts, a secret shared with the world. Today, she exhibited a painting of her grandmother, a woman who had shaped her life with love and care. The painting was a reminder of the impact her grandmother had on her life, a symbol of the bond that would never fade. 4 4 续写原文 As the exhibition continued, Emily watched with nervous anticipation as people moved around the room, admiring various works. Emily searched their faces for a reaction, her heart jumping when she saw a smile or a nod of appreciation. Suddenly, a familiar voice called out, “Emily, this is wonderful! Your grandmother looks so alive on this picture.” It was her art teacher, Mr. Smith, standing before her painting with a look of genuine admiration. His words filled her with a sense of achievement and relief. The rest of the afternoon passed soon. More praises came her way. But it was the elderly man who caught her attention. He stood before her painting for what seemed like a century, his eyes misty with memories. When he finally spoke, his offer took her by surprise. “This painting reminds me so much of my late grandmother. I would like to make you an offer. Would you consider selling this painting to me?” 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： At that moment, Emily hesitated. Paragraph 2： Seeing the man leaving disappointedly, Emily made a new decision. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 在温暖春日的柳树溪镇年度画展上，热爱绘画的艾米丽展出了一幅描绘深爱着她的祖母的画作。画展期间，人们欣赏着作品，艾米丽紧张又期待地观察着大家的反应。她的艺术老师史密斯先生对画作给予了高度赞赏，这让她很有成就感。之后，一位老人长时间凝视画作后，表示因其让自己想起已故祖母而想买下它。这让艾米丽陷入了犹豫，因为这幅画对她有着深厚的情感价值。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： At that moment, Emily hesitated. 艾米丽犹豫之际，脑海中不断浮现出与祖母相处的温馨画面，那是祖母在她小时候教她画画的场景，还有祖母在她失落时给予的温暖拥抱。她深知这幅画承载着太多的情感与回忆。但看着老人那充满渴望的眼神，她又有些于心不忍。于是她走向老人，轻声说道：“先生，这画对我真的很重要，但我能理解您的感受，您能给我讲讲您和您祖母的故事吗？” 老人微微一愣，随后缓缓讲述起那些美好的过往，艾米丽听得入神，心中的天平开始慢慢倾斜。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Seeing the man leaving disappointedly, Emily made a new decision. 看到老人失望地转身欲走，艾米丽的心猛地揪了一下。她突然意识到，也许让这幅画给老人带来慰藉才是更有意义的事。她急忙追上老人，大声说：“先生，您等等！我决定把画卖给您。” 老人惊讶地回过头，眼中满是惊喜与感激。艾米丽接着说：“我希望这幅画能像陪伴我一样，陪伴您度过美好的时光，也让您的回忆有处安放。” 老人紧紧握住艾米丽的手，不停地道谢，艾米丽看着老人开心的样子，心中也涌起一股暖流，她知道自己做了一个正确的决定。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 At that moment, Emily hesitated. Her mind was flooded with the warm memories of her grandmother. She remembered the time when her grandmother patiently taught her how to hold a paintbrush and the countless hugs she received during difficult times. This painting was like a precious treasure chest filled with their shared love. However, seeing the eagerness in the old man's eyes made her heart soften. She walked towards him and said softly, "Sir, this painting means the world to me. But I can sense your strong connection. Could you tell me about your grandmother?" The old man was a bit surprised at first but then started to share his beautiful memories. Emily listened attentively, and her heart began to change. 13 13 范文呈现 Seeing the man leaving disappointedly, Emily made a new decision. She couldn't let the man leave with sadness. She quickly chased after him and shouted, "Sir, wait! I've decided to sell it to you." The old man turned around in astonishment, his eyes full of gratitude. Emily continued, "I hope this painting can bring you the same comfort as it did to me and give your memories a place to stay." The old man held Emily's hand tightly and thanked her repeatedly. Emily felt a warm current in her heart, knowing she had made the right choice. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 At that moment, Emily hesitated. Memories of her grandmother swarmed her mind like a flock of affectionate birds. It was her grandmother who had painstakingly guided her in the art of painting and offered countless hugs in times of distress. The painting was a priceless repository of their love. Yet, the yearning in the old man's eyes tugged at her heartstrings. Approaching him, she murmured, "Sir, this painting is my heart's jewel. But I feel your deep bond. Would you share your grandma's story?" Surprised initially, the old man then recounted his cherished memories. Emily listened intently, her heart swaying. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Seeing the man leaving disappointedly, Emily made a new decision. Unable to bear his dejection, she darted after him. "Sir, wait! I'll sell it to you," she exclaimed. The old man wheeled around, eyes glistening with gratitude. "I hope this painting will be a source of comfort for you, just as it has been for me, and house your memories," Emily added. The old man clasped her hand firmly, thanking her profusely. A warm glow filled Emily's heart, assuring her of her right choice. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$