2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：冲破质疑：追逐歌唱梦想的旅程 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 冲破质疑：追逐歌唱梦想的旅程 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I was sitting at the kitchen table practicing a new song when my grandma cut me off asking, “Why’d you suddenly decide to start singing? Unless you start when you’re four or five, it’s pretty much a hopeless case, you know.” I was fifteen. For years, I knew that I wanted to start taking singing lessons. I brought it up to my mom many times, but my wish was put off endlessly. I had been waiting for so long and was starting to give up hope. After all, my grandma believed me to be completely talentless. 4 4 续写原文 As I started high school, I finally took private singing lessons. Then the voice of doubt kept gradually weakening in my mind. So I made several requests to the choir leader, but I was never accepted. His refusal to my course requests doubled the voice of doubt in me, convincing me that most adults around me agreed with my grandma. My senior year burnt out, I was tired of letting others make decisions for me. So I emailed my adviser. He gave some advice and scheduled a meeting for me. This meeting was my first face-to-face request to be put into choir. 5 5 续写原文 “Are you sure you want to quit from academic group to fit choir into your schedule? I’m not sure that it’s the best decision now.” “I’ve wanted to join choir for years now.” That day, I got the opportunity to be interviewed for the school choir. The interviewer was a serious, old man. I worried he would hold the same opinion as my grandma. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： I stood in the vast band room, blinded by the bright lighting. Paragraph 2：After I finished singing, the interviewer said, “You are in. I’ll see you Monday then! ” 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 15 岁的 “我” 热爱唱歌，向母亲多次提出上声乐课的请求却被搁置，奶奶也认为 “我” 没天赋。高中时 “我” 终于上了声乐课，可合唱团团长多次拒绝 “我” 的入团请求。高三时，“我” 不再听任他人决定，主动联系导师，争取到面试机会。面对严肃的面试官，“我” 的歌唱之路将迎来怎样的转折？ 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I stood in the vast band room, blinded by the bright lighting. 我站在宽敞的音乐教室里，明亮的灯光晃得我有些睁不开眼。强烈的聚光灯直直地打在身上，让我感觉像是站在舞台中央，成为众人瞩目的焦点。此时，我的心在胸腔里剧烈地跳动着，仿佛要冲破胸膛。我深吸一口气，努力让自己镇定下来，随后，我开启了我的演唱。每一个音符，都饱含着我多年来对唱歌的热爱与执着，那是我灵魂深处最真挚的情感表达。歌声在教室里回荡，我沉浸其中，仿佛忘却了所有曾经的质疑与拒绝。我尽情地展现自己，将所有的期待都倾注在这一首歌里。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：After I finished singing, the interviewer said, “You are in. I’ll see you Monday then! ” 一曲唱罢，面试官说道：“你被录取了，周一见！” 听到这句话，我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。一时间，惊喜和激动涌上心头，嘴角不自觉地上扬，露出了灿烂的笑容。多年来，那些等待、那些坚持、那些被质疑的痛苦，此刻都化作了幸福的泪水。我如释重负，多年的梦想终于成真。我迫不及待地跑出教室，想要第一时间把这个好消息告诉身边的人。从这一刻起，我深知，只要勇敢地追随自己的内心，坚持不懈地努力，就一定能迎来美好的未来。而我，也将在歌唱这条道路上，勇敢地走下去，用歌声书写属于自己的精彩篇章。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I stood in the spacious band room, where the bright lighting made me blink uncomfortably. The strong spotlight shone directly on me, making me feel like I was on a grand stage, the center of everyone's attention. At that moment, my heart was pounding violently in my chest, as if it was about to burst out. I took a deep breath, trying to calm myself down. Then, I started to sing. Every note was filled with my deep - rooted passion for singing over the years. It was the most sincere expression of my innermost feelings. The sound of my singing echoed in the room, and I was so immersed in it that I seemed to forget all the previous doubts and rejections. I gave my all to show myself, pouring all my expectations into this one song. 14 14 范文呈现 After I finished singing, the interviewer said, "You are in. I'll see you Monday then!" I could hardly believe my ears. At that moment, surprise and excitement welled up in my heart. A broad smile spread across my face unconsciously. Over the years, all the waiting, perseverance, and the pain of being questioned had now turned into happy tears. I felt a great sense of relief, and my long - cherished dream had finally come true. I couldn't wait to run out of the room to share this good news with everyone around me. From this moment on, I deeply understood that as long as I bravely followed my heart and persevered in my efforts, I would surely embrace a wonderful future. And I would bravely continue on this singing journey, using my voice to write a magnificent chapter of my own. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Standing in the expansive band room, I was momentarily blinded by the intense glare of the bright lighting. The powerful spotlight bore down on me, as if thrusting me onto the center stage of a colossal auditorium, the cynosure of all eyes. At that instant, my heart thundered within my chest, threatening to break free. Taking a deep, steadying breath, I summoned the courage to begin. Each note I sang was a vessel brimming with my long - standing ardor for singing, a distilled essence of my innermost emotions. The melody reverberated throughout the room, cocooning me in a world where all past doubts and rejections evaporated into oblivion. I poured my entire being into that performance, infusing every ounce of my hope and anticipation into the lyrics. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Upon the conclusion of my song, the interviewer's voice cut through the silence: "You are in. I'll see you Monday then!" Those words seemed almost too good to be true. A wave of incredulous joy surged through me, and an involuntary grin spread across my face. Years of waiting, struggling against the odds, and enduring the sting of doubt had finally culminated in this moment of elation. A profound sense of relief washed over me, as if a heavy burden had been lifted from my shoulders. Without hesitation, I bolted out of the room, eager to share this life - changing news with my loved ones. From that moment forward, I was resolute in my belief that following my heart's desires and persevering through adversity could unlock the door to a future filled with limitless possibilities. And I was ready to embark on this musical odyssey, using my voice as a brush to paint a vibrant canvas of my dreams. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$